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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 27, 2010 07:02PM
Kia grinned darkly as she ran. She was close enough that the teleporting spell didn't matter. She set up a similar one so they couldn't leave. The air turned dark as she approached in the distance
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Siki drew her bow now. "Cassandra," she said. "Go somewhere safe." Cassandra scowled, and crossedher arms. "No Siki, i can fight too." she said.
Kia ran faster than she'd ever run before. Maybe they wouldn't be cowards this time she thought to herself, chuckling
Zen held up a hand. Kia dissapearing. Cassandra dissapearing. Siki dissapearing. They all showed up in a white room, including Zen. "No magic is permitted. Well except for me. Literally it disabled all your magic."
Kia crouched defensively, her knives out of their hiding places. "So you are a coward," she spat
zen shrugged. "And you are evil." He said.
She cocked her head, her eyes returning to normal. "What makes you better than me?"
She half smiled. "You don't even know me, and you're going to assume I'm evil? Now that's evil."
Zen nodded. "Only evil people use dark magic."
Her smiled faded and her eyes turned dark again as she seemed to stare off into space. She shrugged. "It's not a requirement."
Zen shrugged. "You can be evil without it. But if you use it, you're evil."
She threw a dagger at him, sick of the discussion. "Just give me the scrolls and I'll leave you alone. And alive."
Zen caught it and threw it back, pinning her hair to the wall. "No."
She scowled, pulling it out and flipping it in her hand. "You have a death wish? You want your friends to die?"
Zen shrugged. "Not nesscessarily. But it's 3 to 1." He said.
She smirked, throwing the dagger again. This time it grazed his cheek before imbedding into the wall. "I'm very good at what I do." She turned her gaze to Cass. "Maybe I'll start with the little one first. Does that change your mind?"
Zen rammed her against the wall, yanking her head back by the hair before you could say 'Stop'. "You touch her, and you head is off." He said, knife grazing her throat.
Kia jerked his arm away, ramming her head into his while simultaniously kneeing him where it hurts. She forced him to his knees, holding his own knife to his throat. "Looks like I touched a nerve," she whispered into his ear from behind
Zen smiled wickedly. "Protection." He whispered and jammed his arm to the ribs, and got the upper hand, forcing her to the ground with his steel toed boot.
She rolled away from him and crouched. "So you've chosen death?" she said, tugging on something under her glove
Zen shrugged as steel appeared on her mouth and ankles getting burning hot quick.
Kia screamed, tugging on the metal. Something small slipped from her hand and the room exploded in smoke
Kia tackled him as the smoke cleared, sinking a dagger inbetween his ribs, holding another to his neck, drawing a drop of blood
Zen flung her off, ignoring his bleeding. "I don't feel pain, remember?" He asked and stabbed her arm.
"You don't, do you?" she said, ignoring the stab. She flicked a dagger at Cass, barely missing her. "How about that?"
Zen punched her jaw and kicked her hip. Metal appeared around her leg, and it started burning.
At first, she ignored the metal, kicking him in the stomach, and punching him on his cheek. Then the metal got too hot and she crumbled, screaming in agony
Zen moved some cold metal to her wrists, forming indestructable hand cuffs. He stopped the hot and moved cold to her ankles. "I can't torture you." He said and swept his hand over where she stabbed him and it healed.
"Coward," she gasped, glaring at him
"Well at least I'm not evil." He said, shrugging.
She swept his feet from under him. "Quit saying that!" she grunted, elbowing his ribs, doing her best with her handcuffed hands and feet
Zen shrugged and [ushed her back down. "Why do you use dark magic?" He asked, healing Cass.
((cass didn't get hit...))
"None of your business!" she hissed, pushing him back furiously
"None of your business!" she hissed, pushing him back furiously
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Felway looked at Zen’s father. It was only he and him left. “I feel like I-“ Felway started. He didn’t finish and ran up to hug him. “I’m sorry. But thank you for everything. I can’t remember you. But there are so many things wrong right now.” He lifted up his hand and looked at the gold ring. “And I think it’s time I made one right.” Finished and ran out the door.
The town Angle was in wasn’t that far. He needed to see her.
Zen punched her jaw. "Do not mess with me girl." He whispered, dark side coming out. Zens father smiled. "Mistakes are often right, because without them your life wouldn't be." He said.
She spat blood before turning back to him. "Give me the scrolls and I'll be gone."
Siki held Cass behind her, a knife in her hand. Cassy tried again and again to get free, for Siki. "Siki!" Cassy said in anger, she knew how to fight, she thought. Siki threw her knife at Kia, pinning her shirt.
Siki pushed Cassy against the wall. Pinning her with a knife. "Zen, are you crazy!" she yelled, raising her sword. Cassy tried to get the knife out but couldnt.
"What?" she said, confused at his sudden change
Zen made a signal behind his back. I have a plan in the language they made as children, to spy on people. He pulled out one scroll, it was glowing with power. He gave it to her. It's fake. Bit of my magic and replicated writing. He signed again.
She glared at him and shook her head. "The girl has them,"
Siki reconized it right away. "Zen!" she said, playing along. Cassys eyes widened. She wondered what Zen was doing with his signs. "Siki, you ruined my shirt, let me go! Zen!" she cried.
Zen turned to them. "I'd rather her have the scrolls then you guys." He said, handing her the second.
Siki glared at him. She started to punch him, hoping he'd block it. "Zen," Cassy said, confused. "Why? we didnt do anything wrong." she said, a bit hurt.
Kia sat up rolled her eyes. SHe looked at the scrolls, then tossed them away. "I don't buy it, mage." She struggled against the iron on her wrists
Zen blocked it. "Siki. Seriously. It's scrolls or your life." He said and turned to Kia. The scrolls transported to his father. The real scrolls. "Kia, there are no other scrolls here maybe you were expecting more so it let you down." He said.
Kia glared at him. He was a dirty rotten cheating coward. Maybe just this once she could break her rule. It would be so satisfying to see him writhe in pain before dying....no, she couldn't go there. At least...not yet. "Even without my powers," she huffed, annoyed. "I can tell those are fakes. You're a good mage, but you're not that good."
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