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Joeanne: What do you guys want?Julluis: you dream more about that freak then us you orginal characters.( pointing to emily)
Joeanne: well, i just don't have the time anymore.
Raina:You've been neglecting us. do you want us to leave. are we not new ideas anymore. your doing us like you did....Grayden brothers.
All character:*gasp*
Joeanne: *Uneffected*, why did you bring them up.
Raina: Because, you forgot them completely. Didn't dream, write, or daydream about them anymore. Are we all coming to the same fate??
Joeanne: you're cruel.
Raina: you made me that way.
Joeanne: Love it. No, but really they lost value in my mind. You have nothing to worry about.
Kyle: so our story is safe.
Julluis: Yep, until we end up like the brothers.
Joeanne: you all have nothing to worry about. I won't forget any of you.
Megan: Yeah, just like the brothers. You told them that too.
Joeanne: I haven't forgot them, they just....are on a long vacation. I've been thinking of a story where you all can be in it. So leave me alone before i change my mind.
Raina: I save the people again. *smiles*
Joeanne: Now that you've mentioned it the brothers are back. In Raina's story they are you rivals.
Raina: Darn it.
kyle: See what you did!!
Raina: Shut before i blast you with..
(cut off)
Joeanne: You guys stop. Isn't this what you wanted??
Raina: Sounds like fun.
Julluis: Yep, so mush fun.
EKyle: well can i get a makeover, Joeanne?
Joeanne: No. And yes, its going be a lot of fun.
Mitch: This is so entertaining. Lav created an anti-fan club for me, and you created a fan club for me.Cassie: Yes, yes I did.
Mitch: You're just playing to my narcissism and vanity.
Cassie: Well, that was part of it, but not really.
Jeremy: NaNo has done bad things to my life. Noel: NaNo has done great things to my life.
Noel: I never knew I could write this much junk in two weeks. Jeremy: He made my little sister a better baseball player than me. MY LITTLE SISTER!
Noel: It's hilarious.
Jeremy: It's just wrong. And very unrealistic.
Noel: It's fiction. It doesn't have to be realistic.
Jeremy: I think it does.
Mandy: My story isn't realistic. So it really doesn't.Marie: YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!? Yeah...that is wrong.
Noel: Mine is sort of, sort of not. It's pretty much whatever I feel like writing that day. Jeremy: Whatever I feel like doing, you mean. I control this story.
Noel: Then make yourself better at baseball.
Jeremy: Okay, so I control what I do. You're the one who makes the stupid unfair rules about the plot.
Mandy: Okay.Marie: *shrugs* Still. THE LITTLE SISTER!? That's so pathetic. Poor Jeremy.
Jeremy: Marie understands my pain. Noel: Don't care.
Max: You are evil.Jordan: Why?
Max: look at me! All beaten up and bruised! You've dragged me through hell! And whats with these emotional issues, huh?
Jordan: *whines* but they're important to the story!
MaX: Ah, talk to the hand. *puts up hand*
Jemnji: So, I see you want to send me to war.Me: Well. Yeah.
Jemnji: Are you trying to kill me off? Because if you are...well, we can't be friends.
Me: I'm not your friend. I'm your God. You must respect me. And wait, is that your worst threat? If so...you need to be demoted.
Jemnji: WHAT!?
Me: My MC is supposed to be smart. And clever. And butt-kicking awesome. Losing their friendship with you will not kill your enemies.
Jemnji: *slaps me across face* Is that clever and smart and butt-kickingly awesome enough for you?
Emily: MY DEAR SHELDON! HOW I LOVE YOU SO!Sheldon: MY DEAR AUTHOR! HOW I LOVE THE GIRLFRIEND YOU GAVE ME!
Riley: *Ahem*
Emily: Oh, I'm sorry Riley that I gave him your ex and I haven't even mentioned you yet.
Riley: ...
Emily: Oh, you're not giving me the silent treatment, are you?
Sheldon: *patting shoulder* Let it go....
Luna(me):I really should be writing.Ruby:Who's life are you going to write about now.You make us all suffer.
Luna:I do it to make you stronger and wiser.
Theo: You keep telling us that.
Lyritta:Wait she's going to make us suffer!
Ruby:Ya I heard her talking about it with that one boy. How they are going to make all 12 of you suffer.
Lyritta: not FAir
Luna: How do you say that?
Dianne:She's off topic again.So Lyritta,Ruby,Theo what stories are you in?
Theo: Me and my sister...
