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Aug 16, 2010 09:42PM
Oh crap, I'm sorry! Because when I posted, I'm guessing you posted before me. I didn't read that. Grrr. I always seem to do something wrong :(
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it just takes practice. you'll get used to it
yes! it is no big deal. We can say that felway leaned up while Angle said his name. It would make sense.
I've been involed with plenty of RP's before, but this I'm not use to. Bear with me everyone. :)
John wrote: "yes! it is no big deal. We can say that felway leaned up while Angle said his name. It would make sense."
Yeaa, that could work!
Yeaa, that could work!
you've never done roleplaying before? wow, you're good at it though
No, he meant that he's never done this kind of roleplay before. He has done it because he is a member of one of the RP's I'm in :)
and yeaa, he's gooooood at it :D
and yeaa, he's gooooood at it :D
Thank you. But actually. I haven't role played before. I have commented on the Hunger Games board, but that has been it. I haven't taken on a character and spoken with them yet on there. To disobey a command is my first role play.
Thank you both very much.
Thank you both very much.
lol, it feels like kia is watching a soap opera
i know right?! it is soooo dramatic, but it makes me feel better about my life because i don't have to go through with that. XD
Okay, so why did you put (sp?) there for?
and there is mention of a ring about 2 pages back so you might want to read about that. It will help you a lot in what you will say.
and there is mention of a ring about 2 pages back so you might want to read about that. It will help you a lot in what you will say.
SP just means basically if i spelled that right. Do you mean a wedding ring or a different kind?
No. The whole marriage thing did happen, but Felway just doesn't remember. And don't worry, they aren't going to get married, but that's all I'm saying so far! :D
Marissa: Well it was like- Felway got a ring threw somewhere he doesn't know, and he thinks it a magic training ring. But he gave it to Siki threw messenger hawk.
Dark Angel: XD That's what i was thinking too! Like her spending all that time alone in the castle chained up. she might just tell it to herself so much that she thinks its real.
Dark Angel: XD That's what i was thinking too! Like her spending all that time alone in the castle chained up. she might just tell it to herself so much that she thinks its real.
lol, that was what i was thinking exactly. she saw him from afar and wanted him so...it became real to her
well i was thinking that she attended the thing in the first post. the execution. and she just didn't notice he escaped because she was day-dreaming of him proposing to her.
Grrr! John, I already made a post saying something entirely different...
Should I change it?
Should I change it?
NO NO NO!
the whole part of this is that everyone ideas are used.
DA and i were just talking about what we thought was happening, not what we want to happen.
Never change anything!
the whole part of this is that everyone ideas are used.
DA and i were just talking about what we thought was happening, not what we want to happen.
Never change anything!
Angel= A little crazy and beautiful (:
I want to comment, but it is hard to figure out what words and actions would be the best and what time to say it at. I think that i will hide the ring on his finger until the right moment ;)
kit kat. i think that it is they start training before they are 18 and they get their training ring when they start training. Felway is only 16 and he began training and so did Siki.
When they turn 18 that is when they become a true mage or whatever. And that relates back to Sikis last post saying "when she's old enough, he'll probably just kill me and send her to do the job."
When they turn 18 that is when they become a true mage or whatever. And that relates back to Sikis last post saying "when she's old enough, he'll probably just kill me and send her to do the job."
*facepalm* lol kit kat.But sure whatever, so Zen started his training in his home town, but went to do other like hard core training when he was 18..
yeah that can be it. because once you get the official magic ring then you should train to get used to it.
but its kind of a minor detail. It probably would be passed if anyone reads the whole story the full way through.
but its kind of a minor detail. It probably would be passed if anyone reads the whole story the full way through.
thats toad XD yoshi is a green dinosaur.
and Micheal. you might want to have reason for your character coming in the story. A possible reason that he would come in the story is that he was sent by Sikis uncle to kill them. Or he could be a guard or even the guy from town that Siki stole the horse from.
Just please don't jump in like that, it creates a lot of confusion. ;)
and Micheal. you might want to have reason for your character coming in the story. A possible reason that he would come in the story is that he was sent by Sikis uncle to kill them. Or he could be a guard or even the guy from town that Siki stole the horse from.
Just please don't jump in like that, it creates a lot of confusion. ;)
Hehe okay! wait the horse or Sikis uncke?
i think that you should be the guy that was sent by Siki's uncle to kill them all. It would fit your characters pic a lot more then it would to be her uncle.
and i will introduce you into the story if you want.
But how would you like to come in?
and i will introduce you into the story if you want.
But how would you like to come in?
Awesome! uh...he I dont know?
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