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To Disobey a Command---Finished
Siki was still angry. But she was starting to feel guilty. Maybe she shouldne have yelled at Fel that way, he didnt know. She tried to remind herself. She sat up and sighed. She slipped her hand into her pouch, and pulled out a real small pouch. She dumped it into her hand. Her old magic ring. (on charie page) She slipped it on her finger. Something she hadent done in more then 4 years. She didnt what she was doing exacly, but she knew that somehow she did. She muttered a few words that had just come to her and she saw a memeory. An old memory of the three of them. Ther were all riding threw a sunflower feilding, back when they fit on the same horse. They were all laughed really hard, and then her and Fel tumbled off the horse, laughing. Zen had just threw a blueberry pie at the shopkeeper. The memory faded.
She realisde she was smiling a bit. She tookthe ring off, a bit scared at what she had done. Who else had witnesses the memory? She put the ring back away. She rubbed her hands together. She shouldnt have done that.
Kia walked. She passed through small villages and towns, through forests and fields. She didn't look at any of it though. She pondered her existance. Her failure. She had nothing to live up to now. Her reputation in ruin, she decided to just walk. Maybe she'd go down in the legends as The Walker. It didn't matter.
Aakesh got bored of Kia's walking and flew off to feed himself. He came back occasionally to poke Kia, but she didn't seem to notice it.
Aakesh got bored of Kia's walking and flew off to feed himself. He came back occasionally to poke Kia, but she didn't seem to notice it.
((i've got an idea!))Siki sighed, and realized she was shaking, she composed herself and stood up, she headed for the inn again, she'd pay for her and Cassandra to have a room for tonight. She walked in and through the hallway's silently, as she walked past one door a boy about 27 years wearing a white bagey shirt, and brown pants, opening a door. She was still wearing her cloak, but it's hood was back and her bandana down. She had the look of surprise in her eyes, but no where else, she started to continued on but only got one step before the boy tackeld her, and punched her across the face. "What the-" she started, drawing her knife, but he was too powerful and forced her hands obove her, totally weighting her down. "You." she growled, his hair falling in front of his eyes. Siki glared at him, and pushed uselessy aginst his force.
Zen was walking in. He recognized Siki. He gritted his teeth, not feeling like using magic. He leapt from the side, pushing off the man with brute force. He punched him in the groin, then made him slam against the wall with magic.
Kia kept walking until she came to a crossroads. She looked down the three new paths, then back down the one she had come. She sighed and just stood there, staring.
Aakesh landed on her shoulder and poked Kia's ear. When she didn't respond, he screeched, then flew to a nearby tree and waited.
Aakesh landed on her shoulder and poked Kia's ear. When she didn't respond, he screeched, then flew to a nearby tree and waited.
Siki was up on her feet, she stedy her self. "You!" she said, her nose was bleeding. The boy said something nasty about her. Anger ran horribly through Siki's face. She punched him, but the man just laughed bitterly. Cassy ran after Zen. She watched a bit worried and more confused.
Zen yanked him back by the hair. "Never treat a woman like that." He muttered. "Especially someone I grew up with." He added and threw him to the ground roughyl.
Siki glared at Zen. "Oh no." Cassy murmered. Siki's gaze returned to the man. "Are you-" she started but the man cut her off. "You murderer!" he yelled. "You killed him! I saw you!" he said, jumping to his feet, and starting toward siki, who drew her sword. "Get away." she growled. "Why should i listen to a murdress like you." he said, threw clenched teeth glaring ar her. "you deserve death!" he said, coming even closer to her.
Angel watched them all with wide eyes. Where was Felway when they needed him?
"Zen, stop. He is right." Siki said. The man smirked, and Siki glared at him. "I killed him, maybe the one person who deserved it." Cassy gasped. "And i am not afraid to do the same to you." She spoke with ice. "I know who you are, and what ou plan you plan to do." She removed her knife. "So make your decition. Just like he said. It's two against one."
Siki glanced at him. "He can't kill me, Zen. He won't kill anyone, the man struggled against the invisible fence. "He's just a bounty hunter."
"Whatever." Zen muttered, cracking his neck. IT was amazing how his personalities could change so fast.
"Shut up!" The man yelled at her. "I'd kill you even if it ment death." he growled. Siki shook her head. "Maybe it would be intresting to kill you." Cassandra whimmpered, and that cause siki to look back, her face softened.
Zen went to Cassandra. "It's okay. People like this have to die, or else more people will die." He said, his weren't comforting-they were the truth.
"That's our coisin." she whispered again. The man on the wall started arging with Siki again. "Oh for the love of the world Shut up already!" siki said. "Please!" And the man stood there shocked.
Siki put her head in her hands. "What are we going to do with you, your such a moron." she moaned. "What do you mean i'm a-" he was cut off by Siki's glare. "Zen, is there a such thing as magical handcuffs?"
Zen nodded. "There's bindings, and boundaries. Bindings are when they try to move it get's hot and burns. Boundraries is just when they can't move it.
"So, Alec, which pleases you, binging, or boundaries?" Siki asked. "You can't possibly... of course you can, you wicked murdress." he scowled. Siki sighed.
"Binding it is!" Zen said cheerfully. He murmered something and Alec's hands snapped together behind his back
Siki almost smiled. "So, cuz, who exactly are you working for, that tyrant?" she asked. Cassy came up behind Zen, frowing. "I thought we had better family now, Si." she said quietly, looking at Alec. "He look's nice." Siki frowned. "He was." Alec snorted. "Cassy that you? MY have you grown." Siki pushed Cassy behind her. "You will not talk to her." she said. "Now answer."