Ruby: Older sister
Theo:What ever. We're in the story that takes place on an other planet.
Ruby:Ya the one with the war that takes up my whole childhood.
Lyritta: I'm from the one about magic in the future. What about you?
Dianne:Greek Myths in the modern world.And for the suffering thing,she didn't make me suffer as bad as Candace.
Lyritta:What did she do to Candace?
Dianne:She cursed her so she can only speak in quotes.
Lyritta:I'm afraid.
Luna:Hey I gave her a stepbrother.
Spiro:You mean me.
Ruby:Spiro,Dianne,Candace she made me and Theo's mom the goddess Artemis so...
Dianne:No way!!!You guys are my siblings!!!
Ruby:I AM NOT A GUY!!!!
Dianne:It's an expresstion.
Ruby:I hate English.
Luna:You people are ignoring me and I'm your author.
Theo:So.
Dianne:What happened to Lyritta?
Spiro:Who
Candace:(shrugs her shoulders)
Theo:Luna scared her so she left.
Luna:Shut up
Ruby:Don't talk to my brother like that!
Dianne:ditto!
Luna:Dianne,Ruby shut up after all you two are me.
Ruby:I knew that.
Theo:That's confusing.
Ellen: Morgan, why do you have to be so complicated gosh dammnit!!!Morgan: .... You're the one who made up the oh so complicated plot.
Ellen: well it is complicated.
Devon: Girls, calm down.
Morgan: And you get to tell me what to do... because?
Devon: Because I am being a rational human being.
Morgan: Huh. Human, aye?
Devon: -groans- Morgan, drop it, okay?
Morgan: No. Why should I? Knowing you hasn't exactly turned out to be one of the best things for VI, me, or my father, you know! Plus, you won't even tell me anything so I have to find everything for myself!
Rio: Stop arguing. You're giving me a headache.
Ellen: Like you can talk. You're the one who has to listen to all three of you, plus other charries. Besides, you can tune those two in and out.
Rio: Oh, boo hoo. It's your own fault.
Ellen: And I've regreted it ever since.
Devon: I'm not telling you anything so stop batting your damn eyelashes at me!
Morgan: I wasn't batting my eyelashes at you! Not that it would work, you could be attracted to guys for all I know.
Rio: Just what I need. A gay brother. Fantastic.
Devon: I never said I was gay.
Ellen: Don't make it seem like you have control, Dev. I could make you gay if I wanted to.
Morgan: Huh! There we go.
Devon: Then what's the point of Morgan and I's romance, then?
Morgan: Pffft. Like I would do that. I don't even know you.
Ellen: To keep things interesting.
Rio: And this conversation is finally turning interesting.
Morgan: You don't... You don't mean...
Devon: -smirks- Hey, baby
Random.
Flowerspots: So, Eva, how are you doing?Eva: Can we please just skip that question?
Flowerspots: Finee. So how do you like where you're going in the story?
Eva: I don't want to hate my parents so much. =(
Flowerspots: FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE YOU DO NOT HATE YOUR PARENTS YOU ARE JUST IMPATIENT WITH THEM.
Eva: Haha everyone tells me I'm impatient with them. There's nothing new there.
Flowerspots: YESS. That's just how I wanted you to turn out!
Eva: Next question please! *taps foot*
Flowerspots: Wow. The impatient factor sure worked out.
Eva: *glares*
Flowerspots: Okay, okay! What do you want to happen in the end?
Eva: Hey you're supposed to write the story not me! Watev, I'll just say this. I become a star who can be creative alllll day and I am rich and have enough money to own my own art studio!
Flowerspots: What? If you love art so much then you should ENJOY working in a toy shop!
Eva: No. You have to do the same thing every single time. I wanna be DIFFERENT.
Flowerspots: *singing* Na na na, I say the same thing every single time...
Eva: What?
Flowerspots: Never mind. *scribbles in notebook*
Eva: OMG YOU'VE BEEN TAKING NOTES?
Flowerspots: *typing*Rhea: *looking over shoulder* HEY! Why are you excluding Rohan from this scene? *pouts*
Flowerspots: Honestly, Rhea. You two fight too much, and hanging up clothes is a GIRL'S chore.
Divya: Oh god, why are you writing that scene? I'm so mean to Rhea in it!
Flowerspots: I know. Hee hee. You're so irritable, Divya.
Divya: SHUSH! *covers ears and runs away*
Cameron: *glares at me* What are you doing to Divya?
Flowerspots: Are you crushing on her? YESSSSSSSSSS!
