Hanul's Writting

[C]

Hmm... well judging by it's length I would call this a prologue. Really intriguing beginning here Hanul! I'd love to see more :D

[Eve]

That was awesome! I can't wait to hear more! Yeah, prologue is good

[Amina]

I really like this, u described the scene very well. Very concise but deep :) keep going!

[Miriam]

I really like this. Definitely keep going!