Read my writing...please? discussion
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Can you please visit this link and read it; especially the description first because it tells all about the Chapter and also why I need your help.
Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I'll be honest, it's long, but I'd appreciate it so, so, so , so freakin much if you actually do read it and tell me your thoughts and opinion after reading the question in the description! Thanks so, so, so, yeah, a lot, in advance... if you're actually gonna click on the link and read it!
Oh, and you know, I won't mind if you decide to read any of my other short chapters of other stories, or the other 2 poems I got up there recently... :P
I'm not really sure what genre I should put my writing into. so here seems good. I'm really looking for people to please give a read of what I've posted and give me some feedback. Good or bad. I don't care. So long as it's constructive. I want to improve. Thanks in advance!