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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 29, 2010 03:19PM
Cassy managed to stop crying for a minute. "She's a killer!" she said. "A heartless liar and a killer!"
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Kia leaned back against the wall thoughtfully. She had been watching the sister for a while now, and she could tell that it wasn't in her nature to kill. "She may have killed people," she ventured slowly. "but that isn't who she is, is it? Did she tell you why she killed people?"
Cassy looked at her. "Siki never did anything wrong, before." she said threw clenched teeth. "I dont know why she did it, but she a monster!" Cassy couldnt stop thinking that way. Her sister never did anything without reason, she knew that, but is killing involed in that?
Kia watched her silently for a moment, then looked down at her hands. "Sometimes people--good people--do bad things--horrible things--for good reasons." she whispered. Then she coughed and looked up, and said more passionately, "I think your sister falls into that category. She's not heartless."
Cassy looked at the ground. She said nothing, the girl was right, but her parents were still dead, no matter if Siki did it ornot. She hugged Kia, and cried silently into ther shoulder.
Kia stiffened and blinked a few times, not quite sure how to react. She tentatively hugged her back and let her cry
Cassy stopped after a few minutes, she dried her eyes on her sleeve, this was not how her parent would have wanted her to react. She looked at Kia. "Thank you." she said quietly, and grabbed her jacket, slowly heading out to where she ran from Siki.
Kia nodded and watched her go. She hugged her knees, not sure of what to do next. The scrolls didn't matter anymore. She'd never been unsure of what to do before. After a while, she got to her feet and walked outside. She whistled loud and low.
The falcon landed on Zen's shoulder and poked him for more food when it suddenly perked up and cocked it's head. It nuzzled Zen one more time and flew off
The falcon landed on Zen's shoulder and poked him for more food when it suddenly perked up and cocked it's head. It nuzzled Zen one more time and flew off
Angle looked at him. Felway just stood there. He held up his ring. "I think it's about time we made one thing right." He said. "Our wedding will be tomorrow." Felway was uncertain of everything, but a promise is a promise. "Make all the plans now, i'll be off doing the same." He left. Even though this was Angle and his wedding. He couldn't help but think of Siki.
Angel stared at the floor. "Am I suppose to be happy? Sad? Angry?" She thought outloud. Feeling nothing but pain, she raced outside towards Felway. "Felway!" She called, panting. Felway caught Angel's attention. "May I ask you something?" She narrowed her eyes towards his ring, holding back tears.
Angel closed her eyes shut, trying to let the words peer free. "Felway, answer me." She tightened her hand into a fist. "Do you remember one thing of our engagement?"
The question was like an arrow through his heart. He stopped in his tracks and this time he wouldn't meet her gaze. "I-," he started, "I am, sorry... but i don't."
Angel looked away. "As I thought." She stood there for a few seconds more, feeling like an idiot. She took of her ring and placed it on the floor. "Why need a wedding when one can't seem to remember any of it?" She smiled and slid Felway's ring off his finger. "Its obvious I am not your love." Angel gulped. "Siki seems to be taking my role, isn't she? You're in love with her, Felway. No need to deny your confession."
((OMG!))
"I-," He stammered. "If i once loved you, then there should be no reason for me to not love you again." He said and picked up the ring. "I promised you my love, and another girl will not come in between it. Please, make this chapter complete." He said and slid the ring back on her finger. They finally met each others eyes.
"I-," He stammered. "If i once loved you, then there should be no reason for me to not love you again." He said and picked up the ring. "I promised you my love, and another girl will not come in between it. Please, make this chapter complete." He said and slid the ring back on her finger. They finally met each others eyes.
((MY GOSH! Feels like a drama to meeeeeee!! :D))
Angel smiled. "We can work together, can't we? I...can help you remember." Angel leaned in so close to Felway, ahe felt him breathing. "Just give me the word and I'll step away."
Angel smiled. "We can work together, can't we? I...can help you remember." Angel leaned in so close to Felway, ahe felt him breathing. "Just give me the word and I'll step away."
