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Bad grammar, poor syntax and poor use of vocabulary have me reaching for my mental red pencil.
If the book is good I can excuse it but sometimes I wonder if the editor went through the book on autopilot.
To / too gets me - if it is misused it will bring me to a screeching halt because my poor brain is trying to make sense of it. (i.e. to hot rather than too hot).
Many others (or should I have said other's?) get me too - if I see between you and I, I start screaming. Literally.
So, Rob, do you have to have the fire department on speed dial to help get your wife out of the tree or is she able to get down by herself?
Many others (or should I have said other's?) get me too - if I see between you and I, I start screaming. Literally.
So, Rob, do you have to have the fire department on speed dial to help get your wife out of the tree or is she able to get down by herself?

Three times in The Passage, someone "wretched". Not retched. They puked, in other words. But they should have retched, not wretched. That really bugged me.
One word misuse is a typo. Three indicates ignorance.
One word misuse is a typo. Three indicates ignorance.

Eric wrote: "Three times in The Passage, someone "wretched". Not retched. They puked, in other words. But they should have retched, not wretched. That really bugged me.
One word misuse is a typo. Three indicat..."
Eric,
Maybe they were wretched while they retched.
One word misuse is a typo. Three indicat..."
Eric,
Maybe they were wretched while they retched.
I write a column for a newspaper in Ohio. Erma Bombeck is my inspiration.
A few years ago my column explained the different but obvious nerves when our son (only child) was leaving for a 3-week residential pre-college experience - his longest time away from home.
Son's came out when he opened the dorm closet and found no hangers were in the closet. I said exactly that in my submission.
Copy editors changed it to hangars - which raised my dander. When son questioned what was wrong, I explained. He quipped, "There weren't any of those in there either!"
That apple isn't falling far from the tree!
A few years ago my column explained the different but obvious nerves when our son (only child) was leaving for a 3-week residential pre-college experience - his longest time away from home.
Son's came out when he opened the dorm closet and found no hangers were in the closet. I said exactly that in my submission.
Copy editors changed it to hangars - which raised my dander. When son questioned what was wrong, I explained. He quipped, "There weren't any of those in there either!"
That apple isn't falling far from the tree!


I went through a Jane Green phase a few years ago and the last one I read I actually did circle all the plethora of errors (it was my own copy!). Misspellings like Massachusetts, which even spellcheck would pick up! I emailed a laundry list of errors to the publishing company, but never heard back, no surprise.



I often see "bear" and "bare" mixed up.

Loved Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation.
My hot button-- "less" and "fewer". And "good" and "well" (unless someone singing I Feel Good! Then I forgive them).

$10 a pop!! Please tell me you're kidding! I'm sorry, but that's just absurd. Or, am I missing something?
I wonder if the charge is meant to motivate editors or are there really that many hidden costs?
I suppose if I charged my daughter $10 for every mistake in her papers she would be far more careful in her proofreading.


In general, anything that could be construed as a typo or minor oversight doesn't bother me, though I have been known to pencil in an occasional correction! But recently (earlier this year) I tried to read a book that was so poorly written (syntactical blunders abounded) that I couldn't get past the first few pages. Adding insult to injury, it was a best-seller and a library-promoted book!
I was listening to "Catching Fire" this morning and I heard the following:
"It was clear she wasn't in District Thirteen. Which begs the question, what was?"
AAAAARGH! The constant misuse of "begs the question" is really getting on my nerves!
"It was clear she wasn't in District Thirteen. Which begs the question, what was?"
AAAAARGH! The constant misuse of "begs the question" is really getting on my nerves!

That said, I won't correct actual humans, speaking out loud. That's just rude. And in forums like this, I don't expect careful editing.
That said, my sister and I were trading common misuses of traditional phrases that make us crazy the other day. "A mute point," "deep-seeded resistance," "tow the line." Spelling is the tip of the iceberg.


But really, in published work, it seems that correct grammar is (or should be) a taken-for-granted requirement.

One word misuse is a typo. Three indicat..."
"retched": that's awful. Hilarious. But awful. 3 times-that might have done me in right there!

I hate when authors make these mistakes but I am loving these posts.
"tow the line", "deep seeded". omg, thank you for brightening my day.
:D

One or two in a book I can forgive as well as some clumsy grammar. But when mistakes appear every few pages it takes me out of the story and them I become annoyed.
But my real bugbear is the misuse or lazy use of vocabulary.

Here's an analogy. An art museum carries Monet AND Basquiat; DaVinci AND Jackson Pollack -- yet all are considered high art. I never hear people beefing in that regard....
People need to consider the contextual aspect of bad grammar within a story before they start whining about perfection the character in the story may not be compelled to achieve.
That's just my opinion. Thanks for letting me weigh in. =D
--LP

