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message 1: by Kiele (last edited Sep 01, 2010 03:30PM) (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
This is for Ebonypelt to post her stuff! ^.^

DO NOT STEAL ANY WRITINGS, POEMS, ect. IN EBONYPELT'S FOLDER


message 2: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
yays! thanks. im gonna post stuff RIGHT NOW!


message 3: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Awesome!


message 4: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
“The Life of a Lover”

Life was like a doleful Rose,
Where Love was trodden on by woes,
Friends scattered to the Four Winds,
Whilst Death and Devil grinned.




“Dreams”

All my dreams came true,
All through you,
All to be dashed,
Like so much glass, smashed.


i wrote these several years a go, tell me what you think!


message 5: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Nice Ebony! they're great!


message 6: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
thank you! they're pretty good if i do say so myself!


message 7: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
^.^


message 8: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
=^'.'^=
i'll write more at school maybe...... i need to post my two tone poem too....


message 9: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
cool! I'd love to see your poems!


message 10: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
i don't have it at home, i have to get it back from school sometime.


message 11: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Ok!


message 12: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
so we were at school, it was about lunch time when people start getting called to the gym and not coming back. so then it's 8th grade's turn. people go in and don't come out again. now all the students left are at lunch and we know from the screams emitting from the gym that something really bad is going on. obviously. so, Jen, Kathy, and i are going through the lunch line (and nobody thinks of running away from the school...?) when i decide, we're going in there!! surprisingly everyone left follows me into the gym. we all stand in a big line parallel to the other lines of students from before us, but they're all on the ground with blood coming out of their mouthes. there's another line facing ours, and i'm first in line. there's a big cart-thing at our end of the gym, and a man wearing black (with cape!) stands next to it. the floor is covered with bloodied straw and the air is think and heavy, making me sleepy. the gym is bathed in semi-darkness and the cloaked man calls forward the first people in line. that'd be me! so then he makes us play this game where you have to shake these two balls really fast, after that, we do this really fast paced dance-thing for a while, and afterwards i'm really tired. but then he says we have to do it again with a partner, for me, Kathy. i start off, but can't keep going and i collapse with exhaustion, but Kathy urges me on. i try to stand but just fall over again. by now the cloaked dude has had everyone play the game and start dancing, in a short time he has both lines of people panting hard, and keeling over on the floor along with all the other lines around us. i feel really guilty because it was my idea to go in here to find out what was going on. then the cloaked figure kneels over me and whispers his plan. "i will put this (he holds up a beaded band) over you're head and your soul will fade and another will take it's place. every body has five souls inside of it."
i grab the band and throw it weakly. but he says, "i will make you the Phantom of the Opera." i wanted that so badly, that i called out to everyone telling them to do what he said. i search through the straw around me and find the band again, and immediately put it over my head and fall back down on the floor. he leans over me and starts the process, i can feel myself slipping away. he says one last thing before i lose myself completely. "you will be King Arther's son"
i try to struggle, but here's no strength in my body.......all is black.

that is my dream, there's more, but i'm going to give my hands a break. it's more like a rough draft seeing as the tense keeps changing.


message 13: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
silver darts and dashes through me
like a blazing-yet cold-flame
platinum streaks emmit beauty
delicate silver is my name

yet jet swirls
and ebony twirls
in slender, elegant branching vines
it seems worn and dull, but fresh darkness lurks beneath
wild black loiters in this life i call mine

my person is split,
full of firey silver spirit
or shapely yet strong
one of Darkness' throng


message 14: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Awesome! Amazing! You need to take a break from rhyming though.


message 15: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
DO NOT. __\o/____/\_
careful or i'll tell my shark to attack you.


message 16: by Kiele (last edited Sep 09, 2010 05:31PM) (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Do too. I'll send my chicken after you. ~:>


message 17: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Attack mutant chicken!


message 18: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
EEEKKK! *eats mutant chicken*


message 19: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Noooooooooooo


message 20: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessss *mutant chicken blood drips off mouth*


message 21: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
ewwwwwww sends more chickens after you and throws Kathy into a dungon.


message 22: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
nooooooooo! not Kathy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 23: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
yeeeeeeeessss kathy!


message 24: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
no! i'll write a non-rhyme-y poem! just not KATHY!!!


message 25: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
ok!


message 26: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
i wrote my descriptive essay on you! XD heh heh heh *evil chuckle*


message 27: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Oh no! What'd ya say about meh?


message 28: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
you're a good rolemodel and you're nice to everyone
i'll post my final copy


message 29: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
ok. i'll TRY to post my final copy anyways.


