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Apr 02, 2011 12:05PM
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No, I mean I cried. :/ I'm going to keep practicing, of course. Hopefully when we start poetry in English, that'll also help. I think we're starting in May... June ish.
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When did you mean you cried?
Oh. I was confused for a second. When I read it outloud. It all kind of came crashing down again.
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Kay, gotta go get ready for downtown trolling with my two favourite boys :)
LMAO, OK. HAVE FUN WHIM!! <3
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hello sweetheart.
hell’s gates seem all the more wider
with your devastating smile.
there are soft curls of your hair that circle
when i dance fingers through
there’s a vein that’s coloured blue-green
in the translucent skin under your eye
and caramelized burnt umber seems
like a delight that i pride myself on.
there’s that annoying breeze that flits
and flirts
this way
and that
without making up its mind, without a destination held
in that enigmatic light-and-dark of last night.
this morning. tomorrow afternoon.
they all seem as eternal to me as envy.
that laugh is painfully ephemeral
the touch momentary
and all the while i’m smiling, too-
i’m lighter than a worry on a willow.
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This is what happens when I violently fall for someone.
That's written about Michael obviously. Hahaa. It's funny how sometimes I want to laugh at my situation, and other times I just want to bury my head in my pillow and cry. But my mom helped me. :)
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This is what happens when I violently fall for someone.
That's written about Michael obviously. Hahaa. It's funny how sometimes I want to laugh at my situation, and other times I..."
:) Well at least your feeling better.
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I told her I skipped the afternoon and she was so cool with it. :)
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I'm glad you're feeling better, Silvy. Just be careful, like Ivi said. You don't want infections. I just wanted to let you know that I don't think any less of you if you use nails or knives. I'm not a judge.
*huggles Maggie* Did you like my poem? OMG WHIM!!!! As always, that was gorgeous!
Here's a PJ related story. Not the best, but in progress.
LINKY: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
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OMG WHIM!!!! As always, that was gorgeous!"
"Love. Not like-- love."
Lion King II was my favorite movie ever when I was little. Still is.
Lion King II was so awesome!!! Thanks Maggie!! XD
I know, I know. It sucks. But at least read it. If you can, give me some advice? The Darkness
She always knew it was surrounding her. Always saw it. But she never knew it would destroy her and eat at her insides.
At first, when things weren't that bad, It would only come out in small trickles. If she was having a good day, the trickles coukd be ignored. But that was in the past. Things were starting to quickly change. Darkly changing, at that.
Now fights were becoming more frequent, and the trickles had turned into streams. She felt suffocated by her stress and depression, which only created more Darkness..
Soon, there were only splashes of light in her dark life. The Darkness and the reasons behind her stress were the only thoughts in her head. They were mind-consuming, and the more she thought of them, the more Darkness surrounded her.
The Darkness is a monster if you let It control you abdcshe did just that. Wherever she walked, the Darkness would follow.
No smile was born on this teen's face as long as Darkness was there. And it was always there. There was no escaping the Darkness.
Things got worse not only in the place she hated most and was forced to live in, but also where she felt safe and loved. Her safe haven was no longer safe. School was no longer enjoyable.
As rumors and taunts flew faster and faster, the Darkness collected darker and even more depressing.
No matter what she tried, there was no escaping her emotional trauma. She was drowning in Darkness. Sometimes fighting against it, but rarely.
Now a loner at school, no longer feeling warned by the once loving gazes, and as far as she could tell, failing every class, the dark little girl had hardly any light. There was no hope for her.
Things never got better. She never thought they would. As more of her past was uncovered, more salty tears flooded her eyes and stained her cheeks. The past was as dark as the present, and she resented any of it being uncovered.
Only a small spot of light could be viewed now, but she didn't care. Depression and Darkness had finally taken their hold. The light was so far above her head. So far away. The only other thing aroubd her was black Darkness. A coffin of her own depressant and dark emotions.
The light slowly started to diminish, and at first, she wondered what would happen if there was no light in her world. Nothing good. A dead body.
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Thanks, Ivi! I'm glad you liked it.
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A great piece, dark in a good/bad way. I appreciate its depth and meaning.
Does that work?
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Mags, I love your poetry, why you no write more :(
Magdalena (Maggie) wrote: "Wow, that was great! I mean, a great writing, terrible story. In a good way? Hold on...A great piece, dark in a good/bad way. I appreciate its depth and meaning.
Does that work?"
XD Thanks. So glad you guys read what I put in front of you instead of just skimming over it. It really means a lot.
Oh my gods, Frege, I loved that dear reader part...xD And the Nazi one, too.
I was like, "O.O Dear lord, Frege...OH WAIT IT'S HOMEWORK. HAHAHAHA."
xD I was like that too when I first read it.
Suddenly I love the fact that math exists, because it proves Stephanie Meyer fails as well as her characters. XD
I'm gonna try updating it every dya.
xD
Bw, i changed the terrification one to tumblr.
Bw, i changed the terrification one to tumblr.
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Mags, I love your poetry, why you no write more :("
Really? Thanks. I don't have as much deep, darkness to draw on as you guys, so I tend to write more about nature and ordinary things.
message 200:
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
(last edited Apr 28, 2011 08:55PM)
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Please help. The order is: Ballad, free-verse, sonnet, ode. If you have any suggestions for them (aside from the free-verse, since a) I don't want to touch it any more. It took to long to make and I'm very proud of it, and b) it's not up xD) please leave them in the comments. Thankoo~
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