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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 16, 2010 07:32PM
Zen nodded. "Not as bad as some of the stuff I had to do, which involved defeating other trainees but of dark arts." He siad.
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Angel moaned, slightly getting her strength back. "Escape..." She opened her eyes and saw everyone near her. She widened her eyes as she saw Felway. "Felway! I've found you long last!" She quickly got up to hug him, but fell back from exhaustion.
Siki stepped back, looked at Felway in surprise, realising her hand was on her sword, she folded her aems, looking at Felway, quiestionally.
zen caught her. "Whoah there, slow down." He said and lay her back down. "Drink this." he said, handing her the honey and water.
Angel gripped onto the drink and drank it. "Honey and water. Thank you." She smiled her dazzling smile.
((Shes suppose to be beautiful, btw.))
((Shes suppose to be beautiful, btw.))
Angel narrowed her eyes. "Angel. I escaped from the castle. I was taken as a slave..." Her voice trailed off.
Kia watched them inside the tent with the help of another metal ring. She narrowed her eyes. This devlopment better not slow them down.
Angel looke up and frowned. "All of you have magic, don't you?"
Kia contemplated storming the tent right then and taking the scrolls. She could find the others on her own. But she was almost...enjoying herself, watching these three--now four--people travel together. It was entertaining. She decided to wait for them to retrieve the scrolls for her
Felway had sat up when he heard his name being said by this 'Angle' girl. She got up and looked like she was going to hug him. 'I've never met this girl in my life!' He thought. 'But how did she know my name?' The girl couldn't keep her balance and she fell back down and talked and spaced her words.
"Zen shut off the light. She has had enough for the day." Felway commanded. Zen did as told and shut off the light. Felway kept going back to when this all started, and how this all started. He knows he can trust them now. He trusts them with his life.
Morning light shined through the window flap of the tent.
"Zen shut off the light. She has had enough for the day." Felway commanded. Zen did as told and shut off the light. Felway kept going back to when this all started, and how this all started. He knows he can trust them now. He trusts them with his life.
Morning light shined through the window flap of the tent.
Angel woke and smiled. "Felway, I'm delighted to finally meet again. After the whole kidnap, I thought I'd never see you again. I've been suffering for years." Her hair seemed to shine as the sunlight reflected on it.
Kia watched the sunrise and almost truely smiled. Then she shook her head and focused back on the tent and its occupants.
Felway sat up and rubbed his eyes to see the new girl standing right by him. She said something, but it was like a foreign language to him. 'Kidnapping? Meet again? This girl obviously had the wrong guy.' Felway thought.
"I- I don't know what you are talking about." Felway stammered. "I have never met you in my life."
"I- I don't know what you are talking about." Felway stammered. "I have never met you in my life."
Angel felt torn. It appeared all over her eyes. "Felway..." Angel showed the ring on her finger and narrowed her eyes. "You asked me to marry you before I was captured. You vowed the rescue me."
((I know what you are thinking, but I've got a plan. He can still not know what she's talking About.))
((I know what you are thinking, but I've got a plan. He can still not know what she's talking About.))
"You're crazy! I would never marry you! I may have forgotten some of my memories, but a person wouldn't take that out of my memory." Felway said wondering when the others would wake up.
Kia grinned. It had seemed like him and the other girl had been sweet on each other when they were children, but now this other girl claimed to have won his heart. Distracted from the scrolls for a moment, she couldn't wait to see what happened next
Angel's eyes were getting to the point where it felt as if she no longer contained any. "You said...you'd take the scroll and come for me. You said, I was your one and only. Felway, you must remember!" Angel's voice grew louder. She was now more angry then sad.
"I never promised anything." Felway got up to yell too. "I was told to get the scroll of that castle and bring them back t-..." He trailed off. "I know that I didn't promise you that. I was told of one thing and one thing only. Get the scrolls." Felway remembered what he was here for. He needed to bring back the scrolls to Drake.
"Mock me if you will, but I know what you said! You...argonat (sp?) fool! How dare you call me a liar!" She breathed some more and calmed herself. "Drake simply didn't have any knowledge of you resucing me because it was a secret." She narrowed her eyes.
