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message 301: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Alice: It's taped in my locker. If you show me where the rooms are I can just find them myself.


message 302: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Hayden: Well, where's your locker?
Inside Hayden's mind: Jake will want to know for when he writes 'Loser' on it..


message 303: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Alice: Number 94. Top.
Action: She walks over to it and points at it unenthusiastically.


message 304: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: We should do this in a roleplay-ish kind of way.


message 305: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: Oooh! We should. That'd be a lot easier. Then we could take the parts and rewrite them with our respective characters. But I like what we have so far. So we should keep it.


message 306: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: Yes. Just add it in. :D


message 307: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: Okey day. *moves*


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Divya: SHREYA WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING AT TWO THIRTY IN THE MORNING
Shreya: Jetlag.
Divya: Am I going to get it once we get to Canada?
Shreya: OOOH! New idea!
Divya: RAWR.


message 309: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 16, 2011 12:30PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: Guys just talk already! It's not that hard!
Divya: *laughs* Easy for you to say. You're RHEA.
Ravi: True.
Rhea: What's wrong with me? SHREYA! WHAT HAVE YOU MADE ME INTO?
Shreya: Calm down. You're just talkative.
Divya: Thanks. I was enjoying keeping her in oblivion for once.
Shreya: Uh - that's never going to happen. She's too smart for that.
Divya: Thanks a LOT.

Shreya: *reading Parvana's Journey* OH. MY. GOD. DIVYA, YOU ARE JUST LIKE PARVANA!
Divya: GIMME THAT! *grabs book*
Rohan: Grabbing isn't nice, Divya.
Ravi: Don't force kindergarten ideas on her...or else...
Shreya: Oh no, that's not how she's supposed to turn out! I'm going to change her around.
Ravi: YES! YOU SAVED US!


message 310: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily: Hello, Sheldon. I haven't talked to you in like, forever.

Sheldon: ...

Emily: =(


message 311: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: *sigh* Can I pleaaase sleep?
Hayden: Nope.


message 312: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: Poor Emmie. D:


message 313: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily: So, Sheldon, your a computer nerd right?

Sheldon: *SSSQQQUUUEEEAAALLL*

Emily: *falls out of chair*


message 314: by Julian (last edited Jan 16, 2011 08:25PM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: EMILY! *tackles*
Hayden: EMILY! *hug*


message 315: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily: EMMIE! MY DAUGHTER! *glomps*

Sheldon: *stares* Alright, I guess it's not about me anymore.


message 316: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: MOTHER! I MISSED YOU! *glomps back*
Hayden: Gee. Thanks, Em.


message 317: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: *can't stop laughing* Emily, you are so mean.


message 318: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily: And why am I mean?

Sheldon: Because you ignored me.

Emily: Well, at least I actually talk to you. I never talk to any of my other characters.

Sheldon: Oh, I guess your right....


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: Emily was ignoring you? That's not very nice!
Divya: *facepalm* Stop getting into other people's business!
Samantha: Shreya! Who are these guys!?
Shreya: Oh, great. Now I'm going to have two sets of chracters bothering me.
Rhea: You mean you have characters other than me? I thought you loved me!
Shreya: I do love you. You're impossible not to love.
Divya: *headwall*
Ravi: Divya, stop hitting your head before you damage it and go crazy.
Shreya: Psh. She's already crazy.
Divya: Oh, shush.


message 320: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Sheldon: *whispering* Why are they talking about you?

Emily: *pats Sheldon's head* Nothing, nothing....


message 321: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 17, 2011 03:53PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: So you're Sheldon? HI! I'm Rhea and I'm five years old!
Divya: Erm...yeah. This is my sister. And I'm Divya.
Shreya: These are my characters. I'm their insanely crazy writer.
Ravi: Ya got that right.
Shreya: Oh, shush.
Anjali: Guys, don't argue in front of Sheldon and Emily.
Rohan: You can't stop them from arguing.
Anjali: True dat.
Shreya: What, do you think Sheldon's CUTE or something?
Anjali: *facepalm* NO I DO NOT!
Divya: She is SEVEN YEARS OLD!
Shreya: I'm just trying to imitate Josh.
Josh: Ahem.


message 322: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Henri: Woooow. *rolls eyes*


message 323: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 17, 2011 04:04PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: *whispers to Henri* I know, right?
Divya: Ahem....I'm right behind you, Ravi.
Ravi: Gosh, you're the one who says our family is crazy!
Rohan: Yeah! Especially Rhea.
Divya: Rohan, no matter how strongly I agree with you, don't say that.
Rhea: I LOVE BEING CRAZY!
Shreya: ME TOO! Man, I love you, Rhea.
Divya: HOW IS IT THAT EVERYONE LOVES MY INSANE LITTLE SISTER?


