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message 101: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Hawk: I heard your new plot for my story. THAT'S FREAKIN' DISGUSTING! I mean, I can deal with people with no faces, that's fine, but like that? Jeez. That's just gross. Oh, and ypou're gonna make me have nightmares about it too? Gee, thanks.


message 102: by [deleted user] (new)

Cara: *nods* Characters are so needy
Taylor :*glare*
Cara: Well, you say that you're not depressed, and then you yell at me to get you antidepressants. Make. Up. Your. Mind.
Jess: I don't trust her with pills. Remember what happened to Melissa?
Melissa: Hey, don't bring me into this.
Cara: Taylor was talking to me before you showed up though!
Melissa: But then school started. Face it, this isn't me. It's just proof that school literally sucks your soul.


message 103: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts: No faces?! Would this be a story about people who pissed me off and then got their face eaten?
Mitch: Oh, no. Don't even get started on that.


message 104: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Talia: *laughs*


message 105: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Hawk: I'm in need of a less creepy plot.


message 106: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Skitts wrote: "Skitts: No faces?! Would this be a story about people who pissed me off and then got their face eaten?
Mitch: Oh, no. Don't even get started on that."


Hawk: No. I anger a spirit by finding a stone and then it starts eating faces, leaving people with no nose and gaping hpoles where the eyes, nose and mouth used to be. Yeah, that's what happens when Sapphire watches Doctor Who: The Idiot's Lantern/The Empty Child and Nine in the same day. GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHYUCKYUCKYUCKYUCKEWWWWWWWWWWWYUCKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH.


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts: *nodding* Sounds pretty sweet.
Mitch: Yeah, because you love Dr. Who. And you eat faces.


message 108: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Sapphire: Doesn't it?
Hawk: *Pulls Sapphire back* It sounds cool until you're in the story!


message 109: by !ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ (new)

!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ | 152 comments Eliza: *walks back with a wet washcloth on head* What did I miss?
Panama: *silently crying*


message 110: by !ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ (new)

!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ | 152 comments Eliza: Hi...
Panama: I hurt my head.


message 111: by Mandy (last edited Sep 23, 2010 10:40AM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Skitts wrote: "Skitts: *smiles grimly* Mitch wants anti-depressants too."

Mandy: *walks in and opens her mouth to speak*
Marie: Lavender works. It's very calming and was used as an anti-depressant. Mandy's doing a science paper on it.
Mandy: *gapes* How did you....
Marie: I know everything. I live in your head. It's not very good for company though. Your head, I mean.
Mandy: You're weird.
Marie: Sure.
Mandy: And plus, the Lavendarlol person I know is anything BUT calming.
Marie: Your Goodreads friend? I'd have to agree with you there. But I was talking about the herb, Lavender.
Mandy: Yeah, but still.
Marie: *shrugs* Anyway, I was just giving Mitch helpful advice.


message 112: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: HEHEHEHEHEHE! Yeah, I'm a hyperactive person with anger managment issues named after a calming herb. Deal with it.
Josh: And this is why I've never had an interest in being your friend.
Lav: Hey, that's right. We aren't friends! WHY AREN'T WE FRIENDS?
Josh: Um, hello? I just told you why we aren't friends.
Lav: But all my characters love me!
Noel: Says who?
Brooke: Yeah... I mean, I like you, but I wouldn't go as far as love.
Abby: No comment.
Lav: Okay, okay. All my characters like me!
Josh: I don't.
Lav: Yeah, well, you're a jerk.
Josh: Why does everyone say that? I'm only mean to people I don't like. Goodness.


message 113: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: *shakes her head* Poor Lav and her characters.
Marie: I'm with Abby here. No comment.


message 114: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Noel: Hi Mandy!
Lav: Oh, so you say hi to her and don't love me?
Noel: Those two things are completely unrelated.
Lav: No they aren't.
Noel: Yes. They are.
Lav: You're such a liar.
Noel: I think I'd know if I was lying or not.
Lav: I think I'd know if you were lying or not. And you're lying.
Noel: You just keep thinking that, Lav.
Lav: I will!


message 115: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: NOEL!
Marie: Oh great.


message 116: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: I'm a terribly flat character in a short story Noel is writing for his English class. I like baseball and my dog. Just like my author and I have no friends, just like every other book character in the world.


message 117: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie: Hullo Jeremy.
Mandy: Hullo Jeremy too! Don't worry, you'll find your voice eventually.


message 118: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: Suuuuuuure I will.
Noel: Suuuuuuuuure he will.
Jeremy: See? I'm Noel.
Noel: See? He's me.
Jeremy: This is a fail.
Noel: This is a fail.
Jeremy: You should really shut up now.
Noel: You should... yeah. You're right.


message 119: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: *cracks up* I love you guys, I've decided. You can be the Siamese twins.
Marie: ....


message 120: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Noel: That makes me feel better about my poor character development. *sarcastic voice*
Jeremy: *pats Mandy on head*
Noel: I love you Jeremy.


message 121: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: JEREMY! You're just as bad as Noel! Grrr!
Marie: I join the I-Love-You Jeremy club too. Just for that. *laughs*


message 122: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: Win!
Noel: I think I like you, Marie.


message 123: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: You shouldn't. She is a bad influence on-
Marie: I get all my bad influence from you, Mandy. Yes, I think I like you guys too.
Mandy: Grr.....Marie, stealing all my men.


