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Ooh, I like her. Might be useful ;)
I hope so.
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Zetri looks amazing Alicia, however perhaps I could suggest a few small changes?First off this isn't really about supernaturals, but that doesn't mean that supernatural elements are a no no. Zetri is a seductress that's excellent, but here's the thing, she may abilities that make her similar to the succubus or horror, but her abilities are based on a genetic reason.
For seduction she can have pheromonal control, or she could have the ability or verbal persuasion
As for her need to drain the life force of the gifted, she could have some rare genetic disease that requires her to steal life essence by touching not just gifted but anyone else. Her 'life touch can allow her to heal rapidly, and retain her youth coz after all aging is basically the human body wearing out isn't it.
What do you think?
Err. Well umm if I guess I would rather have her seduction be more peruasive than anything.I don't want her to have to touch them to take their force. It should just be her presence drains them.Then if she steals life force from any person the power she gains should increase greatly and even more if she has sex with them. I think taking life force from those surrounding her is what would keep he body from aging. Taking from them keeps her healed and young.
Better?
Ahh yeah that makes perfect sense, sorry wasn't cramping your style or anything, just my opinion on her:)
Oh no it's fine. I'm grateful for your honesty. Oh I realized I messed up. The power she gains should increase greatly with gifted or with sex.
ooh lol what if she has sex with a gifted person, that'd be like a shot of Red Bull or something :p
Hahaha. Oh yes. The gifted would probably come out weak and her more powerful than ever(; heh. This may just have to happen with pour Xavier
But I mean they wouldn't die would they, It'd be interesting and tragic if, before she learned to use her powers she accidentally killed her boyfriend or something
Mm, no I don't think she kills them. But I think I could arrange that though. Killing her boyfriend and all. Sounds good.
Sounds good? Why you evil little thing:p but I guess it's just the sort of mistake a gifted would make at the beginning not having control over their powers
Heh. Guess so. lol. Yeah, that could have possibly explained why she's such a bad ass. Killing her boyfriend made her hard, but still left with a little kindness.
It would also make her a bit insecure, I mean how would it feel like to accidentally kill the one you love? I'm betting she's come to terms with her 'curse', but she's still kinda scared to use it coz she really doesn't want to kill another person if she can help it.
Oh good point. A hidden insecurity. But it would take a lot for her to admit it to anyone else. This would also force her to distance herself from most people and to have extreme self control, making sure she doesn't go too far with someone, and accidentally kill them.
lol would you care to fill me on what's going on in the main rp? I come on once a day and I see a shedload of posts:p
No problem. Hold on a second kay.
Okay, so I think this is basically what you missed:Xavier is trying to talk himself out of being hurt anymore. He suggested that the 'gifted' take him with them so they couldn't be tracked. There was a little argument over what to do. Elise says they should keep him, Nick and Jordan disagree with that. Going with the enemey couldn't be the best thing? Or could it? So far no decision has been made, since we are waiting for other people. Zetri began asking questions to Xavier getting information about what's going on. Xavier clearly has a crush on her. Amy fills Zetri in a little, and Merrie asks if he knows who is following her. And we are waiting for the answers.
I don't really know if you want to know about Israel and Alexandria, but Alexandria slipped showing she read his mind. Israel is seriously pissed. She said she would explain it all to him.
Oh ok has anyone found out why the frig he randomly attacked us?
Xavier claims he is doing it for his boss, Raoul, who is also like a father to him. Apparently he does everything Raoul demands.
Hmm but does anyone know anything about this Raoul? I guess Seven would ask:)
Hm, no not really. Xavier hasn't said too much about him, only that little bit when Zetri asked.
I'm assuming that Xavier isn't available for comment just yet so I guess I'll just keep Seven quiet coz well Zetri is asking the questions.
Yeah, he currently has 3 people to answer to. Hm, but I'll have Zetri question him further about the mysterious Raoul.
So uh how many peeps are actually at our little scene?Seven, Amy, Cat, Vi'tra, Zetri and Xavier of course, and then the De Laurentis twins, anyone else?
Merrie, Waterfall's new human character.
and what're they doing, if you don't mind being my eyes for a bit:p
haha. No problem. Nothing better to do now, and I'm on often anyways.
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I feel like making a new character.
