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message 1101: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway just laid there with is hands over his face. He couldn't sleep.


message 1102: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments ((I lost Zen, so like I'm just gonna make him randomly teleport somewhere))
Zen teleported to Felway, he was eavesdropping on thier convo. "Fel, you can't do this."


message 1103: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki quickly finished, out of pain, and fear of Cassy finding out. She silently climbed stairs to find Cassy flipping threw pages, books everywhere. "Cassy-"
she started angry. Cassy snapped the book shut. "Good, we need to go." she snapped ehr fingers and they were next to Zen.


message 1104: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen flashed them a smile. "Ello."


message 1105: by (S) (last edited Sep 11, 2010 06:12PM) (new)

(S) Siki gave her sister an angry look, and Cassy didnt notice because she was still flipping threw the book. "Fel?" she asked, softly, Looking at Felway with his hands over his face.


message 1106: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway sat up. "What are you guys doing here!?" He yelled. "Get out!" ... "All i want it so be alone."


message 1107: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy didnt look up. Siki jumped, Felway had barely ever yelled that way before. She looked at Zen, confused, and maybe a little hurt. "What..." she stuttered. "Why are we here?" she asked all of them.


message 1108: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"What you should be, is not here! This is my decision and i have chosen to take it!" He pointed to the door. "Leave now!"


message 1109: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him, "What are you talking about?" she said. "I was just transported I know nothing!"


message 1110: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway looked at Casandra, "She hasn't told you? Well she can tell you now. I'm sorry Siki, and to you too Zen." He looked at the floor, "I just need to be felt alone." He bolted for the door and shut it behind him. He kept running down the hall.


message 1111: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel opened her door to retrieve some water. She walked down the hall with a cup.


message 1112: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at Cassandra. She took the book out of her hands. "What." she said, half wondering if Felway was planning to kill himself or something. Cassy reached for her book. "Now cassy." she said putting the book out of reach. "He's getting married." she said, jumping for her book. "And he doesnt remeber anything." she said jumping again. "And its tomarrow." Siki looked at Cassy, and handed her book back, bolting after Felway. They promised to always look out for each other, and she promised to keep that promise.


message 1113: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway looked back to see if they were following him then ran into something, or someone. They both slammed into the floor and Felway noticed that it was Angel. He helped her up, "Come on, we are getting married now."

They both started running down the hall.


message 1114: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel stared at Felway with pleading eyes. She stopped on her heels, making Felway stop too. "Felway, you need to ask yourself what you want. Is this what you truly want?" Angel looked to the floor. It was now being stained with her tears.


message 1115: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway's pupils dilated and he looked at his ring. Then he propped up Angels head to look in her eyes, "This is what i truly want."


message 1116: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel closed her eyes. "But how can I marry if you don't even remember the engagement let alone me myself."


message 1117: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki caught up to them, she looked only at Felway, exspessionless.


message 1118: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
((Just go with it. and i g2g after this post.))

"Listen Siki. You always have been there for me, until that one day i left. That was when it ended and hope was broken. All i know is, i need to set things right and get this over with." He held up the ring to show her.

"Angel, Everything will make sense soon." He turned his back to Siki and continued walking.


message 1119: by (S) (new)

(S) "We made a packed, Felway." Siki said, not lifting her gaze. "You, Zen, and I. To be there, to look out for each other. Im not saying you cant marry her. Im not saying you dont love her. Im saying you dont even remeber yourself." she said, "Zen and i refuse to let you do this to yourself." she said, lifting her head. "Cassy will find a spell to help." she said quietly.


message 1120: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel looked at Siki for help. He loves you. She mouthed, following Felway.


message 1121: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at her, her eyes showing surprise, her face showing nothing. She shook her head, as if to say, he doesnt know. And followed her.


message 1122: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway spun around, flames in his eyes. "You cannot find a spell! There is nothing other than those scrolls that can undo what the league or darkness has already done! I need to get the scrolls for myself, and even if i don't remember a thing, then i can make new memories by taking what i have and grabbing it." He grabbed angles hand and started to walk away.


message 1123: by (S) (new)

(S) Sikis hand was on the butt of her sword, but she didnt notice. "I dont care if you marry her Felway!" she yelled. "But you think you have to deal with problems! You think you have to find the scrolls! UNCLE is out there, trying to kill us all!! Its my fault he's alive! Its my fault my parents are dead! Its my fault that Cassandra has dealt with him for years! And now i have to deal with this pathtic decitoin your making! To marry someone you dont know!!" she shouted. "She doesnt even want that, Felway! You dont even remeber who you are! Felway, you would never yell in front of Casandra before, you would never be so stupid! She knows now that im a murder! I know what i've done! She hates me Felway! You hate me! I hate myself! ITS MY FAULT" she said and with that her grip on her knife released and it clattered to the ground. She spun on her heal and kicked the door open. She stared walking away from the village, toward some hill.


message 1124: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel stared at Siki a long while. She looked down at Felway holding her hand. She did not know what to do. She released her hand from Felway's grasp and ran towards Siki, following the way she went. "I love you, Felway. I really do, but...you don't even remember me. I cannot make you love something that you don't even know. Come find me when you think straight on who your lover is and not who you are forced to love." She kisses him on his cheek and runs to Siki.


