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message 1201: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed, going back to his task.


message 1202: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki shrugged and tried to see through the fog.


message 1203: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen located dots of male energy then tried to focus on FEl-like.


message 1204: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki could feel the magic, but she didn't even try to make it go away. They needed to find Fel. Cassy snored a little.


message 1205: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen let out an 'aha' and nodded.


message 1206: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded. "Ok." It felt like a wight was lifted off her.


message 1207: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Well he's at an Inn, in the town."


message 1208: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded. "lets go."


message 1209: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded, mounting his horse.


message 1210: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki sat Cassy up a bit better and kicked into a run.


message 1211: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed her.


message 1212: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki road with grace. She didn't know it, and if you didn't see it in her fighting, you saw it in her riding.

They made it to town in no time.


message 1213: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled obnoxiously.


message 1214: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him. "Lead the way, o magiction." cassy woke up by now, and Smiled at Zen.


message 1215: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled at Cassy, before trotting to the Inn.


message 1216: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki mounted the mare and helped Cassy off. She snapped her fingers and was in a new light blue dress. Siki sighed. "Your never going to stop that are you?"

"No."

"Zen, i hate you."


message 1217: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen opened his mouth wide in a grin. "Why thank you!"


message 1218: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy giggled. "I don't hate you, Zen." Siki scowled and adjusted her sword. She stood tall. "Where now."


message 1219: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Into the Inn." Zen replied as if he was talking to a kindergartener.


message 1220: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glared deathy at him, and Cassy gave him a fake warning look, before following siki, skipping into the inn.


message 1221: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed.


message 1222: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked around. Not feeling quiet right. ((gtg))


message 1223: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
((you know that felway is getting killed by siki's uncle right now, right kat?))


message 1224: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway couldn't take much more. His eyes were closed and he clenched his teeth, he couldn't breath. But the force gave away as he was thrown to the floor by his master.
"Is there any reason, any reason at all, why i shouldn't just kill you now?" Uncle says to Felway as he breaths heavily on his hands and knees, on the ground.
His master, "uncle", was given a sword by one of his men and slowly started to walk closer to Felway.
"If there is any reason, speak it now. This is your one chance."


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The doors burst open as Kia walked in, black shadows clinging to her and floating around her. She walked confidentally into the hall, tilting her head when she saw Felway at the mercy of the Master. "I heard you needed a number 7." She said quietly.


message 1226: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen silently up against the door, sensing something terribly wrong. He didn't breathe, hearing the words silently.


message 1227: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki turned on Zen. "You idiot! Felway isn't here!" Cassy frowned. "No. But hold on..." She closed her eyes, muttered somethiing like "Kalon ongi." and then snappped her fingers. They were standing behind Kia.


message 1228: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
The shock of a girl in black made Uncle lesson his grip giving Felway his only opportunity to strike. He swung his back legs and knocked Uncle back. They were all on their feet but none of them were focused on fighting. At the moment Felway and Uncle were staring at Kia.
"You..." Felway started. "You would risk your life, voluntarily, to do evil?"

Uncle stood with a grin on his face. But it soon disappeared when Siki, Zen, and Cassy appeared behind the girl.


message 1229: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki blinked once. Then Cassy shrieked, snapping Siki back into reality. She pushed Cassy back, and raised her sword. The scroll! Dang it! She didn't have the dang scroll!


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Kia frowned slightly at Felway's question. "I have already failed once. I deserve to die. If I fail twice, I will gladly accept the punishment of death. As for evil..." Kia trailed off, the black shadows rippling around her. She moved away from the others that appeared behind her, Aakesh flying through the door to perch on her shoulder.


message 1231: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy prepared herself for a magical battle her sister would need help for. Siki glanced at Felway. "Evil is death, destruction. Give up my uncle, he will not help you like he promises."


message 1232: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"Siki, Zen! All of you! Get out of here. It is my job to accept my punishment in death!" Felway yelled at them.

Uncle added in a comment. "But that wasn't the reason that you were here, was it now, Felway?"


message 1233: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glared at Felway. "No! Your out of your mind Fel! I don't know what your thinking but were a dang team! I dont care if your an idiot! Were a team!" Cassy kept an eye on her uncle. "What do you mean, Uncle?" she asked.


message 1234: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Uncle laughed at Siki. "Felway isn't giving his life, he never even intended to do so." Uncle said. "The real reason that Felway, number six, is here, was to trick me and kill me."

Felway looked at the ground, because there was no way to defend the truth that Uncle just let out, there was no way to cover it up anymore.


message 1235: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy's hand flew over her mouth as she gasped. Siki's gaze turned into a stare at Felway. "Felway." she said after a moment. "why?"


message 1236: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"The same reason you would kill this bastard." Felway said, not even looking at Siki. "He is in control of us all, and we are like the puppets, he is keeping us all in his grip, and for that, HE WILL DIE!" Felway yelled and started to run forward with his sword at uncle.


message 1237: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki uttered a curse before charging in with her sword also. Cassy was scared, but determinded to fight. She would wait for her time to strike. But she knew, somehow, that her uncle would get away again.


message 1238: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen watched interestedly, some people swore he was insane. Those people were probably very intelligent. Zen clapped his hands in a slow applaud, watching them. "Bravo." He whispered. "Brav-o."


message 1239: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy looked over at him. "Zen?" she asked quietly.


message 1240: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Yes?" He replied, looking at her.


message 1241: by (S) (new)

(S) "What are you doing?" she glanced back at the fight.


message 1242: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Siki and Fel got it under control. Though his uncle...I think there's something going on. Like a lie, or a scheme." Zen replied.


message 1243: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy nodded. "I sense it too. The magic, Zen do you know what it is?"


message 1244: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shook his head. "Never used it before, not sure what it is."


message 1245: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy nodded, as the prickling feeling crawlded up her back. "We shall wait."


message 1246: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Some people think mental capacity is the strength for mages and sorceresses, but actually most of it is patience." Zen commented and nodded. "We shall."


message 1247: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy shrugged. "Mental capacity is for scholers, and scholers are not mages."


message 1248: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Obviously." Zen said with a snort. He could be such a child.


message 1249: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy smiled. If Zen wasn't worried, then Siki and Fel should be alright. Maybe they should consentrate on Kia?


message 1250: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen watched the scene with interest.


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