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"Everything."


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen blushed. "Well that's sort of an invasiong of privacy." ((gtg))


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She rolled her eyes. "I do let people have their privacy. I'm not a pervert."


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled. "good job." He said.


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(S) Siki couldnt move, with a knife to her neck, she couldnt do a thing. The next thing she new she was standing in front of her old house, and Cassandra was running toward her. "Siki!" She cried. She threw her arm around her older sister. "I knew you wernt dead!" She exclaim as a tear ran down her face. Siki smiled and hugged her sister, tears filling in her eyes, she'd dreamed of the day when she could save her sister.

Cassandra and Siki stood there for a moment in silents, then Cassandra led Siki to a place hill with a tree, the tree had gotten much bigger from how Siki remebered it, as cassandra told Siki about what she'd been doing. "Trill says i could be a mage even earlier!" she told her sister proudly. Siki smiled and shook her head. She looked at cassandra "Cassy, did you try to contact me or something?" she asked. "Yes! I knew you wernt dead, like he said, so i found out by myself." She smiled as she looked puzzled. She muttered a few words under her breath, Felway appered next to them. Siki shook her head and smiled, nothing could ruin this moment for her. She put her hand down for Felway to grab.


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Angel went outside to find everyone gone. She searched around and couldn't find anyone.


message 807: by (S) (last edited Aug 20, 2010 08:28AM) (new)

(S) Cassandra sense magic, she looked right at Zen and Kia. She could barly reconize Fel, he seemed unknowing, he try to concetate on her magic, what was there, she was too excited. "Felway!" she said throwing her arms around her.


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Angel sighed. She sat on a chair and started to think. What if I have the ablilty to use magic? No, I doubt it. But how did I...? What if they can sense I have magic inside of me? No, they would think I was lying all this time...I can't let anyone sense my magic. I'll have to hide it some how... Angel was full of worries and anger, that she pushed the feeling of magic deeper inside of her. So deep, you couldn't sense it. Okay, now I'm normal. No one shall know it's hidden.


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Kia shrugged and continued to watch.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed. "Cassandra, I barely recognize you. You're so grown up. I remember a little six year old." he said.


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Felway could hear Zen's voice through telepathy. He tried to focus on what Zen was saying but he this little girl came up to hug him. "You," he started softly, "you must be Cassey." He said and returned the hug.

Felway looked down at the houses that were at the bottom of the hill. A piece of memory hit him like he had just ran into a brick wall. "We're being watched." He said flatly. "It's not safe here!" He grabbed Siki and Cassy by the hands and started running for the town. They needed a hiding place.


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Kia turned to look at the bottom of the hill. She narowed her eyes


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed. "They'll be back." He said.


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"I want to know who else is watching" she said, slinking down the hill


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed.


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Kia silently searched the buildings and frowned. "They're gone"


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen frowned. "Well Fel might've used magic with Cass." He suggested.


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She nodded, still looking around


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smirked on the inside. Beginning to partner. He thought.


message 820: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 20, 2010 10:13PM) (new)

Kia closed her eyes and concentrated on the scrolls. After locating them, she ran to a hiding spot and continued to watch Fel and Siki using her metal rings


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Felway led them down the streets and he felt a strong power of magic coming from Cassy. She must have wanted to combine with him. He let the magic flow and soon, they teleported, 'but where are we?' Felway wondered. He looked and saw a room with the name Cassy labeled everywhere. He turned to Cassy. "You took us to your room? What if your unc-," He was interrupted.


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Kia narrowed her eyes. who is that? she thought to herself


message 823: by (S) (last edited Aug 22, 2010 04:09PM) (new)

(S) ((thanks u guys!))

Siki turned around, and looked face to face with her uncle, she pushed Cassandra into Felway and drew a knife, her uncle muttered a few words and clapped his hands, they were at the bottom of the hill, visable from Cassys window. ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2bJ1-... ) Sikis looked right at her uncle, a hard look from years of anger in her eyes. He laughed wickedly. "Siki, Siki, Siki, who knew you'd be home so soon?" He taunted her.

He made the first strike, moving his sword in a stabbing motion, she blocked him and kicked him back, he lost his sword. She faught with persision and grace, easily blocking and accuratly attacking an oppenent whos skill was way beyond her own. He struck strike after stick as Siki blocked him, pushing him back. Once he got a knife to her neck and she grabbed his arm, forcing it behind him and kicked him in the center of his back, he fell to the ground. Finally he stood back and looked at her. he smiled wickedly. "Oh now thats how you want to play it?" She untied her Cloak, she knew what was coming.

He grabbed her sword, and put it at her heart, before she had time to react. She looked at him. "Your going to die today." she said. He laughed wickedly. He made the attempt to kill her, she dodged him taking her sword back and kicking him to the ground, she smashed his head into the dirt. She put her foot on his back, so he couldnt move, she was breathing heavily. "tell me why you wanted them dead." she demanded. Her uncle silently uncovered his knife, Siki couldnt see. "Why, i guess its time to tell." he said teasilinly. Siki banged his head on the ground, his temple was bleeding from when her boot clipped his head. "Alright Siki!" he cried in pain.

"You, Zen, and Felway, espeasilly Felway have something we need, in your memory, and when we get it, we'll take over the world." he said simply. He positioned his knife. "You 3 are the key to power!" he said evily. Siki pushed her sword a bit into his back. "Give me one reason why i shouldnt kill you now." she said, giving him one last chance at humaility."Now!." she demanded. He said nothing, she flipped him over, his dagger in his heart. She looked at Cassandras window.