I think we can all appreciate intentional use of non-standard grammar especially in dialogue but that is definitely not what I was talking about.
Using there instead of their, "deep-seeded resistance" or imply instead of infer are simply mistakes and rarely add to the flavour of a text.
Sunniemom wrote: "Obvious grammatical errors definitely jerk me out of the story. I think the words I see swapped the most are "bizarre" and "bazaar".
Hey Linda- I just found a signed 3rd Edition of At Wit's End i..."
AAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I just finished with my library book sale where so many people donate book to the library who obviously can't bear to destroy a book - even when it should have a proper burial. (I find it difficult to do, too, but, if it reeks of mildew or has creatures in it - please don't donate it to contaminate all the other books.
I'm getting pickier and picker on grammar (may have to do with my better understanding of it). I have seen the wrong to or is it the wrong too (never the wrong two) used.
Anytime someone gets paid to misuse the English language I object.
Hey Linda- I just found a signed 3rd Edition of At Wit's End i..."
AAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I just finished with my library book sale where so many people donate book to the library who obviously can't bear to destroy a book - even when it should have a proper burial. (I find it difficult to do, too, but, if it reeks of mildew or has creatures in it - please don't donate it to contaminate all the other books.
I'm getting pickier and picker on grammar (may have to do with my better understanding of it). I have seen the wrong to or is it the wrong too (never the wrong two) used.
Anytime someone gets paid to misuse the English language I object.
Loved hearing the comments generated by this topic. I generally read spelling errors as if they were correct. Grammar, unless it's really awful, goes right over my head.
Some grammar/spelling errors are like a trap to me. I get stuck trying to make sense of a too misplaced until I realize it's their (or is it there or they're) error.

I often read uncorrected ARCs so there are bound to be some typos and mistakes. If the book is good enough I don't notice.
The mistakes start to irritate when there are so many it interferes with my comprehension of the text or if the book is so boring there is nothing else to distract me.
I once heard a film review remark that if you're noticing the technical qualities of a film then the film isn't engaging you enough.

If there are only a few typos in a book it doesn't bother me, but I recently read a new hardback, which costs 50 dollars, and there were about 15 errors/typos. That's too many and it gets annoying.
It is interesting I think, when the typos matter and when they don't.
One of the women in my kids' day care really can't spell, but I'd never hold it against her, what matters is that she is wonderful with the kids and has a great imagination.
Here or in other web forums it doesn't bother me either.
The other day however, I got an email from one of the top managers at my job, that he sent to several people, and there were 4-5 typos in it. That bothered me, because I expect him to be more professional. Just like you're doomed if you send out a job application full of typos...

The most intelligent person can make grammatical/word-usage errors while typing quickly (usually the result of getting really "into" the writing, I'd guess). It's not a result of lack of knowledge; rather, the brain invariably moves faster than the fingers, and the eyes skim and miss the errors. So you rely on the publisher to have skilled copy-editors to catch all those mistakes. In my mind, seeing those sorts of things in a book that is otherwise well-written reflects more poorly on the publisher than on the author.
But I recently read a self-published novel that had a few grammatical errors (maybe 5 or 6 in a 400+ page novel), and I found myself not caring because I was mostly impressed that the author had produced such an otherwise-flawless work, presumably relying on his own editing and maybe the help of a crit-group.


Last week, I purchased a book on the day of its release: $25 for a hardback, with dust jacket, by a noted author. There were a handful of errors in the 450+ pages; but really, there should have been zero. A lot of people put in a lot of time, money and effort to bring this book to market, which makes the editor's slipshod work insulting to his colleagues as well as to the readers. The errors were egregious enough to demonstrate that no one had checked the work. I expect that sort of thing from self-published authors, voluntarily transcribed Classics or, from translations, but there was no such excuse here. I'm still peeved about the whole thing :-/

I don't want to defend errors in books because they drive me crazy as well. The fault may not be with the editor though. I'm a production editor for a textbook publishing company and there have been times when I've had to get a book from manuscript to print in 3 months. In that time, I have the book copyedited, reviewed by the author, set at the compositor, proofread, and indexed. It doesn't leave enough time for each step and sometimes more errors than normal get through. These mistakes are usually caught and corrected in the reprint or if there's something largely egregious, we'll put an errata sheet online.
I'm sorry this is so long. Most of the time, I'm sure an editor wants to put out the best work possible but the business of publishing gets in the way. The sooner the book is printed and on the shelves, the faster it makes money.
Tracey wrote: "I don't want to defend errors in books because they drive me crazy as well. The fault may not be with the editor though. I'm a production editor for a textbook publishing company and there have been times when I've had to get a book from manuscript to print in 3 months. In that time, I have the book copyedited, reviewed by the author, set at the compositor, proofread, and indexed. It doesn't leave enough time for each step and sometimes more errors than normal get through. These mistakes are usually caught and corrected in the reprint or if there's something largely egregious, we'll put an errata sheet online. "
This particular novel has been with the publisher for three YEARS. That's right. THREE YEARS. Hardly a rush job :-/
This particular novel has been with the publisher for three YEARS. That's right. THREE YEARS. Hardly a rush job :-/

Obviously if the grammar errors are because of the voice of the character (i.e when the character is a child or when the book is written using dialect) then I find that the bad grammar is just part of the characterisation and so I can let it slide, although it does still grate on me!

I am currently reading, Eve: A Novel of the First Woman, by Elissa Elliott. I am enjoying it a great deal, but am finding a great deal of..."
That's so SAD, Rob! Sorry about that. Truth be told, I'm a stickler for grammar, too, so I'm thinking it might be your ebook format?? [At least I hope. If you give me an example, I can compare it to the book version.] I've noticed with my Kindle and iPad reading, the formatting, punctuation, and spelling are NEVER perfect. Again, very sad. :)
Elissa
I am currently reading, Eve: A Novel of the First Woman, by Elissa Elliott. I am enjoying it a great deal, but am finding a great deal of grammatical mistakes, especially when it comes to apostrophe usage. It doesn't bother me tremendously, but it does tend to draw my attention away from the story a bit. My wife is a high school english teacher and it drives her up a tree!! Literally!!!
I was curious whether anyone else is bothered by grammatical challenges while reading?
By the way, just to be fair to the author (and editor) I am reading it in ebook format so it might be a OCR or some kind of software issue. :-D
Thanx, (spelled wrong intentionally)
Rob