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To Disobey a Command---Finished
Zen burst from outrage. Magic invisible chains latched onto The Uncle. He charged at him, sword in his hands.
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"I'm not much into child's play, let's finish this quick." Uncle grinned.
Zen whipped around to face him. "Coward." He rumbled. His aura of magic formed black armor around him.
Kia backed away from the fight, her eyes turning black as she watched. She muttered magic words, the black smoke moving soundlessly around her. Pieces broke off, disapearing through the floor as orbs of black light as she stared at the dark Master.
Casst gasped and fell to her knees. Siki was in the mist of recovering from a attack. She whirled around breathing hard, just in time to see Felway fall to the ground. "NO!" she gasped, dropping her sword and rushed toward him.
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Uncle walked toward Zen, but his eyes were not showing hatred. Uncle then looked at Kia. "You two. There are still three (?) scrolls left to be found... Numbers seven and eight are open for the taking." Uncle new that Zen wasn't sold by the look in his eyes. "Zen... If you agree to be number eight, then i will gladly heal your friend to his normal condition." Uncle tempted.
Zen hesitated, then in one fluid moment he bucked. A leg flew out, landing in the back of Uncle's knee. A sword was brought to his throat and another behind his head. But the second one was made out of magic, and made an invisible forcefield around them. It was costing Zen an enormous amount of energy, but he didn't let it show. Uncle didn't know who he was trained by, one of the most powerful mages in the world nonetheless. But he didn't know how long he could hold out. "You will heal him now." He growled, fierce like a tiger.
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"No, that's a heal him or I'll kill you." Zen muttered through clenched teeth.
Kia tilted her head, still silent. She stared, while Zen held him at his mercy. She could see the amount of energy he was using. She flicked a finger, some of the black mist rising from the floor to disapear around Zen's ankles, merging with his aura.
Cassy shook but ran over to Fel, prying Siki's hands off him. "Stop, Siki, let me help." she murmered. Then muttered a spell, the strongest healing spell she knew, which wasn't very strong.Siki looked back at Fel, not leaving his eyes. "Fel don't leave, please don't leave me."
Kia closed her eyes, causing the dark mist to rise from the floor into Felway, unnoticed by anyone. She blinked, watching the struggle between the two mages, one light, one dark. Interested, she wondered which would prevail.
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Felway's eyes started to fade, and he managed to say a few last words. "Si--Siki--... I-, I love you, and i always have." Felway started to say. He closed his eyes.
Black mist rose to pluck the knife from the air. Kia took it, looking at Felway curiously. She closed her eyes, his dying body reminding her of her family. The memory seemed so far away..so blurry. Her brother sprawled on the floor, bleeind, just as felway was. Her eyes snapped open, black with fury. Black shadows engulfed the room, matching her fury.
Siki stared at him. "No." she whispered. "Fel you cant go, Fel, you cant." Cassy looked evilly at her uncle. "Well do whatever you want!" she said boldly. "If you save Fel right now!"
Zen growled beneath his gritted teeth, his eyes were bloodshot and determined. He hesitated. What does he want?. He thought. "I'm younger, faster, and more energized than you. You need me to do your dirty work. Restore Fel, take me." He said, his mind was set. There was no turning back, he ignored Cassidy. She was powerful, but The Uncle had years, possibly centuries of knowledge behind him.
Cassy's eyes flickered to Zen, she'd help him, she would. She'd prove herself useful. And Fel and Siki and everyone would be happy again.
Zen's eyes were set on Uncle. "Do it." He muttered. "Before they try anything."
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Uncle threw two more knives, one at Zen and one at Casandra*, but he didn't intend to hit them. The knife was more tossed at Zen, and the other was thrown to the ground in front of Cassy's feet. "Kia, Casandra, Zen*; any of you that wish to safe your friend, or other reasons, take the knife and swear it.
((Meaning cut the inside of their hand with the knife.))
Zen pressed the sword into Uncle's neck. "No. Don't do it. We'll get out of this." He demanded. "Don't. Pick. It. Up." He commanded.
Kia looked down at the knife. She had a chance to save someone from this ruthless man who had killed her family. She could use black magic to get out of the deal if she did swear it. More black smoke sunk into Felway's body as she edged towards the knife.
Zen's eyes flicked toward her. "No!" He shouted, sweat formed on his brow from exahustion. "Do not touch that knife."
"Better me than any of you," Kia said quietly. More black mist swirled around Felway and Zen to strenghthen their auras. She deserved to die anyway, she was unworthy. She grabbed the knife and made a slash across her palm. "I swear it."
Zen made a grunting sound. "NO!" He yelled, his face was pained. He was stuck.
Kia looked up at Zen, cocking her head. "It's done," she said calmly looking over to the man who killed her parents.
Zen threw Uncle to the ground. He obviously wasn't afraid of death. He lunged for the knife at Cassidy's feet.
The knife was already in Kia's hand. "It's done," she repeated, her eyes dark as night.
"Not if Cassidy hasn't done it." He replied, running toward her.
Kia stepped back from them all, the blood dripping from her hand. The falcon flew to her shoulder, nibbling on her ear.
Cassy was shaking. She looked her sister, who was too stricken to do anything. Siki begged Fel for life, saying simple spells anything. Cassy looked at her Uncle. "Your the Devil." she sneered, unlike herself. "Give me the dang knife."
Zen grabbed the knife, standing abruptly he held it above his head. It was quite childish, actually but effective. "No."
"Yes, Zen. Give me the knife." Cassy said, looking at him with slightly watery eyes. "Please."
Zen hesitated. "No, Cassy. I can't let you." He whispered desperately. "Please."
Cassy shook her head. "Felway needs to live. Its Uncle, theres no other way."
"You don't know what you're getting yourself into." He said hoarsley, he was torn.
Zen brought the knife down, and as fast as any tiger he sliced his hand.
Cassy gasp, and Siki looked up confused. "No!" Cassy managed.
Zen clenched his hand into a fist, blood dripping from it. "It's done." He said, his tone turned emotionless as he avoided the pain of looking at Cassidy.
((cassy.))Cassy rushed over to him. "No Zen!" she said grabbing the knife. "That was mine.."
Zen looked away from Cassy. "It's done." He repeated.
"No!" Cassy said, trying to take the knife from him. "Zen, dont you see!? I had to doit!"
"You had to do nothing." Zen replied coldly.
Siki raised from Fel, gracefully and reluctant. "Cassy." she said. "Please help Fel." Cassy took one last look at Zen then wet to Fel. "thank you Zen." she said, explressonlessly. She turned to her uncle, and in one move she was in his face, she was taller thenhim now. "Save Felway." she raised her hand, a posion dagger in her hand. "Or i swear, right here, i will kill you."
"He's not afraid of death. He made that clear to me." Zen said aloud.
"then ill make him." Siki said in her uncles face.
Zen's face turned to a merciless grin. It was terrifying.
Cassy shuddered. "Its okay Fel, dont worry Fel." she murmered.
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"Why don't you stop cheating and face us in a fair fight?" Felway yelled at their uncle.
The uncle just started to chuckle to himself and he shook his head. "If it were that simple, this would have ended a long time again, but you see, life isn't fair, so why should i be?" Uncle started to say and also started to walk forward. "The reason that i don't play fair, is because i'd no that i would lose." He continued to walk forward in the direction of Felway. "And the people that do play by the rules... will end up loosing." Uncle said taking his sword and shoving it through the body of Felway.
((:P))