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Contests! > Contest 3: Poem about a VA character

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♫Rose4ever♫ ~ Katerina  Mikhailov  ~    (Team Dimitri/Gale/Jace) OMG i want to try this out!!!!!too bad im not the best peom person!!!!!! :)


message 2: by Sebastian (new)

Sebastian (ChristianOzera) | 589 comments oh noe D: I SUK AT POEMS!


message 3: by Bronwyn (new)

Bronwyn  (naturallyredandright) | 594 comments i will try?


message 4: by Aleisha (new)

Aleisha  Murphy | 35 comments Yay ! I'll probably suck but I'll have a go .^_^.


message 5: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 21, 2010 03:04AM) (new)

Mine will suck but I'll have a go! :p


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, this is mine. It's short though :S

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


~iMoiselleChanel~ (imoisellechanel) Rose wrote: "As you can see, it's really short, but I think I did pretty good. What do you guys think? I like it. How do you guys like it?"

That was a really good one!
Not sure if I can do one, it will take time for me to come up with something


message 8: by Lexi (new)

Lexi (theonecalledwhatsername) | 3 comments yea im going to write one but idk if it'll b any good...producing good writing takes time haha


message 9: by Kristin (last edited Sep 25, 2010 04:41PM) (new)

Kristin (ily_123) | 709 comments "The Blessing"
A face of beauty, as soft as angel's and hard as a God.
the rumble of his voice makes her shiver
the touch of his hands make her quiver
his chocolate eyes show much light
She touches him and says
"Dimitri...."

I winged it O3O


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

How do people vote?


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh okay, cool.


message 12: by Aleisha (new)

Aleisha  Murphy | 35 comments Rose wrote: "As you can see, it's really short, but I think I did pretty good. What do you guys think? I like it. How do you guys like it?"

I Like It:D It's Short Butt reallly GooodXD


message 13: by Aleisha (new)

Aleisha  Murphy | 35 comments I Think I'm Gonna Have A Go
And Put A Poem In Even
Though It'll Probably Be
Crap! Soooo, Sorry people if
It Is,, Bahhahaha:D


~iMoiselleChanel~ (imoisellechanel) we are our own toughest critics lol


message 15: by Aleisha (new)

Aleisha  Murphy | 35 comments Bahahahaha Very Truee I Guess:)


Jean Valjean (OG 2010) (courfeyrack) Oh man. I'm really really bad at poems..


message 17: by Bronwyn (new)

Bronwyn  (naturallyredandright) | 594 comments me too, nor do i have the time to make a good one.


message 18: by Lexi (new)

Lexi (theonecalledwhatsername) | 3 comments haha im probably going to wing this one


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) Her love

A true god, no pun intended
dark brown eyes, so dark, it's easy to be lost in them
a voice that she could detect, if he were talking to her gravestone
a touch so magicle, it's like being born again.
Is it even possible to have someone like this to love? Not when your name is...

Dimitri Belikov

I hope you guys like it!!! I might add on...


♫Rose4ever♫ ~ Katerina  Mikhailov  ~    (Team Dimitri/Gale/Jace) OMG that is great silver!!!!!!


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) Really? You mean it?


♫Rose4ever♫ ~ Katerina  Mikhailov  ~    (Team Dimitri/Gale/Jace) YES I MEAN IT WHY WOULDNT I!!!!!!!!!!!!!


♫Rose4ever♫ ~ Katerina  Mikhailov  ~    (Team Dimitri/Gale/Jace) do u know that makes u sound like some great person at poetry!!!


message 24: by Bronwyn (new)

Bronwyn  (naturallyredandright) | 594 comments haha yah i especially like the "a voice that she could detect, if he were talking to her gravestone"


message 25: by Lexi (new)

Lexi (theonecalledwhatsername) | 3 comments i like that line too


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) Thanks you guys!!!!!!!! I worked really hard on it!! *starts blushing* oh great!!


message 27: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments yea it was cool *sighs* Dimitri Belikov..


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) *sigh* yeah...


message 29: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments lol...


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) Silverfur- (I love Edward!!!!!!) wrote: "Her love

A true god, no pun intended
dark brown eyes, so dark, it's easy to be lost in them
a voice that she could detect, if he
were talking to her gravestone
a touch so magicle, it's like b..."


I love my poem!!!!!! I worked so hard on it!!!!!!!!


message 31: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
ok, i can see that im going to have to enter, even if my poetry sucks really badly


message 32: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
Title: Can I forgive myself?

can i forgive myself?
i have done such wrong
i don't deserve this
i don't deserve her
she deserves better

can i forgive myself?
i am a monster
i can not forget
what i have done
what i wanted to do

can i forgive myself?
i know she has
i don't want to hurt her
but i already have
can i resist her?

can i forgive myself?
maybe i can
i am afriad
afriad of loosing her
i need to forgive myself

~Dimitri Belikov


message 33: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments wohooo!!!!! go Dimitrilover! That. Is. Amazing!


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) Dimitrilover/TeamDimka/Mrs.Belikov wrote: "Title: Can I forgive myself?

can i forgive myself?
i have done such wrong
i don't deserve this
i don't deserve her
she deserves better
can i forgive myself?
i am a monster
i can not fo..."


I love it!!! It's a lot better than mine! Dangit!! Lol


message 35: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
wow ((shockedness)) thanks


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) You're welcome


message 37: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
:D i feel welcomed


message 39: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments huh...


message 41: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments huh?


message 42: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
-confusion-


message 43: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments duh..


message 44: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments helo...


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) She doesn't know lol. Do u like mine ragen????


message 46: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
CONFUSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 47: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments ikr!!!!!


message 48: by Flameholly161, the biggest dimitri fan in the world <3 (new)

Flameholly161 | 657 comments Mod
yeah


message 49: by Skye (new)

Skye Scarlett (Skye_Zary) | 905 comments soo... i'm bored...


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