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message 151: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Polls are the answer to everything :)


message 152: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
I know. they are. u make it. Eric is ur charrie


message 153: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Done


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Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
okay


message 155: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments being democratic is awesome..
personally, i think its a pretty good idea. not in an *AMAZING IDEA!!!!* way. more in a 'makes sense and gives things a more realistic feel' way


message 156: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Same here. :D


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Siareen | 1412 comments so about the rebellion- do they tell everyone? how long does it last? when does the prince/ ambassador start to notice? didnt the prince come with bodyguards and servants or something? how long into the rebellion does he die?


message 158: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
They tell the people of consequence- like the parents and obviously not Eliran. I don't think that they should notice for a while- after all, the 2 haven't been on the mountain long- maybe they think that's how things normally are.

I'd say not very long into it if we want to keep it moving. Maybe we could skip ahead a week or so- like half-way into Oshri's recovery or something. And like have Fayven ready to leave and have the girl chosen, but him being to sick to travel. Maybe have him die on the mountain?


message 159: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid That sounds good. good.


message 160: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments yup. i think that works. how about we finish them starting the rebellion- refusing to go to the academy etc, and then skip, say, about a month when the prince is desperate to leave but feeling too sick, like you said.


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Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
Sound good to me. Lets see what Hannah thinks first (even though I have a feeling she'll like it) before we go on- since she IS a mod now.


message 162: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments lol. yup. Mods DO have to get SOME rights!


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Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
Hahah, Of course, I get the official power, but since I can't always be on, I need Deputy Mods to take care of things. :)


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Siareen | 1412 comments hehe being head Mod is always cool :)


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Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
It is. But sometimes I hate it cause you occasionally have to send out warnings and maybe delete the group if it died and you can't bring it back.


message 166: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
I'm here. I missed a bunch of stuff since I was busy yeterday. :D hehe...

Okay....let's see...so they tell trusted people on the intended result...then when the girls are called to the Academy the refuse? Or we skip ahead?

Well if we skip ahead...skip to what? Skip to like a month into the rebellion? I think I'm a little confuzzled...IS the rebellion gonna be all out fighting? What kind of rebellion. I think I might not be following the plan well. :D

but I think I like what I'm reading. :D


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Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
It's not gonna start out as fighting- and besides, the mountainers don't have weapons other then their tools. But I'm thinking jump to a bit into the Rebellion so that we can show that things didn't just change overnight- and Fayven's illness isn't supposed to progress that quickly anyways.


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Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Jump into the rebellion as in slowly like revolt against the academy?


message 169: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
Yeah, just small things and then when we do our time-jump we can make it a full-out rebellion


message 170: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Okay.
Argh. Now I need to decide which side Eric fights for.


message 171: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
DOuble agent? Or mountain? He does like the mountain more then most lowlanders


message 172: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Gotcha...

Ditto


message 173: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid It is true.
But he does love his friend and the royal family as well.
Okay.
I'm changing something. Hannah, don't be creeped out.
Eric is NOT the royal cousin. He is just a noble boy who lived at court.

He likes Fay. A lot.


message 174: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
...that's kinda creepy. But I like it. :) lolz


message 175: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid I know that it is creepy.
*Misery*
But it adds more conflict to his loyalties.


message 176: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
It does- it also makes it harder to decide which side he's gonna be on.


message 177: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Okay. I shall try not to show anything. So u don't know if I'm creeped or not. :D

Sure. that's fine


message 178: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid He is divided.
I'll try not to creep you out.
Though, I will admit, I have creeped myself out.
But it is no longer my choice. Sometimes charries will do that. Eric just did. He just informed me that I have no clue as to what is going on in his brain and that he knows how he wants his story to go.
*Sigh*
He is so stubborn.


message 179: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
nice and weird at the same time


message 180: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Your characters never do that?


message 181: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments mine do :) i know exactly what you mean...
a good author sets their characters scenarios and lets the characters work their own way out of it.
you know you have managed to make a good charrie when they have a mind of their own and you make them do things because thats what feels right, and not because thats what you want to happen :D


message 182: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid Then I have way too many good characters.
*Glares at the girl in her head.* You know who you are.


message 183: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Way-chan (Aspiring Author) wrote: "Your characters never do that?"

Oh yes they do. :D


message 184: by [deleted user] (new)

haha yeah after a while good characters just sorta speak for themselves


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Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
lol


message 186: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments ok, so how is the rebellion going to work?
maybe Fay dies and the king finds out and thinks the mountain people killed him and sends armies against them. i have the feeling we already decided something like that....
in the meantime though, what do they do?


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Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
Okay. Maybe the King should already be dead but they don't know. So Fay is obviously mad. And his soldiers are at his command. So they try to take control of the town. Most of the families try to stay safe, and leave? to the old abandoned mine that the Danland people don't know about? Then those youth and men who are going to fight stay behind? Maybe something like that? Okay, Karri and Oshri could be at HQ or something.


message 188: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments it woudl be more interesting if the king didnt die.
fay could try take over the town like you said, but then the sickness takes him and he dies. [unless you really dont want him to die ;) ]
the king hears his son is dead, comes up to the mountain because he thinks they killed him. they the king is attacking the mountain people, and he actually knows what he is doing so they dont really stand a chance.
then Oshri can come out and try to stop him or something and it might or might not work...

the rest sounds good though....


message 189: by [deleted user] (new)

that all sounds pretty good to me haha


message 190: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
hmmmmmmm yeah I see your point sia.
um well I want him to die. :D I can't wait for the death.

ooho. that's new. Sure I think that sounds good


message 191: by Rebekah Faith, The worst mod in the world (new)

Rebekah Faith (musicalradiance) | 1480 comments Mod
Hannah, you sound so morbid there. XD lolz.

Sia- sounds great!


message 192: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
I really do don't I! :D


message 193: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1412 comments lol. well, you want your charrie to die. its funny how you always seem to be making side characters that turn into real ones Hannah :)


message 194: by Hannah, Bek and Red are depressing: BEST mod ever. (new)

Hannah | 2744 comments Mod
I know it's bizarre.... :D


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