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Aug 14, 2010 07:15PM
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here's the songs for kia so far:
Another One Bites the Dust by Queen
A Beautiful Lie by 30 Seconds to Mars
How Does it Feel (I'm not afraid) by Avril Lavigne
Another One Bites the Dust by Queen
A Beautiful Lie by 30 Seconds to Mars
How Does it Feel (I'm not afraid) by Avril Lavigne
oh really! Hi new memeber!!!nice songs Dark Angel!
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and yeah i think it would be best for you to make her sister siki
anyone know how to get a word document on here?
tried that its a picture i scanned in so idk..
save it as a pic then post it somewhere like on photobucket. then you can use the url address to imbed it
ugh.. photobucket doesnt work on my computar!
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idk it wants to use our old internet provider to get picture, i have no clue, im not a teche
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ill try it, im not that good at that kind of story...
im not gonna respond, sorry John, i dont want to screw it up.
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Summary:
So Felway was caught stealing a scroll and was about to be excecuted when Siki saved him, but she is also the reason he got caught. We find out later that they grew up together, but Felway has lost his memory. He needs to find the other scrolls to get his memory back, and Siki needs the scrolls to save her sister. They meet up with Zen, who also grew up with them. They are traveling around to get the other scrolls. Meanwhile, Kia is following them around because she wants the scrolls too. THey just recently just noticed her, but she won't reveal herself to them
So Felway was caught stealing a scroll and was about to be excecuted when Siki saved him, but she is also the reason he got caught. We find out later that they grew up together, but Felway has lost his memory. He needs to find the other scrolls to get his memory back, and Siki needs the scrolls to save her sister. They meet up with Zen, who also grew up with them. They are traveling around to get the other scrolls. Meanwhile, Kia is following them around because she wants the scrolls too. THey just recently just noticed her, but she won't reveal herself to them
Thank god, you put this up! lol. Thank you, dark angel :)
no prob. i missed a lot, but the others can correct me when they get on :P
Zen: the oldest, best at magic, smart and sly Felway: great fighter, but has almost no memory of Siki, Zen or anything
Siki: good fighter, strong in magic but doesnt know it and cant stand it, know sure what she really wants yet
idk i just felt like say that...
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thank u, good idea, if its easier u can call me s, i dont really care.
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"She didn't mind it was her birth day and it was hard to believe that this whole thing started 4 years ago."
I left one for you to edit back in if you want, but i don't think that people will mind.
Lol i dont mind john, it was just some detail... no biggy^ o ^
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I just won't say. That's part of the rules.
lol Zen is so obnoxiously cheerful...no girl could possibly like him.
O.o maybe he's gay
jk jk
gay didnt exist then.
lol yes! i was thinkning of that tooand its no problem. Andayoh, not at all!
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a fell? i am confused, and uhh kat, lol, i ahh ment my comment about john, just so you know, lol!
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"Rest is best for her now. And it won't help much if are tiered in the morning. Let's all get some rest and ask questions in the morning." Felway said. He looked at the light that was lit by magic. He turned his back to all of them and closed his eyes."
Marissa said something about angle getting up to hug felway... he is a sleep.
Marissa i know that you want to comment. But it can wait. Please always read the comments. don't just skim or skip them. Because when you do something like that ^^^ then it throws everyone off ;)
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