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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

I especially liked the beginning, it was really descriptive:

"A teardrop. It coursed down her cheek with the gentleness of a butterfly’s wing-stroke, caressing her smooth skin. Somehow it didn’t feel right to her. She wanted it to feel like an ache against her warm face, to feel dull and pain-filled, the way her heart felt."


I can never do something like that.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

No way! I suck big time.


message 3: by Carina (new)

Carina don't downgrade yourself buddy ;)


message 4: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) The Scary Monster's Buddy wrote: "I especially liked the beginning, it was really descriptive:

"A teardrop. It coursed down her cheek with the gentleness of a butterfly’s wing-stroke, caressing her smooth skin. Somehow it didn’t f..."


ikr! that's really good, btw!


message 5: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) welcome =]


message 6: by Carina (new)

Carina ooh! I'll be sure to read! :)


message 7: by Rosalyn (new)

Rosalyn Leigh (t-rose) this is awesome. i love how you wre able to capture two different personalities convincingly. Kat's thoughts are so heartfelt, i actually felt that tear drop on my own cheek in the opening paragraph. great job canter. hope there's more on the way


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