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message 1: by John, (~^u^~)V (last edited Aug 16, 2010 09:32AM) (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
Here is the official discussion thread for To Disobey a command. Here is where we try to make sense of everything that is writing in the RPPOS.

Please do not talk about what should be said or what you want in the story. Just flow with what happens.

To avoid side chats in the actual thread, please always talk here.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Here is our story so far:

So Felway was caught stealing a scroll and was about to be excecuted when Siki saved him, but she is also the reason he got caught. We find out later that they grew up together, but Felway has lost his memory. He needs to find the other scrolls to get his memory back, and Siki needs the scrolls to save her sister. They meet up with Zen, who also grew up with them. They are traveling around to get the other scrolls. Meanwhile, Kia is following them around because she wants the scrolls too. THey just recently just noticed her, but she won't reveal herself to them. (Written by Dark Angel)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~Character Profiles:
Zen: the oldest, best at magic, smart and sly

Felway: great fighter, but has almost no memory of Siki, Zen or anything

Siki: good fighter, strong in magic but doesnt know it and cant stand it, know sure what she really wants yet

Angle: Maid/Slave

Kia: Unknown, unpredictable. Follows around Siki, Felway, and Zen. Plans on stealing scrolls.

(Written By Yuki)


message 2: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Oh, so If I understand correctly we're not allowed to use other people's characters in this one?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

So, what is going on? Are they all friends or enemies?


message 4: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments We're not sure. We have to Role Play It Out


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

alright


message 6: by John, (~^u^~)V (last edited Aug 11, 2010 09:49PM) (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
yeah kat you got it right.

And i agree to the role play it out. but based off of what Zen said, you could tell that Felway and Zen knew each other before this all started.


and with the part with Kia. When it said she disappeared into the shadows, what do you mean by that? did she just hide in the shadows or actually go into the shadow?


message 7: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen mysteriously 'healed' his horse did anyone catch that


message 8: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 11, 2010 10:15PM) (new)

no, kia is just good at disapearing. It was metaphorical, not literal. It just seems like she melts into the shadows


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

the horse thing was cool, kat


message 10: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
ʇɐʞ Kat wrote: "Zen mysteriously 'healed' his horse did anyone catch that"

i read it. but i don't remember thinking too much of it. It could have been enough just to knock the horse over and not enough to do permanent harm to the horse.


message 11: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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lol, siki likes Felway, but cant be with him


message 12: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Mysterious.
I was like thinking about Rangers Apprentice this whole time.
Was anyone else?


message 13: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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what is that? i was thinking about Gracling


message 14: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments What is that?


message 15: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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a book where a girl has to kill people, then falls i love and then saves people, its good, you should read it!

btw Siki is said See-Key


message 16: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Oh.
Ranger's Apprentice is about midevil times and this orphan about how he becomes a rangers apprentice and has to save alyss and cassandra and fight monsters and stuff.


message 17: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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cool i wanna read that! I always liked the name Cassandra..


message 18: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments :D
But one of the book's end is devastating cause he's about to save her---
then it ends -.-
not going to tell you which one though


message 19: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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lol, its on my too read!


message 20: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments same with yours


message 21: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
yep, is so Zen ans Siki and Felway are childhood friends?


message 22: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments *Shrugs*
Let's see how it roleplays out. Probably. I love to keep the readers guessing.


message 23: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
lol yes!


message 24: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Whoa, Felway is 16
Just noticed that. Oh well, maybe he could turn out to be an older-brother figure or something.


message 25: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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hmm maybe...


message 26: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Yes.
I sorta wanted him to be like an older brother.
Like Fred and George in Harry Potter.
*Takes in breath and bites lip* But they die....
Er


message 27: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
hmmm
well maybe i was thinking that or something else
*grin*


message 28: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
well they all know each other from before, you know that by the text, but how they knew each other hasn't been said.

And lol i knew how to pronounce siki.

and i've picked up Graceling in the library and started reading it. I didn't get far. I've seen rangers apprentice but i haven't read it.


and i haven't read a book thats like this. So i haven't been able to compare it to anything.


Kat kat, you are the best d@mn blocker i've ever met XD!


message 29: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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lol, it takes a bit to get into it, gracling i mean


message 30: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Blocker? How am I good at it?
Sorry!


message 31: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
pardon but what is a blocker?


message 32: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments I'm asking the same thing.
But thank you, John.
Even though I don't know what it is...


message 33: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
hmm is it someone in hocky?


message 34: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments No, he doesn't know me in real life.
Well I hope so.
I think it has something to do with how I type.
See how I press 'enter' everytime?
It makes a [:] block.


message 35: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
really? oh


message 36: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Not sure,
that's just my guess.


message 37: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
oh well its a good guess, i think


message 38: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
no no no. A blocker is a person that says no to something. But kat kat, don't be offended. I had an awesome time trying to get around your blocks.

Like when zen kept trying to push that Siki was siki and then siki and felway kept trying not to believe it. That was blocking.

It might have seemed that siki and i were the ones that were doing the blocking, but it was 2 against 1, so zen did the blocking.


and i lol at how old zen is compared to siki.
Siki-15
Felway-16
Zen-22
Kia-17


message 39: by (S) , Samurai (new)

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lol, Siki and Felway are closest in age... or Felway and Kia


message 40: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Ooh some summer romance?
I'm assuming it's summer...
Well I couldn't let you get all the fun!


message 41: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
lol, Kat! Dont let us in, i like guessing!


message 42: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments I was guessing too...


message 43: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
really?


message 44: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Yes.


message 45: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
lol, i thought you knew!


message 46: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 867 comments Mod
haha. and i also thought that its funny how i thought zens accent was southern. XD


message 47: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
lol, Zen was british, then southern!


message 48: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments lol, he has lots of cover ups.
I said street


message 49: by (S) , Samurai (new)

(S)  | 1050 comments Mod
oh!


message 50: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments lol


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