message 324: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Rosalia: Well, the document's open. That's a start.
RP: >.< SHADDUP.
Rosalia: Why won't you write anything?
RP: I'm distracted.
Maxen: No surpise there.
Roslaia: What's distracting you this time?
RP: A couple things.
Maxen: Anything in particular?
RP Lemme make a list...
Rosalia: -facepalm-


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: *whispers to Divya* What does distracting mean?
Divya: It means pulling away, nagging, drawing attention away from something, stuff like that.
Rhea: Oh. I don't see anyone pulling her away though!
Shreya: OH MY GOD! I AM PUTTING THAT LINE INTO THE STORY.
Divya: *facepalm*


message 326: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: Yay! Glad I could help!
Pierce: You're useful, for once.
RP: T-T I just helped her! Can't you be nice??
Pierce: You've already asked this.
RP: What'd you say?
Pierce: No.
RP: Oh. Well, My Indian peers are nice. Right guys? -looks to Shreya, Divya, Rhea, etc.-


message 327: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Hayden: *sighs*
Emmie: Yeah, yeah.
Hayden: *goes to play guitar*
Emmie: *sigh*
Hayden: ?
Emmie: *shrugs*
Hayden: *confusion*
Emmie: *confusion*


message 328: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: What's going on?


message 329: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 18, 2011 05:21PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments RedPath wrote: "RP: Yay! Glad I could help!
Pierce: You're useful, for once.
RP: T-T I just helped her! Can't you be nice??
Pierce: You've already asked this.
RP: What'd you say?
Pierce: No.
RP: Oh. Well, My..."

Divya: *smiles* Totally!
Shreya: INDIANS FOR THE WIN!
Ravi: Stop.
Shreya: Oh whatever. It's not my fault you think I'm a freak. I'm just crazy.
Ravi: Pff. Big difference.
Shreya: Watev. Anyway, thanks for helping, RP!
Rhea: I like you, RP. You're nice, unlike SOME people I know.
Divya: Uh oh. This is the point when you have to distract her with something.
Ravi: Divya, let me take care of this. I can handle five-year olds.
Rhea: DISTRACT! That's the new word I learned!
Divya: You see, Ravi? I got this stuff DOWN.


message 330: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Lav: What's going on?"

Emmie: I don't know. I'm heartless.
Hayden: And I'm bored.


message 331: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 17, 2011 05:53PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: Dude, you're not the only one. *snores*
Divya: Ravi, if you're bored, then help me out with Rhea. I don't know what she ate with that much sugar, but she's running all over the place.
Ravi: *laughs* She doesn't have to eat anything to be hyper. Rhea's just like that.
Shreya: Finally, you guys are getting along. You're supposed to get along well in the book.
Ravi: That's boring!


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: I don't feel like practicing violin..*sigh*
Divya: It's a privlege to play violin.
Shreya: Divya, please. Stop preaching.
Divya: Gosh, appreciate the good things in life.
Ravi: Like having awesome characters that are totally SKILLED! *model pose*
Shreya: I have myself to thank for that. I created you.
Divya: You have to do better than that, Ravi.
Ravi: *headdesk*


message 333: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: -is a little creeped out because she, too, plays the violin- I know your pain. I hate going through the scales >.<
Chrysanta: -smacks- Quit being self absorbed!
RP: T-T I sorry!
Chyrsanta: Hmph. You're doing it again.
RP: Ugh! This is hard! Okay... S-so, how are you today?
Chrysanta: You are one flawed person.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: All authors are flawed.
Divya: *smacks Ravi* You have flaws too!
Ravi: Quit it! I know, but author flaws show up more.
Shreya: *ignoring Divya and Ravi* I hate scales! They're all the same, and nothing interesting, RAWR.
Sanjay: It's the same on the piano.
Shreya: SANJAY! *hugs him*
Sanjay: Um...
Arina: What about me? Don't I get a hug?
Rhea: And me!
Rohan: And me!
Shreya: HELP ME RP!