message 124: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Noel: What other men has she stolen?
Jeremy: Me.
Noel: No, Jeremy. Just... no.
Jeremy: Jealous are we?
Noel: NO!


message 125: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie: *cracks up*
Mandy: ....I'm not talking to you guys. You patted my head.


message 126: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: That's okay. I can just talk to Marie.
Noel: I'm sorry! :(


message 127: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: I can't be mad long. I forgive Noel. Hullo again!
Marie: Of course you do.
Mandy: Not talking to you either.
Marie: Hey Jeremy. What's up?


message 128: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: Well, I'm not mowing the lawn like I'm supposed to be.
Noel: YAY!


message 129: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie: That's nice.
Mandy: *smiles*


message 130: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: You?
Noel: *smiles back*


message 131: by Mandy (last edited Sep 23, 2010 01:35PM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie: I'm pretty good. Bored out of my mind.
Mandy: Pineapple.
Marie: Scratch that. I'm going crazy outta my mind with this lunatic. *points to Mandy*


message 132: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Jeremy: Then go do something fun.
Noel: Pear!


message 133: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: Artichoke. My favorite vegetable.
Marie: Alright. I'll tease Mandy once I think of a clever thing to say.


message 134: by tesni (last edited Sep 23, 2010 01:48PM) (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Clover: (sat on floor meditating)
Tez: *joins Clover, crosses legs in Lotus pose*
Clover:
Me:
Clover:
Me: *sneezes*
Clover: (opens eye and raises one eyebrow)
Me: (quietly) sorry?
Clover:
Me:
Clover:
Me: *sneezes*
Clover: Out.


message 135: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy: Hahahaha. Nice Tez.
Marie: .....


message 136: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Tez: *creeps away from Clover* Nice? She's not going to talk to me for days now. Perhaps I should write her a grisly ending or something.
Clover: (opening one eye) I heard that.


message 137: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Talia *bursts into the room*: HELLLOOOO PEOPLE!
Rea: I think that girl over there is meditating...
Liz *walk over to Clover*: ARE- YOU- MEDITATING?
Rea: She can hear you fine.
Liz: ARE YOU MEDITATING????!!!?!
Rea:....


message 138: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Hawk: GAH.


message 139: by [deleted user] (new)

Taylor: YOU LITTLE (*censored*) YOU BROUGHT OUT MY BABY PICTURES!
Cara: Technically I only brought out one. But I can show them more if you'd like.
Taylor: SCREW YOU!


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Maria: Elvira? Hello? Are you there? Can you please talk to me?
Elvira: *walks in* *walks out*
Maria: Ah shii.


message 141: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Cara wrote: "Taylor: YOU LITTLE.....YOU BROUGHT OUT MY BABY PICTURES!
Cara: Technically I only brought out one. But I can show them more if you'd like.
Taylor: SCREW YOU!"


Mandy: They were really cute!


message 142: by [deleted user] (new)

Cara: Maria, I feel for you.
Taylor: NO MORE PICTURES. I AM NOT OBSESSED WITH BIG GLASSES ANYMORE.


message 143: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Hawk: *Sigh*
Sparrow: Hi.
Hawk: BAWAHAHA!!!!
Sparrow: AHAHA! I scared you! I scared you! Admit it, I scared you!
Hawk: No, you didn't. I was practicing my evil laugh.
Sparrow: Yeah, yeah. Like I haven't heard that a billion times.


message 144: by Noel (new)

Noel Jefferys  | 524 comments Noel: Jeremy got me a 97 on my short story.
Jeremy: If it was up to me you would've gotten an 100. Let's face it. I'm awesome.
Noel: That's just because I'm awesome.
Jeremy: I'm way more awesome than you'll ever be.
Noel: I MADE YOU, WHICH MAKES ME THE AWESOMEST!
Jeremy: No, Noel. Just... no.
Noel: I can kill you.
Jeremy: I can kill you.
Noel: No you can't! YOU AREN'T EVEN REAL!
Jeremy: Neither are you.
Noel: Yes I am!


message 145: by Everett (CupoJoe) (new)

Everett (CupoJoe) M. (cupojoe) | 66 comments Me: hi Evan


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Noel wrote: "Noel: Jeremy got me a 97 on my short story.
Jeremy: If it was up to me you would've gotten an 100. Let's face it. I'm awesome.
Noel: That's just because I'm awesome.
Jeremy: I'm way more awes..."


Lol. I'm liking this character.


message 147: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts: Miranda, I don't know if you should be playing this.
Miranda: Why not?
Skitts: Well, I think you should play the Get to Know Your Author game.
Miranda: But there isn't one of those.
Skitts: True.


message 148: by tesni (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Clio: Get To Know Your Author would be funny.
Me: how so? *raises one eyebrow*
Clio: then I could find out more about you, don't you think? *raises one eyebrow back*
Me: no. I am a mystery.
Clio: There's nothing to stop me shutting up.
Me: except me. I can write you into doing anything. I am in total control of all your actions *evil laugh*


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Max: Why haven't you written about me yet?
Me: I can't.
Max: Why not?
Me: 'Cause you're my NaNo charrie.
Max: So?
Me: Shut up, Max.
Max: Why dont you?
Me: no.
max: yes
Me: no.
Max: yes.
Me: SHUT UP MAX.
Max: *looks down at the floor* okay.
me: good.


message 150: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Rea: .... hello


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