Divya: WHAT? CAMERON FALLS IN LOVE WITH ME? Weird.
Cameron: Aww.
Flowerspots: Shush, you two. This isn't a romance novel.
Rhea: What's romance?
Flowerspots: Stop being curious, Rhea.
Divya: She's SUPPOSED to be a curious little five year old.
Flowerspots: WHAT? You know what she's supposed to be! Shoo, Divya! You know too much!
Rohan: *walks in* Hi guys!
Flowerspots: ROHAN! SHAME! You're not supposed to be learning slang!
Divya: Thanks, now I know one thing more!
Flowerspots: AAH! GO AWAY, ALL OF YOU!
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Rhea: *looks at my wii remote* Shreyaaaaa what's this?Shreya: *glances over and freaks out* PUT THAT DOWN, RHEA! I JUST GOT MY WII!
Rhea: Hey! I turned it on! *starts playing Wii Sports*
Shreya: Aah, forget it. Just don't break it. And be quiet.
Rhea: YEEE I LOVE THIS THING!
Ravi: Wow, Rhea. You're good.
Shreya: SHUSH GUYS! I'M TRYING TO WRITE THE SHIP SCENE!
Rhea: Oooh we get to go on a ship? Is there going to be a Wii there?
Ravi: WE LIVE IN POST-WAR INDIA, GENIUS!
Rhea:.......oh.
Ravi:.....
Divya:....
Shreya: Finally, some peace and quiet. *starts writing*
RP: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! My uncle's name is Ravi! Actually, it's Ravindra, but y'know...Maxen: No, we don't.
Pierce: And we don't care.
RP: T^T After I confessed my love for you two, you jerks!
Rosalia: You know, we're not real.
RP: You're not??
Chrysanta: Yep. And it must be misleading for everyone to read this, since me and Pierce are in a totally seperate story from Rosalia and Maxen.
RP: Nobody cares, so I don't see why-
Chrysanta: Dear God, woman, what are you listening to??
RP: Soldier Side by System of a Down...
Pierce: Now it's Concrete Angel.
Maxen: These songs are depressing...
RP: I know. But I like them.
Rosalia: You don't seem like you'd listen to depressing songs.
RP: So I've been told.
Chrysanta: Do you relate to these people?
RP: No. Well, actually-
Chrysanta: Are you often lonely or sad? If you need someone to talk to-
RP: BEJEEZUS! I'm not depressed! I just like dark and serious music. Don't judge me!
Rosalia: She must be going through this "Bad-ass, rebel stage" that Pierce is apparently going through. She thinks we are trying to change her.
Pierce: -_- Who told you that?
Rosalia: Chry- No one.
Pierce: -glares at Chrysanta, then leaves-
Maxen: -sigh- Way to go, both of you. RedPath, where's Joska?
RP: Yeah... I'm not sure that he's going to be in this draft of your story. You're on your own
Maxen: Well, I'm leaving now. I don't want to be around when you three start talking about guys.
Chrysanta: We do not talk about boys when we're bored!
Rosalia: We're not that shallow!
RP: You tell 'em, girls ^-^ Even though he's right.
Morgan: Stop socialising and write already! I wanna know what happens!Ellen: I'm letting my brain calm down. Those sarcastic remarks are hard to come by you know.
Morgan: Humph. Write.
Ellen: Do you want Janice to kick you out as well?
Morgan: She wouldn't.
Ellen: Only if I make her.
Morgan: Then I'd stay with Lorna.
Ellen: Only if I let her.
Morgan: Fine. Devon's place.
Ellen: You really want to burden him with your dramas? --raised eyebrow--
Morgan: ELLEN! WRITE ALREADY!
Emmie: Byeee.Hayden: SCREW. THIS. I HATE YOU ALL.
Emmie: Somebody's cheerful.Hayden: S you.
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Ravi: OMG A NAME BUDDDY!!!!Shreya: Wow. And I'm supposed to be a freak.
Rohan: I WANT A TURN ON THE WII!
Rhea: YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO PLAY!
Anjali: BE QUIET ALL OF YOU! I'M TRYING TO DO HOMEWORK!
Ravi: SHUSH! I'M TRYING TO FIND MY NAME BUDDY!
Divya: ARGH! The only reason I don't lose my sanity is that you haven't made me lose it yet.
Shreya: Thanks. New idea. *scribbles*
Divya: YOU SUCK!