Then please do Susan,what was your characters name btw?
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Gender: Female
Age: ERm... 17ish?
Personality: She's really nice at first and knows how to be polite, but rarely is. To the rest of the resistance she's bossy, and hates getting talked back to. She feels like she has to be the toughest out there in order for the resistance to survive.
Appearance: She's really thin and quite short, with short brown hair and big green eyes. Often has a determined look on her face. I was thinking something like this, but not exactly: http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2259/1...
But then I found this one, and can't decide which one I like better. http://www.hairstylepictureshairstyle...
Relationships: She ran away from home about a year ago and has been with the resistance ever since. She considers them her family.
Hometown: Irvine, California
Occupation: Part of the resistance, works at a fast food place when money gets too tight.
Powers: She has super-strength, thanks to her bones and muscles being made from some unknown substance that is both light and hard as diamond. This fact also makes her a lot faster than the average human being, and she heals way faster as well, cuts and stuff are easy and her bones are almost impossible to break. (My failed attempt at sounding smart. :D)) However, she's extremely vulnerable to sicknesses and stuff, and also elementals.
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Wolfie this is for you(:So you wanted to know more about Raoul right. Well we did find out a little more. He doesn't work for anybody, people work for him. He has the gift to detect powers. He took Xavier in as a young child when Xavier's dad died. Raoul's plan is to take the powers from the gifted, and in turn giving them to himself so he can be the most powerful person. Cliche, yes. But that's his motive.
As for what else you missed well, there was a lot of dispute going on about Amy's abilities. Her and Zetri were fighting began arguing again. Amy is convinced Xavier is hiding something else. Zetri is just pissed off at Amy for reading her mind and for acting controlling. Xavier was a little mad at their arguing. They stopped for a second and began again. Zetri slapped Amy for using her powers to shut her up. They don't like each other. Well there's not many who Zetri likes.
Update: (a little more happen after I posted that:P )Well, Amy got tired of Zetri's mouth an attitude after Zetri said she would be nothing without her powers. Then Amy said with her powers Zetri was nothing. Zetri called her a coward for fighting against somebody who didn't have powers to defend herself. Amy kicked Zetri in the face. Then there was an epic battle between the two. Er, so far nobody has really won. They are still fighting. As of this moment, Zetri has pinned Amy, may I say in a super short dress also. Lol.
Many thanks Alicia, I hope what Seven just did isn't considered god modding, and if it is I apologise and will edit it accordingly, but well I just thought we needed some perspective and we all just seemed to be standing around in broad daylight discussing stuff:pI love the detail about Raoul, I initially had that idea for the CEO of The Office, one of his motivations for collecting the gifted was to find ways of endowing himself, a human with metahuman abilities.
The fact that this Raoul is not with the Office also introduces another possible antagonist for what will hopefully turn out to be our band of heroes. As you can see there is an organized resistance to the Office but at the moment most of our characters are quite new to why they are receiving so much attention , and new to their powers.
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Age: ERm... 17ish?
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Hey Falls I love what you've done with Aria,neither of those girls look particularly badass, but that's the ilusion, that she doesn't look like much but she's one touch cookie, I was wondering if you wanted to make a slight change, say that her bones are made out of an unidentified allow, that is both unbreakable but also lightweight, we can create a fictional metal like adamantium or something, anything goes in this world:) Maybe she should have some self-healing or invulnerability to complement? Just some ideas I thought I'd throw in:)
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*Raises hand* May I also make a traitor character? I got an epiphany.
Hey, Falls :). You can make whatever character you like. I like the idea of a traitor character ;).
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Gender: Male
Age: 24
Personality: Later, gotta go now.
Appearance: Also later.
Relationships: He is the youngest child, all his siblings are married and have kids and are living their own lives. His mother was Gifted, too-she could turn invisible and sneak well-but died a few years back.
Hometown: Palmyra, New York
Occupation: Works for the resistance, brings in new recruits a lot.
Powers: He can copy people's powers for a limited amount of time, if that person is in, say, a quarter mile radius, he can still copy them, although it's a weaker version the farther away from them he gets. While copying their power he can also defend their power perfectly, which comes in handy. However, he can only copy/defend against one power at a time, although he can switch instantly. He's virtually unstoppable on single battles, but if he's outnumbered it gets really hard.
