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so, i can just post lil' stories/poem type thingys here??
Just wondering if you all would look at this short story. It's about a lost friendship of two people who meet at a school football game. Feelings develop, pasts are dug up, hearts are broken, and all lead up to the school's final game in the soccer tournament. What will happen to George and Abigail?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Alright, this story has completely been abandoned by viewers, so if anyone wants to read it while it's still up, feel free!
A Fighter's Spirit: Kat Masaru
Kat Masaru lives in her grandfathers Dojo and trains with his martial arts classes. She is a tough Fighter whom refuses to lose, especially to men. Most importantly she has a weakness for the statement: "I can't hit a girl." But will that statement blind her from seeing what she's really doing? Will she be blinded by the pain so much that she won't realize the cost of her own life?
"You can take away the fighter, but the spirit still remains."
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
A Fighter's Spirit: Kat Masaru
Kat Masaru lives in her grandfathers Dojo and trains with his martial arts classes. She is a tough Fighter whom refuses to lose, especially to men. Most importantly she has a weakness for the statement: "I can't hit a girl." But will that statement blind her from seeing what she's really doing? Will she be blinded by the pain so much that she won't realize the cost of her own life?
"You can take away the fighter, but the spirit still remains."
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Sigh, yeah, you're right. You would. But I'm talking about other members. If you want to post yours anyway then go ahead.
Is the story worth reading? If Yes then it's great to continue writing. If it's not? Then it's wrong, meaning it's ok with some flaws(spelling doesn't count unless it's a lot). I wouldn't get too caught up over the whole "wrong" thing. Many stories are always write! ^-^ Feel free to post your stories. I will definitely read them!
Enjoy!