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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 15, 2010 04:51PM
Siki nodded. There wernt many people around but the people that were were looking at them. "Felways right. Make that thing go back and lets move." She looked around again.
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Zen shrugged and pressed down the top. He folded up the sides and the others. He snapped it back into his pouch.
Zen followed her. "So your sister. Wait, that... holy sh**. He has her? That little girl?" He asked. Realizing who she was talking about. Anger burned in his eyes. When he left she was only 6.
Zen's fists clenched. he took a deep breath. "Sorry." He muttered. "I just remember a small six-year old girl." He said. "What is she planing to be?" He asked.
Siki looked at him and bit her toungue not to laugh. "You? yeah well dont get her in any trouble, the last thing i have to deal with is two magic weilding people."
Zen shrugged. "We're not like a curse or something. We just want to be powerful. But it takes a lot out of you. He flexed his hand, his ring showing. "You can only use so much magic, or you die." He said, engravements were marked on it. Every spell he used that day were engraved on it. Well symbols to show it. "If the ring fills up, you die. And you can never take the ring off." He said. "It's on my wed finger. I'm married to magic. OF course I can get married, but then the rings would combine." He said.
Siki looked at the ring. "Hmmm..." she pulled a ring out of her pocket, a bit like it. "Is this the same thing?" she asked.
Zen raised an eyebrow. "let me see it." He said, reaching a hand out. "Where'd you get it?" He asked.
"Messenger hawk, it was to me, i think, i have no clue." she said shrugging. "Im going to trade it tomarrow before we leave."
Zen shook his head. "It has an aura. Don't sell it. Never sell it. If this gets into the wrong hands.." He trailed off. "Who sent this to you?" He asked.
Zen raised an eyebrow. "You don't get a ring till after training. When you turn eighteen, I could get you a master." He said, slipping the ring on top of his own. The morphed together.
Siki looked at him. "I want nothing to do with it." she said. "I dont even want to know what i do about magic."(gtg)
Zen's magic was enhanced. He glanced around, "Reveal yourself, you scum." He said in an Irish accent.
Felway stood and watched. 'Crap' He thought. He had received a ring just like that but gave it to someone. Someone, through... Messenger hawk. That was his ring. He remember sending it to Siki so that if times became drastic she could use it. It was just a training ring, but it was still powerful. He didn't put who the ring was from and that was for the best. He didn't want that ring any more then Siki did. He snapped out of his thoughts as Zen yelled, "Reveal yourself, you scum."
Kia narrowed her eyes. They were turning out to be smarter than they looked. Who was he calling scum anyway? They didn't seem any better than her. She decided to hide for a while
Zen dug a knife out of his boot. " stupid no good spies dont even have enough honor to show their faces, those scum" he muttered
Kia smiled as she heard that. That's the only reason she was still alive
"I don't think that it, or whatever IT is, is a spy Zen." Felway said concerned. "Whoever is following us is waiting for an... opportunity."
Hidden far away, Kia pulled out her pouch again. She pulled out a small metal ring and held it to her ear. She could hear them perfectly.
From afrar, Angel could see Felway clearly from her room high above the castle grounds. She sighed. "My once true love..." She put her hand on the stained window, only day dreaming pointless dreams. She looked at all the chains surrounding her. She hated the clanking sound it made when she moved. "Felway, my love...come for me!" She pleaded, only to be smaked across the face mintues later. She wished she was out of these chains and onto living with Felway, their orginal plan. "ANGEL! They need you to clean the blood from the excution earlier today." Angel didn't move. "Get up, you worthless peasent!" The guard smaked her yet again. She nodded obediently and left her room, the chains following behind her, making the most hollow sounds across the halls.
((uhhhh.... well ummm i kinda thouhght i would have siki love Fel, ))Siki could stand the tingly feeling she got when magic was use, she turned toward the voice, what was that, what in the world. She drew her sword. "Fel?" she asked. "What in the world..." she had no clue what was happening.
((Same here...))Zen smiled like he had heard an inside joke. "Magic. You can sense it. Great mages always come from sensing..." He trailed off and winked.
((yeah))Siki glared at him. "I hate that." she said. Her palms tingled, she couldnt stand that feeling, she gripped her sword tighter. "What is it? That voice, who's after us?" her free hand moved to where she kept the scroll.
Siki nodded. She put her sword back. and rubbed her hand together, the feeling started to go away. She looked at the moon. "Lets just set up the tent." she said. "Out of town." she added.
Siki started out of town, she knew this town well enough, she thought, she walked till she reached a point before the forest, and they could still see the town.
She looked back at him and Fel, she looked past them to see if they were being followed. "Is here okay?" she asked.
Siki would have beem perfectly fine sleeping on the ground like she had almost every night for three years, but said nothing. "So that thing wont trap us in there?" she asked, sceptically.
Zen shook his head. He held up a twig and snapped it. "Thin as that and the cloth rips from the inside, not the outside." He explained.
Siki nodded, she shrugged. "As long as it doesnt attack me, i wont attack it." she said, telling the truth, knowing it sounded pathetic. "I can take the first watch."
Siki looked at it. "Wonderful." she said sarcastically. "So theres no need for watches." she said. "Then we all just sleep?" she said.
((Yeaa, I figured that. I wanted like the two girls to be in love with him. You know, like a love traingle:D))
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