Other: He's really a spy for the Office, but hides himself seamlessly because of his ability to defend against powers.
Inspiration!Name: Sylvia
Gender: f
Age: 13
Personality: Extremely childish, verry shy, and verry curious. She wants to know about how things work, and she likes to learn new things. She acts a little younger than she is, but she is verry smart and nice when you get to know her.
Apperence: Silver hair-side effect of the powers- that she keeps in a braid or ponytail. Her eyes are icy blue, and her skin is pale. She's short for her age, barely 4"6, and is verry slender and lean. She looks almost 10, and uses that to her advantage.
Relationships: Her parents died in a car crash, no siblings.
Hometown: LA
Occupation: student
Powers: She's able to almost dissapear in a crowd. She's as silent as a cat, and although she looks different, she blends with crowds easily. Also, she can steal information and knock you out with a single touch, which gives her information and energy.
Other: She gets really close to a person if she likes them, and acts like the closest sister.
Grr, I'm currently debating one two things at the moment. Actually 3. 1. Should my character have lightening touch or Silver tongue?
2. Should I name him Esteban, since I really want to have a character named that, well actually I would want a donkey named that, but that is beside the point.
3. Should his name be Ian, since that name, along with Esteban, seems to be stuck in my head?
1. He can have both since the characters can have up to three :).
2. Most definitely.
3. Name him Esteban Ian or Ian Esteban ;).
2. Most definitely.
3. Name him Esteban Ian or Ian Esteban ;).
yeah, that souunds like a pretty cool name, i have no clue what those powers are though
I would imagine Silver Tongue would have to do with persuasion (but correct me if I'm wrong, Alicia), and lightning touch seems pretty straightforward :).
1. Hm, that may work.2. hehe. I doubt a donkey would be useful in this rp though...
3. Possibly an alias. Since he will most likely be for the resistance.
That sounds great, Alicia :).
yeah awesome
I will eventually create him... eventually.
to the rp till then? i just made a charrie
Gender: F
Age: 18 forever... Explained below(:
Personality: She is the ultimate seductress. She isn't afraid to show off her body. Modesty is not what one of her traits, well, at least not till she received her gift/curse. She does what she must, in order to survive.
Zetri has a very kind nature, but there's also a feisty side to her. The side that shows most often is the harsh, feisty one. She reserves the kindness for few, considering she doesn't want to attach herself to anyone. Once she attaches herself to someone she puts them in danger, of killing them, on accident.
She is very sarcastic and witty. She'll always have a response to all that everyone does. Her reasons for doing things are specific. She's incredibly devious, and a great liar and actress. Zetri loves to have fun more than anything though. Even if that includes putting herself in danger. Although her inner kindness allows her to not put anyone else in danger.
Appearance: http://img.listal.com/image/1084498/9...
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa...
she has markings on her back, showing that she is a succubus, when her powers grow so does the tattoo
Relationships: Her mom was a succubus who eventually killed her father because of her overpowering nature. Her father was a gifted. After killing her husband, Zetri's mother killed herself. Luckily, Zetri was at an age where she could care for herself. She's been on her own since, going from guy to guy. She's had lots and lots of boyfriends, and lovers. Nothing to serious. She saw what happen to her mother and father and decided that would not happen to her. Ever.
Hometown: Zetri is from Venice beach California. She has done a lot of traveling though, but for some reason keeps coming back to her hometown.
Occupation: Zetri doesn't have any occupation, although she really loves fashion. She has her own little boutique in Venice, but she doesn't count that as a profession. It's more of a hobby than anything, designing clothes and all.
Powers: Well she's a succubus. That means she has seducing powers that she can turn on and off at the drop of the hat. But coming with being a succubus she draws energy from the people she is with, especially men, especially gifted. This weakens their powers and increases her life line.
Zetri virtually doesn't age, well as long as she continues drawing energy from the people around her. She is only 18 though, and will probably be for the rest of her lifetime. Most likely she won't age anymore. Most likely... Having this aging power also allows her to look different ages. But she's never had to really use that, except when out clubbing or something of that nature.
Other: Zetri inherited his power and her mom's succubus nature. She also inherited a large sum of money from their death. Like really large. Allowing her to have estates all over the world.