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message 251: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smirked but didn't say anything.


message 252: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia frowned. She wanted those scrolls, but she didn't want to chase them all over the country. She debated on killing them now while she set her horse free. She decided to keep following them, and waited for them to make their next move.


message 253: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sensed someone watching them. He whispered something that sounded like an Australlian cuss. He looked around. "Eh, reveal yourself you scum." He said in a thick Irish accent


message 254: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia didn't move. More than likely he was just being paranoid than actually noticing her.


message 255: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen raised an eyebrow and rummaged around in his bag.


message 256: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia slowly backed away to another tunnel, pulling out her knives


message 257: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Whatever but-" he held up a gold ball. it was the size of a golf ball. "Warning." He said.


message 258: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia crouched around the corner and pulled her cloak around her, wondering what he was doing


message 259: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments He threw the gold ball into the cave. A blinding light followed as it impacted the floor.


message 260: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia jumped onto a small shelf in the cave as she pulled her hood around her face. She crouched at the back, waiting for the light to die down


message 261: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen poked his head in the hole, his bandana falling off. He shrugged and looked around. "If you're down there, don't try anything." He said and looked at his watch. "3...2...1." He said and the ball exploded. He chuckled as he popped his head back up.


message 262: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia held her cloak close as she was pelted by debris. When it stopped, she tentatively crawled out. She walked over to the scorch mark to see what was left of the ball. She held it in her hands and smiled. She looked back up at the hole and waited for them to move on.


message 263: by (S) (last edited Aug 15, 2010 07:36AM) (new)

(S) "Patheritic magic..." Siki grumbled again, she didnt see why everyone used the stuff, it just got in her way. She retrived her bow aiming it on Kia. "So, my guess is you want something, or my uncle sent you to kill us?" She did like the idea of anyone following them, and if they were going to get Fel's memory back they couldnt lose a scroll in case Zens friend was of no help. She didnt like that idea either.

((i can make her sister if you want...))


message 264: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia grinned at the bow. She thought that magic was pathetic? She chuckled and seemed to disapear into thin air.


message 265: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki scowled. "Where'd you go..." she said to herself.


message 266: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia's laugh echoed in the cave


message 267: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki didnt know where to train her arrow. She aimed it at the sound, confused.


message 268: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"Don't waste your arrows." Felway said and pushed Siki's bow toward the ground. "Now that she has shown herself we might want to be more on guard." He turned to speak to both of them. "Draw your weapons and don't put them away." He looked to the sky. "Tonight we take turns sleeping."


message 269: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia had exited the cave another way and was studying them through the leaves of a tree. She smiled; this was going to be interesting


message 270: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki sighed. "Fine, i call first watch." she said. If this girl was going to make a move she hoped she would do it when she was watching.


message 271: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"If you want." Felway said. "Let's set up camp away from the cave, I don't want any unexpected cave ins.


message 272: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki shrugged. "Okay." she walked a bit away, she had nothing to set up, so she'd just help the others she guessed.


message 273: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia watched silently from her hiding place


message 274: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway looked at Siki. "Oh, that's right, we don't have anything to set up." He looked in the distance up north and saw lights shining up above it. "It might take a couple of hours, even on horse, but would you guys like to stay away for a ride?"


message 275: by (S) (new)

(S) "you mean you want to go to the city?" Siki asked.


message 276: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"if that is alright with you. It would be safer and it might get colder tonight. That last thing we need to add is people getting sick to this adventure." Felway said.


message 277: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked that way. She pulled up her banadana. "As long as Zen doesnt pull of my bandana ill be fine." she said glaring a bit a Zen. She looked back toward the city.


message 278: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia calculated how far the city was. She could run the distance in one night, just not as fast the party and their horse. She frowned, trying to figure out how much faster they'd get there before her


message 279: by (S) (last edited Aug 15, 2010 11:44AM) (new)

(S) Siki took one look back at where that girl was and then wondered just how Zen was going to get his horse out of his ring. She also wonder what her sister was training in. Was she going to be the next person her uncle minpulated or if she was using her magic. Siki hoped not, to her magic was just another was to hurt yourself.


message 280: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Eva heard of horse, ring?" He said and laughed sarcasticlly. "Oh yeah, you saw it." His face dropped. "If I can make a horse didssapear in a ring I think i can make use travel a few miles." He said.


message 281: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki took one look at him. "I am not traveling by magic." she said sternly.


message 282: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Makes stuff easier." He said in a sing-song voice.


message 283: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia smiled. She hoped that they would make the girl uncomfortable and travel by magic.


message 284: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at the distance. "What do you mean, makes stuff easier?" She didnt like what he was getting at. Knowing Zen, he'd proubly do it without asking her.


message 285: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Less work, more time. Travel quicker, get to your sister faster." He said.


message 286: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glared at him. She closed her eyes. "Do it." she said.


message 287: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia grinned. She pulled out a pouch from her boot and waited


message 288: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded, smirking. He mumbled something and his ring glowed. He winced as it grew hot. A burst of green light and they were in the middle of the town.


message 289: by [deleted user] (new)

Looking ragged and dirty, Kia posed as a beggar at the opening of an alley


message 290: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki quickly pulled up her bandana higher, stumbling a bit. She could live without magic, she thought. She looked around, pulling a bronze piece out of her pocket she went to a near by vendor and bought a new blake bandana, replacing her make shift glove bandana. She looked at Zens ring. "And your horse is still in there?"


message 291: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "It's my magic source. Designed for yours truly. I got it after training." He said.


message 292: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki frowned. "Congradulations." she said sarcastically. It was dark and Fel way right, it was getting cold. "Should we find an inn?"


message 293: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Maybe." He said.


message 294: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him. "You have other ideas?" she asked.


message 295: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Err tent." He said.


message 296: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki sighed. "Do you have some strangly enchanted tent, or is it in your horses saddle bags?" she asked, hoping for him to say saddle bags.


message 297: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smirked. He opened his leather bag slung around his shoulder. He ran to the border where there were trees. He set a plastic container on the floor and clicked a piece of wood. It folded into a cloth tent big enough to hold four.


message 298: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki smacked her forhead. She followed Zen, with a scowl. She sighed when she caught up to him. "It beats sleeping on the ground, i guess, but not really." she said to herself. "I cant stand these enchanted items." she mumbled.


message 299: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"We always could stay in a hotel." Felway added. "I was able to snatch some money from the castle while i was there... But we might want to have a low profile," he turned to Zen. "and that means that we shouldn't set up camp right in the middle of the streets of the city."


message 300: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen eyebrows raised. "This ain't no enchanment." He said, adding a thick southern accent. "This is just the art of my master. Don't ask. Classified info." He said, changing the accent to german.


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