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message 1: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
The Discussion page for the story Tangible.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

that letter from dad was creepy. so cool

daddys waiting....


message 3: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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haha yeah, i thought that made the whole letter too. it was creepy. but it was just... idk how to put it.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I thought that was creepy too. O also added that it was written in blood.

....
But who's blood...?

Muhahaha! >:)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

that was a nice touch, Marissa


message 6: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
it was. it makes me think.

it will be hard to get around. But it was a nice add on.


message 7: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
S- you know that 1000 yen is like ten dollars right?


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
yep, but i wasnt quite sure what you guys wanted from the vase.... I can change it to 30000 if you want...


message 9: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
well DA described it as her moms favorite vase. so i was kinda thinking around $100.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
okay then 30000 is too much, it 8,420 is 100, so is 9000 okay?


message 11: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
sure... how much is that?


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
a little over a hundred


message 13: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
thats good then


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
ok, this story keeps getting better


message 15: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yeah, everyone does a great job writing. I need to add to is soon though.


(S) Asami Seo Hyun 桜연꽃 꽃 | 1050 comments Mod
sure, your the starter you know the story best!


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

how does her power work? or is that just part of the mystery?


message 18: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
Her power is to restore "feeling" to everything.

Every second of everyday, everything is slowly losing feeling. And it takes a person like Dot to touch the object and restore feeling to the object.


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