Angel smiled and leaned in, their lips meeting in an instant. She could've sworn she felt sparks fly. As she pulled away, she felt slightly embarrassed. "Felway...I didn't think we would kiss one another again." She sighed, closing her eyes for a moment. "When you left on your quest...you gave me the engagement ring, saying "Angel, marry me. I'll come get you, I promise on my life." and as I said yes, you pulled me off the ground, twirling me in your arms. You said...I was one of the things that kept you sane." Angel shook her head. "How can you not remember that Felway?" She asked,.
"It will all make sense when the final chapter is complete." He said. "But, at the moment. I am sorry."
Cassy stumbled over a root, and continued on. Siki was back at the tree Cassy threw the knife. "He was training her." she whispered, pulling the knife out and putting it in her belt. Cassy was right she was a monster. Cassy tripped over a root running to the clearing. She let out a screech as she hit the ground. Sikis head bolted in the direction. Cassandra. Her instincts told her to run toward her, and make sure it wasnt him. She didnt give it a second of thought and ran toward her. Cassy felt her, her magical aura. "Siki." she said, standing up. Siki looked at her sisters red eyes, she was crying, she thought feeling horrible. "Siki your not a monster." Cassy said panting. Siki shook her head. "I am Cassandra." she said gravly. Cassy grabbed Sikis hand. "Stop it now, Siki, you might not look the same, or act the same, but Siki never does anything without reason." she said, looking up at her sister, she had a scar right before her hairline, it was almost invisable, but it must have hurt.
Siki looked at her little sister, she almosted smiled, her sister didnt waste time with dramatic things, she always told the truth. "I didnt kill them." she whispered, looking into her sisters light blue eyes. "I know that." Cassy said. She hugged Siki, tears coming to her eyes again thinking of them. "You cant die Siki, your all i have left." she said. Siki hugged her back. "Im not going anywhere." she said, wiping the tears from her sisters eyes.
The falcon landed on Kia's shoulder as she watched the two sister's reunite. She held out a piece of jerky for the bird while she contemplated this. She was happy for them but felt something deeper. She frowned as she tried to place her uneasiness.
Angel nodded, believing every word Felway had to offer. "My love, please don't be back long." Angel said, turning back towards the Inn.
Kia jerked forward, spinning around and crouching in a defensive position
The bird shrieked in protest, then perched on Zen's shoulder when it noticed it was him. It poked him, searching for food
The bird shrieked in protest, then perched on Zen's shoulder when it noticed it was him. It poked him, searching for food
Zen handed it a piece of bread, and popped one into his own mouth. "What? you're not used to me yet?" He asked, smirking. ((MICHAEL!!!!))
Her eyes turned black as she tried to decide what his next move was. "I'm...sorry" she stuttered. "About earlier."
Zen raised an eyebrow. "Well there are 22 years of 'earlier'" He said. "But I get it. It's okay." He said, shrugging.
The sun was down and it was getting late. Everything was planned, and it would take place at 4 PM tomorrow. It would take place in town. Hopefully no one would notice them for stealing anything or running away. Felway returned to a different room. After all, it was bad luck to see the bride before the wedding.
Angel sighed. She sat on an arm chair, looking out the window. Her dress was already fitted and hair and makeup would be done in the morning. She came across a singing bird, that dared sit on the window pane. "Hello, friend. Sing me a song?" She asked it, smiling. The bird just cocked it's head to the side, confused. "I am unsure about the wedding...I really don't understand if Felway wants to or not. I should not let him get married to a women he doesn't remember, right?" Angel gulped. "Oh, how lovely. I am talking to a bird."
The bird flew towards Angel, landing on her shoulder. A beautiful song was sung by the bird, making the room nighter then it was before.
The bird flew towards Angel, landing on her shoulder. A beautiful song was sung by the bird, making the room nighter then it was before.
Siki held Cassy back and looked toward the sky, it was late. "Cassy, go home and sleep, i will wake you in the morning to leave." she said, as Cassy yawned and did what she said. Siki looked at Zen and Kia, it was strange, she wasnt trying kill them. She walked up to them. Not quite sure. She gave zen a questining look, looking around for Fel, from force of habit.
