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message 851: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra nodded. "Ill change her mind." she said determindlly. She looked up at him. "Did you see your father yet, Zen?" she asked smiling.


message 852: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway stared off to the side. Zen's father had taken him in when Felways parents died, so he's heard. Felway didn't remember him.


message 853: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "Yep. So how'd you escape you uncle?"


message 854: by (S) (last edited Aug 24, 2010 03:07PM) (new)

(S) Siki found Cassandra and Zen. She at Cassandra. "Come, Cassandra." she said quietly, continuing off to Zens fathers house.

Cassandra looked at Zen in confuson. "I used magic, and chained him to the wall when he was bad." she said crossing her arms like she was a mother of a bad child. She looked at Siki. "Siki, stop being so gloomy and brighten up." she told her.


message 855: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen clapped. "Well done." He said


message 856: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked back at Cassandra and Zen. "Please, come Cassandra." she said with a sigh.


message 857: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen opened the door to the house and held it.


message 858: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra sighed. and walked in before Siki. Siki put her hood up. "Thats rude, Siki, no hods in the house." she told her. Siki looked at her, her eyes hidden. She glanced around for Zens father.


message 859: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen's father smiled joyfully. "Cassandra! Siki! Welcome, please sit sit." He said, sitting down in a furnished living room. Zen rolled his eyes. "Always so cheerful" He muttered in an irish accent.


message 860: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra giggled at Zen accent. "Hello Mr..?.. (she says his name) how are you today?" she asked smiling. Siki stares wide at Zen father. She tried to kill him, she even thought she did, what was happening?


message 861: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "Hello Cassandra. How's your training going? Good I expect. Siki, I assume you've gotten stronger!" HE replies.

Zen sighs.


message 862: by (S) (last edited Aug 24, 2010 03:31PM) (new)

(S) "Its going great!" she replies, siting next to him. She looks at Siki. "Siki?" she askes, confused. "I-i" she stammeres, she looks at Zen, she had not seen this man in 3 years, and was 13 when she saw him last. ((gtg))


message 863: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen chuckled. "We don't hold grudges very long Siki." He explained. "But we have very good memories."


message 864: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra looked confused. "What did you do, siki?" she asked. Siki looked at her. "Nothing." she lied. She looked at Zen father. "Thank you." she said, still shocked.


message 865: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zens father grinned. "It's okay. We're all required to do some things." He said. Zen rolled hsi eyes.


message 866: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra shrugged, her sister proubly got into trouble a lot. She smiled again, happy to be without her uncle. Siki looked at Zen. "We have a problem." she said, glancing at Cassandra. "Cassy, you will have to pack." she told her.


message 867: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen raised an eyebrow. "What?" He asked dully.

His father watched, interested.


message 868: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra looked surprised. "Why Siki?" she asked. Siki looked at her little sister. "Im not leaving you here now." she said. "Go get all your magicy stuff and pack light." she said. Cassandra sighed, always something to do, she thought. She snapped her fingers and was in her room, she started packing her stuff in magical charms. Siki looked at Zen. "I have no clue yet, i think." she said, puzzling over her uncles words again.


message 869: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Okay then." He said. His father rasied an eyebrow. "Be safe." He said. Zen waved it away. "Yep."


message 870: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at his father. "I... Im sorry i .. tried to kill you." she said quietly, she didnt ever want to do it, but she felt she didnt have a choice, at the time.


message 871: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen's father nodded. "It's okay dear. I've met your uncle, I don't blame you." Zen looked confused. "How'd you know?" He asked, bewildered. Zen's father shrugged. "The trees." He answered. Zen grinned.


message 872: by [deleted user] (new)

(S) 소방 민족 wrote: "Siki looked off into the distance, she had a fimiliar thoughful look in her eyes, but was hardened by anger. this was the last thing she needed. She wondered about his words, 'you three are the key.... "Who are you." she said, glaring at Kia."

Kia ignored the question as she noticed the League of Darkness members down the street. She disapeared and followed them to Zen's father's house, spying from afar.


message 873: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki noddedm she had no clue what the trees ment, but she didnt really care, as long as he didnt want to kill her. She looked at Zen. "Do you know anything we have that can help rule the world?" she asked him.


message 874: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen's eyes went wide. "Well in the center of the earth there's a ball of energy. Cast it into an object and it will give you anything. But even if you get past the Trolls, Lava river, oceans, scorpion bridge, python jungle,dragon cove, and all that it's impossible without 6 magicians." He said.


message 875: by [deleted user] (new)

((grrr. Angel is still in the city...I can't really RP with her... /:))


message 876: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia closed her eyes and checked her emotions. She slowly locked them away mentally and threw away the key. Life was easier without them. She continued to listen to the others, back to concentrating on retrieving the scrolls.


message 877: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra put on her charm braclet and wondered if she should go back. She looked around their old room, she wouldnt really miss is, she guessed. She closed her eyes and used magic to find something intresting, or someone to talk to. She found Kia, she shrugged and clapde her hands together, appering behind Kia. "Hi." she said.

