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Contest 3: Poem about a VA character
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♫Rose4ever♫ ~ Katerina Mikhailov ~
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Sep 20, 2010 05:14PM
OMG i want to try this out!!!!!too bad im not the best peom person!!!!!! :)
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Yay ! I'll probably suck but I'll have a go .^_^.
Mine will suck but I'll have a go! :p
Rose wrote: "As you can see, it's really short, but I think I did pretty good. What do you guys think? I like it. How do you guys like it?"That was a really good one!
Not sure if I can do one, it will take time for me to come up with something
yea im going to write one but idk if it'll b any good...producing good writing takes time haha
"The Blessing"A face of beauty, as soft as angel's and hard as a God.
the rumble of his voice makes her shiver
the touch of his hands make her quiver
his chocolate eyes show much light
She touches him and says
"Dimitri...."
I winged it O3O
Rose wrote: "As you can see, it's really short, but I think I did pretty good. What do you guys think? I like it. How do you guys like it?"I Like It:D It's Short Butt reallly GooodXD
I Think I'm Gonna Have A GoAnd Put A Poem In Even
Though It'll Probably Be
Crap! Soooo, Sorry people if
It Is,, Bahhahaha:D
we are our own toughest critics lol
Oh man. I'm really really bad at poems..
me too, nor do i have the time to make a good one.
Her love A true god, no pun intended
dark brown eyes, so dark, it's easy to be lost in them
a voice that she could detect, if he were talking to her gravestone
a touch so magicle, it's like being born again.
Is it even possible to have someone like this to love? Not when your name is...
Dimitri Belikov
I hope you guys like it!!! I might add on...
OMG that is great silver!!!!!!
Really? You mean it?
YES I MEAN IT WHY WOULDNT I!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do u know that makes u sound like some great person at poetry!!!
haha yah i especially like the "a voice that she could detect, if he were talking to her gravestone"
Thanks you guys!!!!!!!! I worked really hard on it!! *starts blushing* oh great!!
yea it was cool *sighs* Dimitri Belikov..
*sigh* yeah...
Silverfur- (I love Edward!!!!!!) wrote: "Her love A true god, no pun intended
dark brown eyes, so dark, it's easy to be lost in them
a voice that she could detect, if he
were talking to her gravestone
a touch so magicle, it's like b..."
I love my poem!!!!!! I worked so hard on it!!!!!!!!
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can i forgive myself?
i have done such wrong
i don't deserve this
i don't deserve her
she deserves better
can i forgive myself?
i am a monster
i can not forget
what i have done
what i wanted to do
can i forgive myself?
i know she has
i don't want to hurt her
but i already have
can i resist her?
can i forgive myself?
maybe i can
i am afriad
afriad of loosing her
i need to forgive myself
~Dimitri Belikov
wohooo!!!!! go Dimitrilover! That. Is. Amazing!
Dimitrilover/TeamDimka/Mrs.Belikov wrote: "Title: Can I forgive myself?can i forgive myself?
i have done such wrong
i don't deserve this
i don't deserve her
she deserves better
can i forgive myself?
i am a monster
i can not fo..."
I love it!!! It's a lot better than mine! Dangit!! Lol
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You're welcome
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She doesn't know lol. Do u like mine ragen????
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