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Kia stiffened when she saw the man fighting with Siki. Flashes of memories she had buried deep went through her mind. The man arguing with her father, and making him upset. The troubled weeks that followed as her father tried to make the talismin the man requested. Then...that night. Waiting for hours for her father to come to his shop. Going home to a dark house to discover her family cold, and lifeless on the floor...

Kia's head snapped up as she growled deep in her throat. Her body shook with anger and her eyes turned black from her rage. She almost leapt up to kill him in that instant, but held herself when she saw the dagger in his heart.


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((idk where Angel is...))

Angel could feel a strange amount of magic around the area. She looked around, buy noticed nothing.


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(S) Cassandra gasped at her uncles lifleless body, and then suddenly it gone, like it .... teleported. Siki stumbled back, surprised. Cassandra tugged on felway to go outside toward Siki.


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Felway went out toward Siki. "That isn't the last we will be seeing of him... He wasn't dead." He paused. "And now that Cassy is saved. Where are we off to next?" He asked.


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(S) Siki looked at Felway and Cassandra, Cassandra hugged her. "What did he say?" she asked Siki. Siki looked at her sister. "Go find Zen, i know you can." she told her. Cassandra frowned. "Siki-" she started, but stopped she gave a little noise that sounded like a hmph, and then stalked away to go find Zen.

Siki looked at Felway. She had no clue what she was feeling. "Felway, were in way over our heads." she said, looking to where her uncle was. "Theres more of them."


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Felway drew his sword. "More of who?" He asked looking the direction Siki was.


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Kia appeared next to them, still enraged. "They call themselves the League of Darkness." she said venomously


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Felway turned in surprise. He pointed his sword right at the strange girls neck. They caught each other in a gaze. "What are they here for?" Felway pursued.


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Kia ignored the sword and stared back at him, her eyes still black. "Power." she said emotionlessly. "That's all they want. And they'll do anything to get it."


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Felway felt no threat from the girl and put his sword down. "How will they get this power?"


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Kia looked away in order to control her emotions. "Destruction and devistation. Killing innocent lives."


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Felway tried to follow her eyes but she turned her head. "Then we must stop them." He took out a knife and flipped it over to her so that the handle was facing her. It was a gutsy move. But he felt sorrow for her.


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Kia looked back at him, then down at the knife. She struggled to keep her emotions in order--it had been so long since she had allowed herself to feel any. She tried to supress her memories of her family, so she could go back to being an emotionless mercenary. Life was so much simpler when you didn't have to feel. She looked back up at Felway, her eyes slowly changing back to their normal green. She took the knife. "Let's get started."


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(S) Siki looked at them, "my uncle, he was one, it does explain some things..." she started, she felt this terrible anger, toward him, toward them all.

Cassandra started toward Zens old house, mayybe he's visting his father, she thought, though she didnt really remeber what he looked liked. She was angry at siki for not letting her stay and talk with the others.


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Kia nodded. "He is one of the ringleaders. One of the more powerful ones."


message 839: by (S) (last edited Aug 24, 2010 11:32AM) (new)

(S) Siki looked off into the distance, she had a fimiliar thoughful look in her eyes, but was hardened by anger. this was the last thing she needed. She wondered about his words, 'you three are the key to power.' to her it sounded pathetic, but it mde no sense, she wondered if Kia heard. She looked at felway, was this why he lost his memory. What was supoosed to solve her questions solved what now seemed the easy ones, and made even more. "Who are you." she said, glaring at Kia.


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Felway looked at the four members of the League of Darkness running threw the town. A man was standing in front of his wife and his daughter, protecting them. The LoD member was wearing a black leather trench coat that hand a hood come over to cover his face, he also had a knife pointed at the mans throat. The man turned and pushed his wife and kid to get away and then the LoD member took the knife and shoved it in the mans chest. The girl and wife got away into their house. But the man fell to the ground and died. That little girl would life forever with revenge in her heart.

"We can't fight them here. They are too fast and strong. Lets follow Cassy into the house." Felway said. His eyes started to water.


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(S) Siki nodded, watching the killer. "Cassandra cant see me kill anyone." she said, looking at Felway.


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Felway turned his head away, avoiding any eye contact with anyone. "Just get inside." He choked.


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(S) Siki walked, now she had to face Zens father, her uncle was still alive and she just saw a man kill a father, she new what that was like. She wanted to punish that man so bad, but managed to control her anger. Cassandra was safe, and soon she'd have to tell her the truth. She clentched her fist.s


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen walked into Cassandra. "Ello there. What happend? I saw you guys teleport and whent to my father. We've been discussing you actually. My have you gotten big. I remember a little girl, why you're almost a lady." He blabbed.


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(S) Cassandra looked at him. "Who are you?" she asked, eyeing him oddly. "My sister will hurt you if you touch me." she said warningly.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed. "I'm Zen, remember? You probably don't I went to train when you were six." HE said. "I'm a mage." He said and Attis appeared out of his ring.


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(S) Cassandras face brightened. "Zen!" she cried, hugging him. She giggled. "Yea! Your can teach me!" she said happily.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen hugged her, smiling. "Of course. Just I couldn't approve you fully. You need a trainer, who has been a trained trained trainer." He said confusingly.


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(S) Cassandra giggled. "Trill can do that." she said. "Does Siki still disapprove of magic?" she asked thoughtfully, petting Attis.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "I think she's getting more used to it but she thinks it's cheating."


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