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message 201: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh crap, I'm sorry! Because when I posted, I'm guessing you posted before me. I didn't read that. Grrr. I always seem to do something wrong :(


message 202: by [deleted user] (new)

it just takes practice. you'll get used to it


message 203: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
yes! it is no big deal. We can say that felway leaned up while Angle said his name. It would make sense.


message 204: by [deleted user] (new)

I've been involed with plenty of RP's before, but this I'm not use to. Bear with me everyone. :)


message 205: by [deleted user] (new)

John wrote: "yes! it is no big deal. We can say that felway leaned up while Angle said his name. It would make sense."

Yeaa, that could work!


message 206: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
i've never done role playing or any of this before. We are all learning with you


message 207: by [deleted user] (new)

you've never done roleplaying before? wow, you're good at it though


message 208: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 16, 2010 10:12PM) (new)

No, he meant that he's never done this kind of roleplay before. He has done it because he is a member of one of the RP's I'm in :)
and yeaa, he's gooooood at it :D


message 209: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Thank you. But actually. I haven't role played before. I have commented on the Hunger Games board, but that has been it. I haven't taken on a character and spoken with them yet on there. To disobey a command is my first role play.

Thank you both very much.


message 210: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, it feels like kia is watching a soap opera


message 211: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
i know right?! it is soooo dramatic, but it makes me feel better about my life because i don't have to go through with that. XD


message 212: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha!


message 213: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Okay, so why did you put (sp?) there for?

and there is mention of a ring about 2 pages back so you might want to read about that. It will help you a lot in what you will say.


message 214: by [deleted user] (new)

SP just means basically if i spelled that right. Do you mean a wedding ring or a different kind?


message 215: by [deleted user] (new)

is she delusional?


message 216: by [deleted user] (new)

No. The whole marriage thing did happen, but Felway just doesn't remember. And don't worry, they aren't going to get married, but that's all I'm saying so far! :D


message 217: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Marissa: Well it was like- Felway got a ring threw somewhere he doesn't know, and he thinks it a magic training ring. But he gave it to Siki threw messenger hawk.

Dark Angel: XD That's what i was thinking too! Like her spending all that time alone in the castle chained up. she might just tell it to herself so much that she thinks its real.


message 218: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, that was what i was thinking exactly. she saw him from afar and wanted him so...it became real to her


message 219: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
well i was thinking that she attended the thing in the first post. the execution. and she just didn't notice he escaped because she was day-dreaming of him proposing to her.


message 220: by [deleted user] (new)

Grrr! John, I already made a post saying something entirely different...
Should I change it?


message 221: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
NO NO NO!

the whole part of this is that everyone ideas are used.

DA and i were just talking about what we thought was happening, not what we want to happen.

Never change anything!


message 222: by [deleted user] (new)

lol


message 223: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. Okay okay okay! :D


message 224: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen is just grumpy in the mornin.
Or is he?
:O


message 225: by (S) (new)

(S) lol! When Siki finds out i wonder what will happen!


message 226: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments :O gasp


message 227: by (S) (new)

(S) lol...its a twist!


message 228: by (S) (new)

(S) Zen in grumpy! lol


message 229: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel= A little crazy and beautiful (:


message 230: by (S) (new)

(S) true, ;)


message 231: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments *sigh* me me me me me me


message 232: by (S) (new)

(S) lol, Angel wants to learn archery? Oooooh


message 233: by [deleted user] (new)

Heehe...
^.*


message 234: by (S) (new)

(S) yeah...


message 235: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
I want to comment, but it is hard to figure out what words and actions would be the best and what time to say it at. I think that i will hide the ring on his finger until the right moment ;)


message 236: by [deleted user] (new)

Hahaha (:
good thinking.


message 237: by (S) (new)

(S) lol yes! iknow it can be confusing.


message 238: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
well its extra hard for me because my character doesn't remember anything.


message 239: by (S) (new)

(S) lol of course!!!


message 240: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
kit kat. i think that it is they start training before they are 18 and they get their training ring when they start training. Felway is only 16 and he began training and so did Siki.

When they turn 18 that is when they become a true mage or whatever. And that relates back to Sikis last post saying "when she's old enough, he'll probably just kill me and send her to do the job."


message 241: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments *facepalm* lol kit kat.

But sure whatever, so Zen started his training in his home town, but went to do other like hard core training when he was 18..


message 242: by (S) (new)

(S) yes that makes sense!


message 243: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
yeah that can be it. because once you get the official magic ring then you should train to get used to it.

but its kind of a minor detail. It probably would be passed if anyone reads the whole story the full way through.


message 244: by (S) (new)

(S) yep, but it makes everything make a lot more sense!


message 245: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
yes. It really helps to have these discussions.


message 246: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments By the way, is that yoshi on your profile pic?


message 247: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
thats toad XD yoshi is a green dinosaur.


and Micheal. you might want to have reason for your character coming in the story. A possible reason that he would come in the story is that he was sent by Sikis uncle to kill them. Or he could be a guard or even the guy from town that Siki stole the horse from.

Just please don't jump in like that, it creates a lot of confusion. ;)


message 248: by [deleted user] (new)

Hehe okay! wait the horse or Sikis uncke?


message 249: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
i think that you should be the guy that was sent by Siki's uncle to kill them all. It would fit your characters pic a lot more then it would to be her uncle.

and i will introduce you into the story if you want.

But how would you like to come in?


message 250: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome! uh...he I dont know?


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