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message 1: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Is the story worth reading? If Yes then it's great to continue writing. If it's not? Then it's wrong. I wouldn't get too caught up over the whole "wrong" thing. Many stories are always write! ^-^ Feel free to post your stories. I will definitely read them!


message 2: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments It is one of my favorite stories to read, and I have a feeling many of you would enjoy it as well. Now, many of you might not know her, but Patti is an even bigger critic than me, and though I think my writing is good, hers is even better! Please read and review her story, it is simply marvelous!

Feral by Patti
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Description: After a drunken high school party, Millie Finch loses her bf and best friend to a mysterious accident. She hangs on to hope that since they didn't find a body, he might still be alive. But if she does find him, will he really be the same?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


This is a story about two people, Two best friends and two souls.Chelsea and Josef. Chelsea knows There are strange things going on with Joesef. Hes her one and only friend. She has stronger feelings than she thinks about him but is scared. her mom hates Josef and she hates her life. The only thing keeping her alive is him. While thats going on with Chelsea Josef has some secrets of his own and some problems and hidden feelings he doesnt know if he'll ever be able to reveal. Read This and Go on an adventure of love ,mystery ,suspence and honesty. He trust's her with everything the thing is does she trust him?


message 4: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Sounds interesting. I'll definitely read it!


message 5: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) Wouldn't by telling someone it's wrong be telling them how to write?
Because someone told me my writing was 'wrong' and a teacher stood up for me saying that was my writing style and how I liked to express myself through writing. Are you trying to critique?
Because I wanted feedback on something - a short story - but I'm not sure if your critiquing or telling people it's wrong/'write'


message 6: by Rayne (last edited Aug 21, 2010 08:52AM) (new)

Rayne http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Description:
Lelia always cursed herself for ever living, after many attempted suicides and heartbreaks. Lelia is sent to live with her cousin while another heart break is just a day or two away. Now she has to live in a small town thats not even on a map, called Forrestton. Not only is the town strange, it gives Lelia nightmares as she finds out the secrets of the town at what staying out at night can do to you. Allured by a special someone, Lelia is torn at what to do. Follow her heart or make the people she loves happy. But every choice has a consequence to it that can lead to heartbreak and danger. Will Lelia risk everyone she loves in danger as her heart wants her to, or stay on the safe side and cause more heartbreak for herself?


message 7: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Aug 21, 2010 03:56PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Carly wrote: "Wouldn't by telling someone it's wrong be telling them how to write?
Because someone told me my writing was 'wrong' and a teacher stood up for me saying that was my writing style and how I liked to..."


Haha, very good point. You are right, no one here is telling you how to write, that's just a catchy title to me. I'm just critiquing. ^-^


message 8: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) Just making a point ^^ Because it's something I've had to deal with before >.< Do you critique short stories, by any chance? Or just continuous ones?


message 9: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Carly wrote: "Just making a point ^^ Because it's something I've had to deal with before >.< Do you critique short stories, by any chance? Or just continuous ones?"

Any story or poem or anything written down! ^-^


message 10: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) Alrighty, i think i'll post it here then ^^


message 11: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Nate and Jane were young and in love, until a tradgidy hit the family. Nate keeps insisting they can start over, begin a new life together, but Jane isn't willing to. She hasn't looked at her husband in months, and sometimes she feel too alone with him. Like he's changed, but truthfully it is she who has changed. He's given her enough time to think about it, and now it's her choice to make.
--Angst, Love, Pasts--
>>One Shot<<


message 12: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments ....I still cannot make the proper words to describe this. Beautiful. I am left in awe.


message 13: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) ^//-//^
thank you for your feedback


message 14: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments No problem. Definitely keep writing!


message 15: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) XD thanks, it was actually an unedited price for my school literary magazine I might enter.


message 16: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) Do we just post what we want feedback on here?


message 17: by ~Tormiester~ (last edited Aug 21, 2010 05:58PM) (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Carly- Well it was a very well written "unedited piece" ^-^ (ENTER IT!)

Amaranta- Yes that's how it goes I guess. lol =^)


message 18: by Carly (new)

Carly  (cloud-envy) XD thank you!
And thanks again, good luck


message 19: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments ^-^


message 20: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments I thought that since everyone is posting their own stories that I could post mine. Please tell me what you think?
Description:
Everyone has a fear...
...even a killer.
Alex is a girl who has killed, and is now being tortured by "The Center." She meets Travis who, like her, has a shady past that he doesn't want to share. However, because of his mission he must get the "tough" Alex to open up to him and show her weakness. The center sent him on this mission. They want Alex to be used as the "Killing machine" she once was. She is drawn to him as he is drawn to her. However, will Alex's past come back to haunt them both? Is it truly worth protecting her?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
^-^


message 21: by Jane (new)

Jane Baskin (janeytheb) | 8 comments Life is madness and forces us to write. A comment on that peculiar relationship at http://foreverkindayoung.blogspot.com. If I ever get writer's block, I will blow up.


message 22: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Uh... I couldn't get on, or I did but I just got some outdated updates, no stories.


message 23: by Jane (new)

Jane Baskin (janeytheb) | 8 comments Wow, you're right. I just tried it and got the Blogger status page. Huh? I will try to fix it. Just posted again, BTW, Writing v. Eating. Kind of the eternal artist dilemma. :) http://foreverkindayoung.blogspot.com


message 24: by Jane (new)

Jane Baskin (janeytheb) | 8 comments ok I tried the link and this one works


message 25: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Got it. I'll read it then. =^)


message 26: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Jane wrote: "Wow, you're right. I just tried it and got the Blogger status page. Huh? I will try to fix it. Just posted again, BTW, Writing v. Eating. Kind of the eternal artist dilemma. :) http://foreverkinday..."

I really like this! I'm not at that point in my life yet, but many people can relate. You can feel how the person feels, starting over. Well done. -Critic


message 27: by Realteenreviews (new)

Realteenreviews This is a story my friend wrote. I think its pretty good, even though it's not finished yet. Read and tell me what you think of it!

It's basically about a girl named Lila out to get revenge on her best friend for betraying her. Here's the description given:

Grudge - (n.) a feeling of ill will or resentment.
Friend - (n.) a person known well to another and regarded with liking, affection, and loyalty.
You wouldn't think these go together...but they do.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 28: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Chapter 19 of Dead, Until We Meet Again ;^) if finally up! As well as other chapters!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

And with that, another story is finished.


message 29: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments That story is now officially finished!!!!


message 30: by ~Tormiester~ (new)

~Tormiester~ (hatsoff343) | 29 comments Another chapter of Beautiful Fear is up!!! Come find out what "Detention" is really like and see which one is better, that or school detention.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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