MaYbe I'll Just Be Me (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Alice: You can shut up if you want. But you're not in charge of me."Hayden: *rolls eyes*
Nick: Jerk.Me: how am I a jerk?
Nick: You broke my leg!
Me: I didn't break it! It was only severly sprained!
Nick: That's bull-
Me: Do you WANT me to break your leg?
Rhea: Jerk isn't a nice word *sob*Shreya: Rhea, if you're going to freak over a word like "jerk" then you'd better go somewhere else.
Divya: My sister is freaking over "jerk". Wow. Rohan's supposed to be the sensitive one.
Rohan: I'M STANDING RIGHT HERE!
Divya: AND RHEA'S SUPPOSED TO BE THE LOUD ONE!
Shreya: BE QUIET!
RP: I found the emoticon!Pierce: Good for you.
RP: Can't you be happy for me once in a while?
Pierce: Nope.
RP: Okay...
Hannah: IT'S SNOWING! WOOHOO!Etienne: No big deal.
Hannah: OH COME OOON. I know you love the snow!
Etienne: I do not. It snows a lot here, and I HATE it.
Hannah: Pfffft. Liar.
Hannah: Well, Rhiella? Do you like the snow?Rhiella: I DON'T FREAKING CARE ABOUT THE SNOW.
Hannah: o.o
(unnamed guy): LA DEE DA DEE DA! IT'S SNOWING~ WHEEE!
Hannah: o.o"
Rhiella: YOU'RE SUCH A GIRL.
(unnamed guy): NO I'M NOT! You're so mean! :'(
Etienne: Heheheheh...
Rhiella: Oh hey tharrr.
Etienne: o_o hi.
Rhiella: ;)
Etienne: ಠ_ಠ
Hannah: Okaaaay then. ANYWAY. Back to the original topic. IT'S SNOWING, MAN!
Arianne: How pleasant.
Hannah: Mhm.
Arianne: ...
Hannah: ...
Etienne: Eh. I shall be going then.
Rhea: What's snow?Rohan: You should really read more books, Rhea.
Shreya: Snow is....naah I don't feel like explaining. It's cold fuzzy white stuff.
Rhea: Wow. That was a bad description.
Shreya: Just let me type. I'm at the scene where you guys are at the train station.
Divya: You really need to stop telling us what will happen to us.
Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Alice: Whatever."Hayden: Right back at ya.
Emmie: I don't know.Hayden: *headdesk* YOU.
Emmie: *smacks* Cooperate--AND BE NICE--or I swear I will have you under a car before you reach sixteen.
Hayden: *glares*
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Alice: How about we just pretend I'm at the office and say hi or something?
Lav: That works.
Alice: Yep.
Lav: Okay... so...
Alice: Um, hi.
Hayden: *still glaring at Lav* Hi.Emmie: *cracks up*
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Alice: So... you're supposed to... show me around?
Emmie: Lav, methinks you should depart.Hayden: I second that. Anyway, yeah. What's your name again?
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Rhea: This is weird.Ravi: For once I agree with you.
Divya: Yes.
Rohan. Yeah.
Shreya: Guys, this conversation is going nowhere.
Rhea: LET'S PLAY WII!
Shreya: Oh god. Rhea, when you're an old lady in the twentieth century, you'll live in an apartment and in every room you'll have a Wii with different games.
Rhea: REALLY? YEE! PUT THAT INTO THE STORY!
Shreya: Oh god. What have I gotten myself into.
Etienne: Eh, it's okay, Hannah.Hannah: ...
Etienne: Seriously. Everything's going to be fine.
Hannah: ...
Etienne: Hannah?
Hannah: ...
Etienne: Seriously, cheer up, mmmkay?
Hannah: Why.
Etienne: YOU'RE ACTING LIKE A KID.
Hannah: I AM A KID! *sniffles*
Etienne: No you're not.
Hannah: YES I AM.
Etienne: NO, YOU'RE NOT.
Hannah: ...
Etienne: Back to this again. It'll be fine, seriously.
Hannah: HOW DO YOU KNOW.
Etienne: BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT KAYE KEEPS TELLING ME.
Kaye: IT'LL BE ALRIGHT HANNAH. STOP YOUR MOPING AND GET A LIFE.
Hannah: :'(
Etienne: o_o
Etienne: Aw, Hannah, just stop it.
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Fun! Oh, dear. If I put Cal and Zar in here...it would errupt in flames...)))
Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Alice: Again? I never told you my name."Hayden: Whatever.
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Sheldon: Ow! What was that for?
Emily: I missed you.