To Disobey a Command Discussion---Closed

[Kat]

We should make a saga. Or a trilogy. Or a series. And get Zane hitched :P

[(S)]

lol, that would be intresting... we could go back to their childhood, or ahead, to when their adults. But another adventure with Siki, Fel, Zen, Kia, Angel, all of them, would be ohh i can't come up with a english word to describe it!!!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

Kat, you do the copy and paste stuff. But i was wondering, if over the summer, that i could be the one to rewrite it/ fix it for any faults. I know that there were some points where we were just like ".......... what happened?" and yeah, so that needs to be edited. But i think that it has potential and could possibly end up getting published.


As for the sequel. I think that it is a great idea, and i personally like what Kat said about the trilogy. But i think that what Asami said would be the best way to portray the trilogy. One at current times, one when they were kids, one when they are adults.

What do you think.

[Kat]

LOVE IT!
I'll do the copy paste stuff when I get back home, John will do the editing, one more thing:
Watch should the trilogy be called?

[(S)]

yeah, idk what ever happened with Siki and her Magic? I forgot...

I <3 the idea!!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

Commanded?
Obeyed?
Idk.

[(S)]

oh, okay lol! When can we start?

[(S)]

ooohh! great idea! I can make Siki's magic come more to life in the otehr boooks.

[Kat]

Kay.

[Kat]

Lol guys, I copied and pasted and then deleted the names and message numbers from it.
One page=six pages on word.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

that's because 50 posts are per page from the other. Are you done cat?

But asami, make sure that you say like "she hates magic" or something so that it doesn't conflict with this in the regular one.

And ill start it...... when i have time, but for sure within a week or two.

and i was actually thinking about getting rid of the magic for the story. I didn't really think that the story would take a turn that made magic involved, so if it would be alright with everyone, i would like to take most of the magic out. I would still leave some in, but make it less pronounced as magic. If that is alright.

[Kat]

Done? Nope. Not even close. It takes a long time.

Okay.

[(S)]

ok! Everything sounds good john :)

Thank you very Kat!!!

[Kat]

Lol why are you thanking me?

[(S)]

cause your coping and pasting it all!

[Kat]

Lol, don't thank me.
I've only done up to page three and it's already 13 pages on word O.O Wow.
There's a lot of spell check and such, it's sorta sad. Lol. I'm leaving that to John, unless he wants me to do it.

[(S)]

wow 13!!! I bet all the errors are mine, my english is soo bad! I apologie in advance.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no not at all Asami. And idk, i'll do the spelling and grammar stuffs. but omgosh, 3 pages = 13 on word. CRAZY!

[(S)]

XD thanks john.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

with that many pages, the total would be about 108-117 pages on word! That is a crap load!

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Whoa, I'm excited :P

[(S)]

!!!!!!!!!! that is isisisisisssssss AHHHHHHHHH!!!!

[John, (~^u^~)V]

i might have time to start it within the next three days. But i make no promises. I will do the story where they are kids.

[(S)]

okay! cool!!!

[Kat]

It's less when you get rid of the names.

Sorry for slow progress, I'm looking at boarding schools because I put it off for so long (Missed Feb. 1 'cos I forgot about it) and I have Young Authors Finalist Breakfast (Lame, right?) on Thursday. I also have ice skating and piano but you don't need to know my whole scedule ;)

[(S)]

whoa... you have a lot!!!!

[Kat]

Lol, yes. Schools ending and applications were sent in February. I'm like 2 months behind if I want to get into Pennington or Osborne.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

you play piano? Me too! how long have you taken?

[Iviana (The Sign Painter)]

Kat, when you practice, I suggest playing scales. Like, all twelve, or just the white keys if you dont know all of them. It helps with fingering and learning clarity. Also, if you have a scale book, do the finger excersizes and chord progressions. It helps. :)

[(S)]

Piano? You should try Taeyang! he sounds way awesome! My friend plays it, and she doesn't take lessons, so it can't be that hard... i wouldn't know... i do guitar.

[Kat]

Well, I used to play in kindergarten then I played 'till the fourth grade. I quit because my teacher was evil (Or at least that's my excuse :P) and then I'm taking it up again.

[Kat]

Iviana (The Sign Painter!) wrote: "Kat, when you practice, I suggest playing scales. Like, all twelve, or just the white keys if you dont know all of them. It helps with fingering and learning clarity. Also, if you have a scale book..."

Thanks. I know all the keys! I'm not that stupid :P
I know the flats, minors, and just the reg. The power of internet and youtube! :P

[John, (~^u^~)V]

I've taken for 9 straight years, im quiting in a month, but i will always continue to play. I'll put some videos of my playing on youtube.

[Kat]

Awesome- I'll watch! :)

[(S)]

cool!

[(S)]

hey... does anyone use hulu?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

no, not really, why?

[(S)]

oh, because theres a funny korean drama on their if anyone wanted to know.

[John, (~^u^~)V]

is it in korean?

[(S)]

hahaha yes but their are subtitles. :)

[Kat]

Sry. Dealing with bullies. I'll get on it this weekend

[John, (~^u^~)V]

idk, i prolly don't have time. But tomorrow. I will prolly put the NEW (A) A C ________ a Command Tomorrow.

[Kat]

K

[(S)]

what is : NEW (A) A C _______________ a command mean?

[John, (~^u^~)V]

Idk, something to make you think ;P

[Kat]

Congregate? :P
So the title's gonna be
a c-word a command?
How does that work?

The first novella is To Disobey a Command
The second novella is A congregate a command
or whatever the C word is.

[(S)]

hmmm....
To Change a Command
To Create a Command
To Chanllenge a Command (i kinda like: Challening a Command)
Creating a Command

....
Some other ones....

Siki
Zen
Felway
Without Command
Without Warning
The Command

[Kat]

Ooh I like To Create a Command because then it can explain how the Command came to be and how Uncle became so powerful.

[(S)]

Oh, i didn't think of it that way, but that is very awesome!

[Kat]

I love the way you speak! It's so like proper-ish cute! :P