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message 301: by [deleted user] (new)

um...did she kill him in the first place, or did you edit that later?


message 302: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
what?


message 303: by [deleted user] (new)

when i read it before, i guess i didn't catch the part where the uncle died. he stabbed himself. i read it too fast the first time around.


message 304: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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WHA?!?!! SPOILER! i haven't read that yet!


message 305: by [deleted user] (new)

just kidding


message 306: by (S) (new)

(S) lol!


message 307: by [deleted user] (new)

sorry


message 308: by (S) (new)

(S) well, he'd read it sooner or later, lol, *trying to be optimistic smile*


message 309: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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lol i know. Sorry i havent gotten around to posting on it lately. Im very busy


message 310: by [deleted user] (new)

okay, so "League of Darkness" was what first popped into my head. if you can come up with something better, i'll change it


message 311: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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i kinda like it. It sounds cool and its a great twist.


message 312: by [deleted user] (new)

just had another idea--League of Shadows. but that one almost sounds familiar. anybody recognize it from a book or movie or something?


message 313: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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i haven't heard of it


message 314: by (S) (new)

(S) nope, but i love the idea!!! Dark magic, action, drama!


message 315: by [deleted user] (new)

marissa--you could have angel follow them using her magic. or she saw zen go, so she just follows in that direction


message 316: by (S) (new)

(S) nice!


message 317: by [deleted user] (new)

6 magicians...how convenient :P


message 318: by (S) (new)

(S) lol mages!


message 319: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! it was Zen that said magicians. wasn't he telling Siki off earlier that it was mages and not magicians and witches?


message 320: by (S) (new)

(S) lol i think so, but lets just leave it as Mages and sometime magicians, lol


message 321: by [deleted user] (new)

alright.

where did everybody go??!!


message 322: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Dark Angel wrote: "just had another idea--League of Shadows. but that one almost sounds familiar. anybody recognize it from a book or movie or something?"

It sounds like Harry Potter. Like, Death Eaters. Not a real connection but I just thought..


message 323: by (S) (new)

(S) im here, lol! but where are you John!!


message 324: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, john hasn't posted in to disobey a command for a while.


message 325: by (S) (new)

(S) JOHN!!! WE ARE CALLING YOU
IDIO SHIPSHEOH!!!


message 326: by [deleted user] (new)

lets do a john dance instead of a rain dance. and kat dance, she hasn't been on in a while either


message 327: by (S) (new)

(S) lol, Apache style! Thats where Sikis name comes from!


message 328: by [deleted user] (new)

really? that's cool! what does 'idio shipsheoh' mean?


message 329: by (S) (last edited Aug 27, 2010 06:40PM) (new)

(S) thats how you would say, come here please, in korean. lol!

Dago Te is hello in black mountain apache


message 330: by [deleted user] (new)

cool! i think the chinese lady says something similar to that in the movie freaky friday. i think it'd be cool to learn korean or japanese, but i don't think i have the brain power to do it


message 331: by (S) (new)

(S) yes you do Dark Angel, i am sure of it! But it wont be as useful in the states, you'd be better off with Spanish or Chinese, very dominating languages.


message 332: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, i doubt it. and it would be cool just to know it. bragging rights :D


message 333: by (S) (new)

(S) lol i dont believe so, sometimes you forget what your talking in and it gets all mixed up, people look at you like your crazy!


message 334: by [deleted user] (new)

true


message 335: by (S) (new)

(S) yes i very much agree, Kias magic is very dark, very opposet of Cass, lol


message 336: by [deleted user] (new)

i edited her post about her saying that he's assuming she'd evil. just in case you didn't notice that


message 337: by John, (~^u^~)V (last edited Aug 27, 2010 08:22PM) (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
I here, just give me some time to read all of what you are posting and i will comment!



Edit: Nvm, i need to go on brb for 30 min. Be back then!


message 338: by [deleted user] (new)

sadness! i'll be waiting! :D


message 339: by (S) (new)

(S) lol John!!!


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message 342: by [deleted user] (new)

(S) 소방 민족 wrote: "http://m887.photobucket.com/albumview......"

Cool! i'm going to add it with the rest of them


message 343: by (S) (last edited Aug 28, 2010 02:00PM) (new)

(S) thanks okay! nice ring!


message 344: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks


message 345: by [deleted user] (new)

what's going on between siki and cass? i'm confused.


message 346: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy doesnt know their parents are dead, or what iki has been doing the last 4 years, and now she doesnt know about the scrolls, and Siki wont tell her to protect her, and Cassy is stuborn and got angry.


message 347: by [deleted user] (new)

why did she say she wasn't siki?


message 348: by (S) (new)

(S) huh?


message 349: by [deleted user] (new)

nvm, i read it wrong :P


message 350: by (S) (new)

(S) oh lol!


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