Drake. The name pierced Felway like a knife. Somehow she knew him and was forcing this as if it were true. "I-'m sorry." Felway started. "But, if we are supposed to be married. Where is my ring?" Felway said.
Kia cocked her head at the name. She knew that name from somewhere...
Angel put her hand in her pocket and reached in. She brought out Felway's Ring and smiled. His ring was gold. It was crafted to make it seem like a lion. "You said the lion reselmbed your courage. You told me to hold it for you, a sign that you'd be back."
Felway took the ring. It seems. Like this actually happened. Whoever suppressed his memories took more away from him then he could imagine. He looked at the gold ring. "A promise is a promise." Felway said and pushed the ring on to his finger.
Angel smiled. "Lord Issac was compeltely furious about your escape. He went mad after that. He made all the slaves do extra useless work. I was chained daily... It was horrible, Felway. Promise me you won't let them take me away..." She looked at Felway straight in the eye, serious.
Zen was listening. He narrowed his eyes and turned around to the girl. He shook his head. "Your- I'm not sure if it's momentarily or permanent- insane. Felway would never tie himself down to a family. Felway wants to explore and live. Once you get married you have to be responsible. The Felway I grew up with, would never do that. You're a scammer." He said with a thick street accennt
Siki had rose earlier that day and gone to the market to get a cloak, she came back, whering her black cloak, and looked at all three of them. She just heard the words 'your a scammer.' Siki looked at Angel. "A scammer?" she said, her hand on the hilt of her sword. "So, what do you want, the scrolls? You cant have them." she said.
Siki looked at Zen for a moment. "Thats....." she looked at Angel. "Acually i dont believe it." she said, coldy. "Was this before or after he lost his memory?" she asked, not showing how shocked and partly hurt she was, though she was angry.
Angel looked at the floor. "Because it did happen, Zen!" She looked at the ring on her finger and sighed. "I know it seems impossible, but even Felway was in love once, too. We lose ourselves in love. We want to do exactly what our minds want, but we restrain ourselves with the one we love."
Siki removed her bandana, and took her hood off so see could see better. "How do you know Zen?" she said glaring at her. "Zen is she a witch or something?"
Angel laughed. "Felway would always talk about you. He said something about being a childhood friend."
Zen narrowed his eyes. "Not a witch." Hel looked at Siki like WTF "There's no such thing. There are mages. He offered Angel some more honey and water.
Angel looked at Zen and raised an eyebrow. "Mages...? Witches? What?!" She was so confused. She had no idea what was going on.
Siki nodded. "So no magic..." she said. She looked to the sky, because she heard a fimalair call. An owl landed on her shoulder, with a peice of paper tied to his leg, and a dagger. She took both off, unrolling the paper she read the words. "For Felway." Her uncle wanted her to kill Felway. She took the beautifully crafted dagger and threw it into a near by tree. "I'll go find something to eat." she said, and headed back to town, crumpling the paper in herhand. She dropped the paper, about 10 yards away from camp and continued on, angry and fear stricken.
Angel took it and smiled. "You've been too kind. Thank you, Zen." That's when Angel really looked up at him. She smiled a little to herself and looked at the ground, embrassed.
Siki ignored Zen comment and kept walked.She oulled up her bandana, and hood. 'Felway engaged?' she thought. 'he wouldnt do that... i dont belive it.' she told herself as she walked up to a vendor selling bread and cheese, she bought a loaf and four apples. She didnt want to head back but she did, thinkning about how she was suposed to be killing Felway, and knew she wouldnt.
Siki pulled down her banada and bite into an apple. She set the bread and other apples down, next to the tent.
Angel nodded and continued to drink. After she was done, she went to a nearby lake and took a quick shower. She washed her hair and ce back. Her long black hair would drape down her back.
Siki opened the tent, seeing Zen. She tossed him an apple, she still felt the pendent in her pocket. She walked back out and looked for something to do, she pulled her hair into a pony tail and shot arrows at a tree, next to the dagger.
Angel peeked out of the tent and saw Siki. "Woukd you mind teaching me, young lady?" Angel asked.
Siki looked at her, "I am not much younger than you, if any at all." she said, and pulled back another arrow. "Why do you want to learn."
"In case the guards come and kill me." Angel said simply.
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