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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Dec 16, 2010 05:12PM
Zen sighed, going back to his task.
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Siki could feel the magic, but she didn't even try to make it go away. They needed to find Fel. Cassy snored a little.
Siki road with grace. She didn't know it, and if you didn't see it in her fighting, you saw it in her riding. They made it to town in no time.
Siki mounted the mare and helped Cassy off. She snapped her fingers and was in a new light blue dress. Siki sighed. "Your never going to stop that are you?""No."
"Zen, i hate you."
Cassy giggled. "I don't hate you, Zen." Siki scowled and adjusted her sword. She stood tall. "Where now."
Siki glared deathy at him, and Cassy gave him a fake warning look, before following siki, skipping into the inn.
Felway couldn't take much more. His eyes were closed and he clenched his teeth, he couldn't breath. But the force gave away as he was thrown to the floor by his master.
"Is there any reason, any reason at all, why i shouldn't just kill you now?" Uncle says to Felway as he breaths heavily on his hands and knees, on the ground.
His master, "uncle", was given a sword by one of his men and slowly started to walk closer to Felway.
"If there is any reason, speak it now. This is your one chance."
"Is there any reason, any reason at all, why i shouldn't just kill you now?" Uncle says to Felway as he breaths heavily on his hands and knees, on the ground.
His master, "uncle", was given a sword by one of his men and slowly started to walk closer to Felway.
"If there is any reason, speak it now. This is your one chance."
The doors burst open as Kia walked in, black shadows clinging to her and floating around her. She walked confidentally into the hall, tilting her head when she saw Felway at the mercy of the Master. "I heard you needed a number 7." She said quietly.
Zen silently up against the door, sensing something terribly wrong. He didn't breathe, hearing the words silently.
Siki turned on Zen. "You idiot! Felway isn't here!" Cassy frowned. "No. But hold on..." She closed her eyes, muttered somethiing like "Kalon ongi." and then snappped her fingers. They were standing behind Kia.
The shock of a girl in black made Uncle lesson his grip giving Felway his only opportunity to strike. He swung his back legs and knocked Uncle back. They were all on their feet but none of them were focused on fighting. At the moment Felway and Uncle were staring at Kia.
"You..." Felway started. "You would risk your life, voluntarily, to do evil?"
Uncle stood with a grin on his face. But it soon disappeared when Siki, Zen, and Cassy appeared behind the girl.
"You..." Felway started. "You would risk your life, voluntarily, to do evil?"
Uncle stood with a grin on his face. But it soon disappeared when Siki, Zen, and Cassy appeared behind the girl.
Siki blinked once. Then Cassy shrieked, snapping Siki back into reality. She pushed Cassy back, and raised her sword. The scroll! Dang it! She didn't have the dang scroll!
Kia frowned slightly at Felway's question. "I have already failed once. I deserve to die. If I fail twice, I will gladly accept the punishment of death. As for evil..." Kia trailed off, the black shadows rippling around her. She moved away from the others that appeared behind her, Aakesh flying through the door to perch on her shoulder.
Cassy prepared herself for a magical battle her sister would need help for. Siki glanced at Felway. "Evil is death, destruction. Give up my uncle, he will not help you like he promises."
"Siki, Zen! All of you! Get out of here. It is my job to accept my punishment in death!" Felway yelled at them.
Uncle added in a comment. "But that wasn't the reason that you were here, was it now, Felway?"
Uncle added in a comment. "But that wasn't the reason that you were here, was it now, Felway?"
Siki glared at Felway. "No! Your out of your mind Fel! I don't know what your thinking but were a dang team! I dont care if your an idiot! Were a team!" Cassy kept an eye on her uncle. "What do you mean, Uncle?" she asked.
Uncle laughed at Siki. "Felway isn't giving his life, he never even intended to do so." Uncle said. "The real reason that Felway, number six, is here, was to trick me and kill me."
Felway looked at the ground, because there was no way to defend the truth that Uncle just let out, there was no way to cover it up anymore.
Felway looked at the ground, because there was no way to defend the truth that Uncle just let out, there was no way to cover it up anymore.
Cassy's hand flew over her mouth as she gasped. Siki's gaze turned into a stare at Felway. "Felway." she said after a moment. "why?"
"The same reason you would kill this bastard." Felway said, not even looking at Siki. "He is in control of us all, and we are like the puppets, he is keeping us all in his grip, and for that, HE WILL DIE!" Felway yelled and started to run forward with his sword at uncle.
Siki uttered a curse before charging in with her sword also. Cassy was scared, but determinded to fight. She would wait for her time to strike. But she knew, somehow, that her uncle would get away again.
Zen watched interestedly, some people swore he was insane. Those people were probably very intelligent. Zen clapped his hands in a slow applaud, watching them. "Bravo." He whispered. "Brav-o."
"Siki and Fel got it under control. Though his uncle...I think there's something going on. Like a lie, or a scheme." Zen replied.
"Some people think mental capacity is the strength for mages and sorceresses, but actually most of it is patience." Zen commented and nodded. "We shall."
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