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Jordan: Well, I'm not RP, but I'm here!
Eddie: Shut up, Jordan. She asked for RP, not you.
Jordan: Hurtful!
Johnny: Well, it's true.
Jordan: Stay out of this.
Johnny: Make me.
Jordan; I will. I created you. I can make you do anything I want.
Eddie:...Darn.
Jordan: :)


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Nice, Jordan! And it's awesome that you're here. *whispers* Don't listen to Eddie.
Ravi: Are all authors so against their characters?
Shreya: I'm not against you. Characters are just really weird sometimes.
Ravi: Look who's talking!


message 337: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: She's right. You guys can get really freaky...
All characters: -smack-


message 338: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Clio [observing all characters smack RP]: eh heh heh.
Tez: Don't even try it.
Clio: >.<


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: It's not nice to laugh when somebody gets hurt! *pout*
Divya: *whispers to Clio* Sorry bout that. She's only five.
Rhea: Is there a seeeecret? I want to know!
Rohan: If it's a secret, then they won't tell you.
Rhea: Hey! They won't tell you either!
Divya: *sigh* Twins.
Shreya: They don't fight any more than you used to fight with Ravi.
Divya: *headdesk*


message 340: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Clio [to Divya]: I just do it to irritate Tez, and no more.
Tez [glaring]: ...


message 341: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 20, 2011 02:48PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: Wow. Is Tez that mean to you?
Shreya: *smacks him* Don't be rude! Of course she isn't!
Ravi: Don't order me around! I'm only two years younger than you!
Shreya: So what? You're under my power! I created you!
Ravi: NAWWT listening!
Shreya: You're so childish.
Divya: Tell me about it. Although he was really helpful after my mom had her accident.
Ravi: Yes. And you will forever be in my debt.
Divya: Oh, shush.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Johnny: I can say the same for you, Jordan.
Jordan: Hey, man! Don't hate because you ain't!
Eddie:...Please don't talk gangsta. You are not Eminem.
Jordan: I can do whatever I want, because i am an individual.
Johnny: O...k...


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Very true. We can all do whatever we want!
Ravi:....Ahem.
Shreya: Oh. Right. You can only do what I want you to. I guess that's a good thing.
Ravi: Oh, man.


message 344: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Clio and Tez [simultaneously]: we have an...interesting author/character dynamic.
Tez: it involves lots of bickering, mostly because I want my brainchild to be as well-rounded as can be. I need to train her for the realities of real life.
Clio: also because she likes it when she pwns me.
Tez: that too.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: My relationship with Shreya is weird too. I guess she's too much like my sister, who really annoys me sometimes.
Rhea: Aww.
Ravi: Not you, silly. Divya.
Shreya: I am not at all like Divya!
Ravi: Yes, you are. You freak out too easily like her, while I stay calm.
Shreya: Yes, very true. But then again, you tend to lose patience with little kids faster than Divya.
Divya: Oh yeah!
Ravi: It's not my fault!
Shreya: Eh. You're right. It's mine. *laughs*


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: I am about to drop dead with tiredness. Every Friday is like this.
Divya: I know, right? Middle school is so hard.
Shreya: My school is WAY different than yours. One thing: it has all these huge entrance exams. Second thing: you live in the 1940's.
Divya: Which means although I'm twelve, like you, I'm technically older than you. OH YEAH!
Shreya: *sigh* Fine. Boss me around all you want.
Divya: Erm. I can't. Not unless you make me.
Shreya: *sits up* Riiighht! I forgot!
Divya: Fail.


message 347: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 22, 2011 08:38AM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: If I could write you a song to make you fall in love, I would already have you up under my arm....
Ravi: What?
Shreya: Never mind.
Divya: Okay, dude, you need to stop singing that 21st century music and start WRITING!
Shreya: I'm busy trying to develop your personalities.
Rhea: Are you going to change me?
Anjali: And me?
Shreya: Rhea, you're perfect. Anjali, you're great but you need some development. And Ravi...you too.
Ravi: Yeah. Like changing my name! *snort*
Shreya: I didn't change your name! I just made it longer. It's Ravindra now. But we still call you Ravi.
Divya: You should be happy. I've always wanted a long name!
Shreya: Okay. I'll change your name to Divyapalmananath.
Divya: *facepalm*


message 348: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: RAVINDRA! NOW YOU'RE REALLY NAME BUDDIES WITH MY UNCLE! And I've seen some pretty long names, but that's one of the longest O.o
Rosalia: 21st century? You only have 21? You keep track? How? -confused-
RP: -mutters- otherworlder...and I think the name Divya is perfect.


message 349: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie: *cries* NOW I MISS JORDAN TOO!


message 350: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: Jordan!? Aww, I miss my uncle name Jordan. I want my Jordan....no, Mandy! He's doing what he needs to do!


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