To Disobey a Command Discussion---Closed

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yes good luck john, i have 2 :( have fun?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

i got 2 B's a C, 2 A's and im waiting on the others

[(S)]

oh that isnt too bad, right? Yeah i got all a's and a c+, i gotta retake that one... Were they hard?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

the C one was MEGA hard and the others were pretty easy!



But you guys are sooo good at blocking! Omg, i say one thing and you do another. It makes it sooo hard to write!

[[deleted user]]

what's blocking again?

[(S)]

i am osrry john, i do not mean to block. I am sorry. What should i do?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

Blocking= saying no.

Ex=) P1:we need to go to the forest.
P2:But its scary there. i'm going to go to the town instead.

Ex2=) "We are getting married tomorrow" Said Felway.
"But i don't think you love me, the wedding is off." Said angle. :|


but it's all good. I don't mind.

[(S)]

oh....

i dont quite get this one...
Ex=) P1:we need to go to the forest.
P2:But its scary there. i'm going to go to the town instead.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

P2 didn't go with what the first person said.

they went against it, They blocked it.

What the first person says should be done, if it's not done, its considered a block

[(S)]

oh... i am sorry..

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no! don't be sorry. Its all good.

[(S)]

ok XD

[John, (~^u^~)V]

lets try and finish this story!

[(S)]

yes! but i think were stuck....

[(S)]

i added some more

[John, (~^u^~)V]

yeah. I haven't read a lot of it. But i should. I'll do that now.

[(S)]

ok!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

in the place we are in the story i cant really do anything.

[(S)]

yeah.... idk... should they meet up again soon? and what about angel?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

marissa hasn't been on in a while. she can catch up when she gets back.

[(S)]

okay! can't wait!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

i still can't do anything.

[(S)]

ei! idk what 2 do!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

as a response to your comment on the other thread, no i can't continue on the story.

Idk what Kat was thinking when she posted but i posted on the previous page that we are on (at the moment) that Felway was getting in a fight with the uncle dude and at the moment is being killed. So... idk what to do.

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oh... i must have mis read. evil uncle! Siki must help! AHHHHHHH!! idk what to do!

[[deleted user]]

hey john, i'm not sure what you had in mind with felway and the uncle, but he seemed like he needed saving. i can delete my comment about kia if you want.

[(S)]

no!! it is good!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no. s'all good, leave it, we'll work around it.

[(S)]

Kat? Kat are you here?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no, i am.

[(S)]

was my last post effective?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

i was able to work off of it.

[[deleted user]]

i'm here. what do you want kia to do?

[(S)]

what kia does! Be Kia!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

idk. your in control of her.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

ummmm... is the uncle dude being in a force field from Zen? Or what happened in that one post by Kat?


And i'll let you guys decide what happens to felway.

[[deleted user]]

It's gotten so confusing....

[(S)]

John, we need you to rp th uncle. i dont think i can do anything else til u do...

[John, (~^u^~)V]

DA, are you still confused?


And i hope everyone is okay with my post, i know it my "restrict" somethings.

[[deleted user]]

I kind of get it now. Just let me know if any of my posts go go with the story

[John, (~^u^~)V]

its coming along great guys. its going to be an awesome ending.

[(S)]

:') i love this rp soo much. Maybe it would be fun to do one like one in the futare! lol

[John, (~^u^~)V]

i have a different plan for something that is different but similar to this role play

[(S)]

!!!!!!!!!!!!HURRAY!!!!!!

[[deleted user]]

That was an awesome ending, John. I have to say, though, I'm sad it's over :(

[John, (~^u^~)V]

thank you. i too, though, am sad that it is over. But i still hope that we keep writing together and that we can think of something just as good as To disobey a command.

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we need to write together, if this group goes under there is not hope for our writing! I loved TDAC sooo much and John, you did do soooo awesome on the ending!!! I learned sooooo much english from this group. IT CAN NOT DIE! DO YOU HEAR ME!!!!!??

oh by the way, i started a english manga of Ink, from Sakura's point of view. You can see some of it here:


http://m887.photobucket.com/albumview...

[John, (~^u^~)V]

thank you very much. I will no let this creative writing forum die because i believe that my mind will not be at rest and there will always be creative ideas to share.

As for you making that manga, that is really cool. I find it awesome that we are able to create ideas that blossom into things more than just a thread on a website. Keep up the good work.

[Kat]

*ritual chant*
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
This story not only made me a better writer, it made me more proffesional. And I hope less obnoxious. ;)
We should really try to publish it. Seriously. I'll do all the copy paste spell check crap when I get off spring break!

[[deleted user]]

I agree. Sequel would be epic.