Ebony
Hour 3
21/9/10
Language Arts

A Friend Indeed

The memory from the first day of seventh grade will never fade from my mind. That was the day I met Willow. She became one of my best friends in no time at all. Kiele is like a role model to me; even though she had to move, her memory lives on in my life. I hope I see her someday when, hopefully, she moves back here.
Willow is about as tall as I am, somewhere around five feet. She had shoulder length pale blonde hair, disturbed by the wire that runs from her cochlear implant to her hearing aid. Willow looks neat in pale pink Converse, jeans, and a semi-dressy plaid shirt. She wears rectangular glasses, and she has a black plastic microphone to help her hear what people say. Overall, Willow was one the best dressed students last year.
Willow loves both horses and cats; this was evident before she even told me because of her obsession with horse shirts and books. Also, she was never seen without her trusty Warriors books. Our natural attraction lies in our mutual respect for all animals and humans; we both love animals and try to be gracious and patient with humans. She is easy for me to work with because of this. Willow is always so nice to people, it amazes me; the only time I’ve ever seen her get mad at someone was her two younger siblings. She’s deaf, so when sometimes she doesn’t quite catch what the teacher said, she would ask politely for her to repeat herself, and she’s not afraid to ask for help. If she understood something that I didn’t, she always helped me out.
August 18, 2009, I walked into the school slightly depressed because my two best friends from the year before had moved to Germany. I thought that for the whole year I would have a hole in my life. How I was wrong. My life last year was more complete than sixth grade because of one welcoming smile from Willow. Our science teacher had arranged out seats in alphabetical order, so we were science partners. After getting our textbooks, we were supposed to cover them with brown paper bags, but Willow couldn’t seem to figure it out. She gave me a shy smile and asked me for help. I showed her the way to do it, and we decorated our books together and chatted. From then on, we always worked together, in every class, and our friendship bloomed.
Through the whole year, we never argued on anything, we had so much in common! Willow is a lot like me in some ways, but she is also a very unique person. Her extraordinary personality has taught me so much! I miss her now that she has moved, but she still influences me through email. It just goes to show that if you are kind and include other people, you can make a huge impact on someone’s life.



***
obviously, i cut some names, but you know who they are.


message 30: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Awww thanks Ebony! lol I still can't figure out how to do that brown paper bag thing! XD


message 31: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
XD lol, really?? want me to show you??? *cracks up*

*falls over in gails of laughter*

*gasps*

*can't breath*

*gets stomach cramp*

*decides this is getting old and stops spamming*


message 32: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
*pats Ebony on back trying to get her to stop laughing, but ends up cracking up to and begins crying from laughing so much*

Yes! Please do.


message 33: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
well, first you do this....then that....and fold it like that, yes, right there.....perfect!


message 34: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
ooooooo!!!! Ok so you this and that.... yea and you tape here... and NO no NOOOOO! Ebony!!!!... Help me out of this.... I've created a monster!!!!!

*Starts running away from paper bag monster*


message 35: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
*heroic music* i'll save you citizen! *pulls out scissors* take that! and that! ye foul beast! *snipe snipe*


message 36: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
*Monster dies.* *YAYZ! runs up and hugs Ebony! Thank ye for saving me!*


message 37: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
you're welcome Missy! *hugs back*


message 38: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
*Jumps with joy!* I shall never have to fear getting eaten by a paper bag monster ever again!


message 39: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
yay! you be careful now little girl!


message 40: by Kiele (last edited Oct 05, 2010 06:39PM) (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
Ok, miss superhero!


message 41: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
MRS.?!?!?!


message 42: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
I mean ms. lol, sorry, thinking of older superheros...


message 43: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
i don't think many superheros get married........you know, it would be hard to fight with a baby.


message 44: by Kiele (new)

Kiele Marston (kielemarston) | 414 comments Mod
um...... I guess your right....


message 45: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
ok i DID write that non rhyming poem, but i left it at school and our holiday just started. sorry. maybe next semester.


message 46: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
The Path goes on ward.
Ever onward.

The Lonely Traveler walks.
Ever onward.

The Long Path has no end.
Ever onward.

Without a word.
Ever onward.

The After Death row.
Ever onward.

Trappings swing forward.
Ever onward.

His wares jangling.
Ever onward.

Without a word.
Ever onward.

ever onward.


message 47: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
ta-da!!


Diabolical Daemonic   (DemonicAngel) | 15 comments Oh my, I absolutely love your poems! The comments are pretty hilarious too. XD


message 49: by Emily, lazy bum (new)

Emily (lafillebrigitte) | 410 comments Mod
thank you! yay for paper bag monsters! XD


message 50: by Diabolical Daemonic (last edited Feb 09, 2011 04:30PM) (new)

Diabolical Daemonic   (DemonicAngel) | 15 comments lol


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