"A bit pertective Siki?" Alec said, looking at her. "Where's the other boy? Theirs was always the other kid, what's his name?" Cassy was going to say something but didnt. "Shut up and answer, i have no problem-.""You wouldn't kill in frount of your sister." Siki glared at him, but her face was white. "Just leave." She said, turning and walking briskly down the hallway, dragging Cassy with her. "Bye Alec, please be good agai-." She managed before Siki slammed the door to their room.
((You didn't need me to continue))
Felway walked up to the League of Darkness' castle. It took quite a whiles horse ride to get there, but he when he got there, he dismounted his horse and walked to the front of the castle, and pushed open the door. When he walked in, it was right in the thrown room, with vast halls leading from it. He walked forward and saw the man in the chair... Uncle...
"I thought that you were never going to make it back... Considering how you were with that trader Siki the whole time." Uncle said.
Felway was on one knee bowing to the man.
"I am sorry sir. The girl had one of the scrolls. I needed to find the right opportunity to steal it from her." Felway said.
Uncle nodded. "Do you have the scrolls now?" He asked.
Felway stood up and reached in his satchel he was carrying. He threw down four of the 8 (?) scrolls at the foot of the throne.
"I am sorry for the delay sir, it takes a while to get each." Felway announced.
Felway had to steal the four scrolls from Siki, it was all part of his plan.
Uncle snapped his fingers and three men, carrying scrolls came out and also dumped them on the pile.
"There is but one left. One more and i will have power of all." Uncle laughed. "Go get it. Bring it to me number 6."
Felway nodded. He was number 6 because the 5 before him had been killed by uncle for coming back with failed attempts at getting the scrolls. To uncle, people were just objects that were to break.
Felway started to walk away. But then turned and threw a knife directly at Uncle's face. Within the same second the man was right in front of Felway and he was lifting Felway by the throat. Boundaries were placed on Felway's hands and he couldn't breath and he could move. He was ...... He.....
"I knew you hadn't changed a bit." Uncle said to Felway. "Get me a number 7!" Uncle commanded to one of his other men working for him. "Number 6 will be dead soon enough."
(( :P ))
Felway walked up to the League of Darkness' castle. It took quite a whiles horse ride to get there, but he when he got there, he dismounted his horse and walked to the front of the castle, and pushed open the door. When he walked in, it was right in the thrown room, with vast halls leading from it. He walked forward and saw the man in the chair... Uncle...
"I thought that you were never going to make it back... Considering how you were with that trader Siki the whole time." Uncle said.
Felway was on one knee bowing to the man.
"I am sorry sir. The girl had one of the scrolls. I needed to find the right opportunity to steal it from her." Felway said.
Uncle nodded. "Do you have the scrolls now?" He asked.
Felway stood up and reached in his satchel he was carrying. He threw down four of the 8 (?) scrolls at the foot of the throne.
"I am sorry for the delay sir, it takes a while to get each." Felway announced.
Felway had to steal the four scrolls from Siki, it was all part of his plan.
Uncle snapped his fingers and three men, carrying scrolls came out and also dumped them on the pile.
"There is but one left. One more and i will have power of all." Uncle laughed. "Go get it. Bring it to me number 6."
Felway nodded. He was number 6 because the 5 before him had been killed by uncle for coming back with failed attempts at getting the scrolls. To uncle, people were just objects that were to break.
Felway started to walk away. But then turned and threw a knife directly at Uncle's face. Within the same second the man was right in front of Felway and he was lifting Felway by the throat. Boundaries were placed on Felway's hands and he couldn't breath and he could move. He was ...... He.....
"I knew you hadn't changed a bit." Uncle said to Felway. "Get me a number 7!" Uncle commanded to one of his other men working for him. "Number 6 will be dead soon enough."
(( :P ))
Zen dissapeared, not entireley sure what was going on. He returned to his house, tramping up to his room.
((Ahh! Felway!))((time change?))
Siki woke up early and woke Cassandra up. Where the heck was Zen? He still had her horse. Cassy was sleeping on her back, they had to move. She still needed those scrolls.
Zen was already up, his legs were hooked around a tree branch in the fields. He was doing up-side-down curl ups, his floppy hair falling in his face.
Zen smiled, without missing a beat he flipped down off the branhc landing on his booted feet swiftly. He blew on his ring, and the horses flew out of it.
Siki lay Cassy on the white horse, and nodded a thank you. She slumped against the tree. "Any sign of Fel?"
"It's hard to effect things when you don't know where they are. For example, try to pierce something with your dagger that you can't see. There's a very slim chance you can locate it by throwing it. Though I could always.." Zen said, then concentrated. The air suddenly had a red tint, that you had to squint to see.
"Imagine a whole army lauching every bow they have. They will each land at least a square inch apart across the land they are firing at, that's what I'm doing. It's not very strong, but it will locate easier and then I can focus on that one place."
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Felway left the hall soon after Siki and Angle did, but in the opposite direction. He was sick and tiered of this all. He wanted answers and he would take all chances to get those answers, even if... Even if it meant his death, he just wanted to remember.
He left the hotel and then out on the street. He just kept walking and saw a man with his horse.
Felway hit the man hard in the middle of his face and grabbed on the horse and started guiding it toward the direction he came. The direction he was sent from. The League of darkness's headquarters.