Siki looked at Zen, was he kidding her? "We dont have that, i dont think we do at least...." she didnt know anything about that, so she didnt really know what to think.


message 878: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia watched Cassandra in her room, then noted her behind her. She ignored the girl and continued to watch the one with the scrolls.


message 879: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra crossed her arms. "What are you doing?" she asked. "Do you know my sister?" she asked.


message 880: by [deleted user] (new)

"Watching," she said, still not giving Cassandra her full attention


message 881: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra didnt seems to like this. "Why?" she asked.


message 882: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 26, 2010 04:30PM) (new)

Kia glared, her eyes changing to black. She turned to the girl, taking in her magical aura. "What are you doing?" she asked coldly. This little soon-to-be-mage was getting on her nerves.


message 883: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen frowned and teleported ot Cass. "Follower. Do not be rude." He said.


message 884: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 26, 2010 10:01PM) (new)

Kia raised an eyebrow. "Excuse me?"


message 885: by (S) (new)

(S) Cassandra looked at Zen. She cocked her head for a second, then shrugged. She looked back to Kia. "My sister seems to be in the middle of something, i guess. I want to spy on her too." she said crossing her arms.

Siki scowled when Zen vanished. She looked at Felway for a second. Then sighed, when a tingling feeling came to her palms, again.


message 886: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged and showed up in town. He jumped on Attis and rode through town, getting greetings as well as curses.


message 887: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia turned back to Cass. "You can't watch with me."


message 888: by (S) (last edited Aug 27, 2010 06:43PM) (new)

(S) Cassandra didnt remeber Zen that much, but he still seemed to be wild. She watched him, following his magic aura and sensed Kais too. She tried searching for a name, for Kia. "Yes i can, shes my sister." she said. "You cant tell me what to do, Kia." she said, finding the name in the aura.


message 889: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia snorted at the probing. She appeared next to Siki, tired of this gang. "Give me the scrolls," she demanded. "And I'll let you and your friends live."


message 890: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen appeared next to Siki. "I think not." He said and light bound her ankles and hands, hard like lead and steel impossible to break.


message 891: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki stepped back, she didnt like magic. 'shes the follower' she thought. Her hand on her sword. "No." she said, she'd play defense, she glanced at Felway again.

Cass thought what to do for a moment. She pondered the thouhght of following Zen or Kia.


message 892: by [deleted user] (new)

Black smoke wrapped itself around Kia, disolving the light. It lingered around her as she got angrier. She stabbed the knife she had accepted from Felway into the wall. She stared at them with black eyes. "Hand them over," she snarled


message 893: by (S) (new)

(S) Cass decided to go back to Siki, she appered where she left, next to Zens father, and coughed at the black smoke. "Cassandra, go back!" Siki demanded, sword raised at Kia. "They are not for your use." she said, not saying anything infront of Cass.


message 894: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed and snapped. Kia was now on the other side of there world, portal closed.


message 895: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia looked around and cursed. She lifted her hands and muttered a spell. Zen's father's house began to shake and crumble around them as she worked on trasporting herself back to them


message 896: by (S) (new)

(S) Cass looked around, no more smoke, Siki was resacthing her sword, and Zen was laughing, it seemed normal, except for Felway. "Siki?" she asked. "Zen?" she asked, knowing Siki wouldnt tell her.


message 897: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen stamped his foot and it resembled, glowing green with portal control.


message 898: by (S) (new)

(S) Cass' magic worked with Zens, as she succered the house. Sikis sword was in her hand again.


message 899: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia alternated between running and teleporting, slowly getting closer. After they got the trembling to stop, she started on another tactic. Fire erupted around the town, slowly burning closer, as lightning flashed overhead


message 900: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki grabbed Cass hand, yelling at Zen for the white mare, she wasnt going to lose her sister now, oh no. "Siki!" Cass, said, pulling her hand away. She closed her eyes casting a non teleporting spell around the little town.


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