((You might want to get siki and the others to the wedding.))
Felway stared at the ceiling. He was overwhelmed. And the image of Siki kept appearing in his mind. Not Angel. He covered his eyes with his hands. He would go through with the wedding tomorrow.
He fell asleep.
Felway stared at the ceiling. He was overwhelmed. And the image of Siki kept appearing in his mind. Not Angel. He covered his eyes with his hands. He would go through with the wedding tomorrow.
He fell asleep.
((how will they know?))Cassy fell onto her bed, she started to go to sleep but remebered Felway. She started a messeging spell.
((yep the message spell))a mirror near Felway appered with Cassy on it, she looked at him sleeping. "felway?" she asked. She looked nothing like Siki, except she the same color blue eyes, in a softer version.
Kia stood up straighter and cocked her head. "That's it?" The falcon poked Zen one last time then flew to perch on Kia's shoulder
Cassy frowned. "Its just me Felway." she said, giggling. "Where are you?" she said. She looked at the background. "I thought you'd be with Zen and Siki." Siki looked at the bird, like her old own, she thought, before.... she cleared the thought from her head.
"I'm in the town of Amd." He said. "I'm not with Siki or Zen. What i'm here for is to make things right."
Cassy cocked her head. "What do you mean?" she asked, a sign of wonderment coming over her face. "What happened? Siki didnt say anything about you."
He looked back at Cassy. "You've been crying." He said. Her face was stone and was expecting an answer.
Felway raised his hand and showed her the ring. "My wedding is tomorrow. And it will happen tomorrow." He finished.
Felway raised his hand and showed her the ring. "My wedding is tomorrow. And it will happen tomorrow." He finished.
Kia's eyes turned back to normal as she thought about that. Then nodded in agreement. She knew how that went. She plucked the note from the falcon; her brow furrowed as she read it. "He's not giving up," she muttered, totally obsorbed in her own world
Cassy looked shocked for a moment. "Siki doesnt havent a ring." she thought. "Felway?" she asked. "Your getting married." she giggled. "Your joke telling skills still arnt as good as Zens." she said, smiling. Siki looked at Kia, and Zen, she nodded a good bye and went to Cassy's magic teacher or whatever she called him, his name was Trill thought. Could it be that Trill? She thought, thinking back to the kid Zens age who used to bully them until they showed him up, she smiled a bit at the thought.
She walked up to the house, a nice white house with brown trimming, two stories. A barn with some horses was behind the house. Siki rapped on the door. A boy with light brown hair, about 6 feet tall, wearing a white shirt with brown pants, opened the door. "Hello." he said, looked at Siki. "Im here to pick some magic things up for my sister." Siki said, trying to glare, it was so natural now. The man smiled, he was young, maybe a year younger then Zen, Siki guesses. "You must be Siki." he said. "Siki Myŏng, its been a long time since i've seen you." he said, looking down at her. Siki glared at him. "Im not here to talk." she said. Trill laughed. "Oh, Siki, still not intrested in sewing and dresses." he said, smiling. "I thought you would be by now." he said motioning her in. Sikis eyes hardened. "Trill." she said coldly. "Now dont say it like that." he said smiling. "Its been a while, people change, you know that." he said shaking his head. Siki didnt walk in. "Im just here for Cassandra." she her hand almost going to her sword.
Trill laughed. "ill transport." he threatened in a teasing voice. Siki looked right at him. "No you wont." she said coldly, with an edge in her voice. "I thought we showed you up years ago, Trill." she said. Trills face scowled for a second, Siki almost smiled. She stepped in, ready for anything. "Ill be right back." he mumbled, closing the door. He walked up a creaky stair case and return moments later, holding a book and a leather bag, filled with magic items. Siki's palms tingled. Trill handed the things at Siki, looking at her with a strange look in his eyes, something Siki hadent ever seen. "What." she asked, taking the things. "You." he said, the look still there. "Your not the same, not anything like it." he murmered, looking at her. Siki looked at him like he was crazy.