message 1125: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki doesnt glace back, but heres Angel. "I have no anger towards you." she says in a strained voice.


message 1126: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel brushed up next to her. "You did before. What makes you change to a normal balance with me?" Angel looked into her eyes.


message 1127: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki continued on. "I didnt know if he sent you. I didnt know if my sister was alive." she said. "i didnt know if you would kill him or Zen."


message 1128: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel's eyes widened. "I would not kill Zen or Felway. I never intended to. I was a helpless girl looking for her soul mate, is all." Angel closed her eyes. "I am not sure if I will proceed with this wedding. Felway does not look at me the way he does to you. I'm under the impression that he loves you, Siki. He'd hate to see you hurt. He's always by your side..." She trails off.


message 1129: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at her, greif in her eyes, but her face still said anger. "He doesnt know who he is, he doesnt know me, or you. I havent seen him in four years." she said. "I dont know what he felt, what i felt." she said. "But i cannot let him make this decition he doesnt know." she turned back, and sat down. "We made a promise, years ago." she slipped a small knife out of her boot, it was chipped and not perfectly made. But the entials, S, Z, F were clearly cisable.


message 1130: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel stared at the knife, almost tempted to touch the cool surface. "He made a promise with me before I was taken in as a maid. The engagement ring..." She shook her head. "Siki, tell me. How did Felway lose his memory? I need to know. I just can't bear all the questions I have always wanted to ask."


message 1131: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki stabbed the knife in the ground. "How i wish i knew." she whispered, sitting down. "Zen and i will find out, eventally." she layed down her knees up, and looked at the stars. "I have little knowledge of magic. Angel?" she said looking at her. "ill tell you what i know." she shook her head. "Theres no reason to keep happy memories anymore anyway." she said. "He wasnt always so..angry." she said, quietly.


message 1132: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel sat down set to Siki. "I know. He was always filled with dreams and laughs that would light up the room...I wonder what took hold of him." Angel looked at the ground, closing her eyes. "I need help, Siki. I know you and Cassy can help him. I know you hate magic, but can't you just let this one slide? For Felway's sake..."


message 1133: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at her hand. Her ring hand. "Angel..." she said. "We promised we'd do anything we could for each other....i dont know what i could do... cassy will find something, when she does ill do what i can... but it brings back painful memorys doing magic." she looked at Angel. "I'd do anything for them." she said.


message 1134: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy was absorbed in her book. It held millions of spells. Trill was very nice to give her that book. Her eyes suddenly got very big. "Siki i got it!" she she, jumping up, marking the page. She looked around. Everyone was gone. "Siki?" she asked, quietly, walking nervously down the hallway, clutching her book close to her chest.


message 1135: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel lay back in the grass, watching the stars twinkle. "Siki, do you think it's possible to obtain magic randomly?"


message 1136: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at the moon, it was full. "I think its possible to know you never had magic." she said. "I'd give you mine if i could. But no, i would think so."


message 1137: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel shook her head. ((I imagine Angel with a British accent!)) "The moon is quite beautiful tonight. Siki, if I may, why do you despise magic to the extent where you wished it never existed?"


message 1138: by (S) (new)

(S) ((lol))

Siki said nothing for a bite. "Because it can be used in terrible ways. Horrid ways. Forceful, unfregettable ways, i wish never to posses, i wish that certain other.. never discovered there power." she spoke, harshly.


message 1139: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel nodded. "I see your point. I think I'd very much agree if I were in your state. I think I remember my grandfather telling me about how magic works. You come from an ancient family that messed with the Pool of Souls. I really don't know what he was talking about. He really was a crazy fellow." Angel shrugged.


message 1140: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded. "Zen would, Cassandra would." she said. "Ac-" she started, then her face hardened and she glared at the stars.


message 1141: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel lowered her gaze. "You don't need to continue. I can feel the pain that's surrounding your waking hours. I am so sorry about your past, Siki."


message 1142: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded. "Its not all painful." she said. "Is there anything else you want to know?"


message 1143: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel shook her head, though she didn't know what else to say. "I shouldn't be the one asking the questions." And with that, she walked back to the Inn, smiling before she left.


message 1144: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded, a bit confused. She was still horribley angry. She closed her eyes, and slipped off her cloak, it was to warm of a night for it. She could almost hear her uncles mocking words. "Especially Felway... Especially Felway." she remebered his face from years ago, when he visted, when they were young. She loved. Her father, uncle and her all shared the same dark blue eyes. Her mother would always tease them about it. She hated her memorys and stareed at the stars.


message 1145: by (S) (new)

(S) ((just to make sure, Zen and Felway are in the hall right?))


message 1146: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments ((O.O i forgot bou this..))
Zen carelessly watched, thinking about a song he was working on.


message 1147: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel walked carelessly inside, stumbling on her bed. Before she knew it, she passed out.


message 1148: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy continued down the hall, and held on to her book, she yawn. She was tired. "Siki?" she called, "Zen, Felway anyone?" she called.


message 1149: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled. "YEs?"


message 1150: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassy conitued on faster. "Hi Zen." she said yawning again. She reached him. "Im tired." she said. She yawned again. "And i found something a bit helpful."


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