"Your not the same determind, outragous, tough, stong, girl anymore." he said snapping out of it. Siki glared at him, she didnt know what to make of it. She turned to go. "Wait." Trill said, walking in front of her. Sikis hand was on her sword, Trill looked at it. "Dangit Siki im not going to attack you, i've been teaching your sister for 4 years, Dang it." he said scowling, Siki didnt move. He sighed, "Siki, what are you doing?" he asked. Siki side stepped, trying to get around him. "Siki." he said, holding up a glowing finger. "Tell me, if Cassy is going with you, i want to know."
On this note Siki dropped the things, taking her sword and twisting around till she was behind him, with her sword to his neck. "You will never touch my sister again." she said into his ear. "Ever." "Siki!" he exclaimed transporting himself in front of her. "I never hurt your sister!" he said. "I may have bullied you but that was years ago! Because, because..." he said, breathing heavily. Siki picked up the stuff. "I dont need an answer from you." she said, starting to leave again. "Because i was jelous!" he cried.
Siki looked at him, oddly. He ran a hand threw his hair. "You three were always having so much fun, especially you and Fel." he said. "Im sorry." he said, looking at her. Siki looked at him for a second. "Why are you telling me, it doesnt matter anymore." she said, shrugging, she really wanted to get out of there. Trill laughed sheepishly, "Oh, well, you know." he said, looking at the floor. Siki shrugged turning around, she opened the door. "Siki, your so blind sometimes!" he said. "You dont even know when a boy is trying to ask you out." he called after her. Siki looked at him like he was crazy, the door wide open, what was he doing, he must be crazy, she concluded. She stepped out. "Your crazy." she said, turning toward her old house, closing the door. Behind she caught a glimps of Trill running his hand threw his hair, pacing the floor, she almost laughed.
Kia snapped out of it and watched Siki leave. "Be on your guard," she said to Zen as she burned the note in her palm. "Others will be after the scrolls. Mage killers." she said sinisterly, refering to the warriors that are resiliant to magic and trained to kill mages. She strapped on her bag and started walking.
((We should message michel))
Felway looked at Cassie. "It's not to Siki." Then he looked away. "It's to a girl named Angel. We will be married tomorrow. And then disappear for a while." He sat down on the bed. "If i don't see you again. Or any of them again. Then tell them all goodbye... And to stay safe.... Especially Siki." He said.
Felway looked at Cassie. "It's not to Siki." Then he looked away. "It's to a girl named Angel. We will be married tomorrow. And then disappear for a while." He sat down on the bed. "If i don't see you again. Or any of them again. Then tell them all goodbye... And to stay safe.... Especially Siki." He said.
Angel stood emotionless as she stared at the wall. Are Felway and I...really getting married tomorrow? She nodded a little, smiling.
Cassie came to realise he was telling the truth. "Felway?" she said warly. "What are you talking about? its like.... its like you dont even know yourself," she said looking at him. "Its almost like, you;ve lost your memeory."
The words shot through his heart like an arrow. For the first time in a while, he actually started to cry. "I'm... i'm sorry." He said.
He moved his hand to the lamp sitting on the table next to the bed and picked it up and flung it at the mirror.
The mirror shattered and Cassie's face wasn't visible anymore. Felway turned on his back and let the tears flow.
Morning would come soon.
He moved his hand to the lamp sitting on the table next to the bed and picked it up and flung it at the mirror.
The mirror shattered and Cassie's face wasn't visible anymore. Felway turned on his back and let the tears flow.
Morning would come soon.
Cassy looked at Felway, she was right, she could feel it. Felway had lost his memory. Her mirror turned back to her own face and she set it aside. "Oh no..." she whispered. She knew what she had to do, or try to do. Her parents would have wanted it. What about Siki? She grabbed a book off her book shelf and tore threw it, searching despertly for a memeory spell, something that wasnt giong to kill her, or Felway. Siki walked into her old home. Her uncles home. "Ill kill him." she whispered, looking at the room he had occupied. She set Cassys stuff down on the table and hoped she was alsleep, she walked out. She went to the well behind there home and pulled back her shirt on the back of her shoulder. An old knife wound with dried blood on it, she started to clean it.
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