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message 751: by [deleted user] (new)

"Who said I was a lady?" she said, still concentrating on the one who had the scrolls


message 752: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "So you're telling me you're a man?" He asked.


message 753: by [deleted user] (new)

She glared at him. "Go away"


message 754: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments zen nodded. "I knew it." He said.


message 755: by [deleted user] (new)

Shadowy light rushed at him, toppling him over. Kia returned to watching the others


message 756: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen flicked it away.


message 757: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia ignored him


message 758: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen watched with her.


message 759: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia rolled her eyes and went to another hiding place


message 760: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed her emotionlessly.


message 761: by [deleted user] (new)

"Leave me alone" she hissed, jabbing him in the chest


message 762: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments He shrugged. "Why do you care? It's not like I'm breathing down your neck or soemthing." He said.


message 763: by [deleted user] (new)

"You're messing with my concentration. I work alone." she glared


message 764: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "So do I, but that doesn't mean I don't have friends." He said.


message 765: by [deleted user] (new)

She blinked. "I don't need friends."


message 766: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen tilted his head. "Yes you do." He said.


message 767: by [deleted user] (new)

She shook her head. "You were sucked into this mess because you are friends with them. Felway got into trouble because of Siki, and she's in trouble with her uncle because of him. Friends just create problems. I don't need friends."


message 768: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "what about when you die? Who will miss you? How will you live on? How do you laugh? Who do you do stuff with?" He quizzed her.


message 769: by [deleted user] (new)

A smiled tugged at her lips. "What about when I die? I'll die, that's what. No one will morn me, but my legend will live on. None will be able to surpass it. As for laughing, why do I need to? It doesn't help me with my work, which is all I do. No need for friends there."


message 770: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen frowned. "If we don't laugh, you go insane. and what;s the point of life if you don't brand it with memories? Then you're just a robot." He reasoned.


message 771: by [deleted user] (new)

She raised an eyebrow. "I've traveled all over the world. I've seen and done enough things for hundreds of lifetimes. Aren't those memories?"


message 772: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments He shrugged. "Were any of those joyful? Happy? Something that you want to remember?" He asked.


message 773: by [deleted user] (new)

"I enjoy my work," she said, puzzled. She'd never thought about being happy before


message 774: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen raised an eyebrow. "Don't your feelings matter? Don't you want to enjoy?" He asked.


message 775: by [deleted user] (new)

"I.." she stared at him and then turned away. "I don't need to feel. I have my work and it is enough." She turned her attention back to the others.


message 776: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen rolled his eyes.


message 777: by [deleted user] (new)

She pulled out her metal ring to watch them better.


message 778: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "So you intend on spying the rest of your life? Why don't you care about yourself? I mean, don't you want to have some fun or else you just get all depressed." He said.


message 779: by [deleted user] (new)

"Spying isn't all I do," she grolwed, turning back to him. "And I have fun at being the best at what I do. It's prestigious."


message 780: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed. "whatever you say. Don't you get lonely?"


message 781: by [deleted user] (new)

"No," she lied, thinking about her family. "I don't need anyone."


message 782: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "I guess. Well then your life would be black and white. No hapiness, moments, joy or love." He said.


message 783: by [deleted user] (new)

"and no heartache," she said softly. Then she shrugged. "Fine by me"


message 784: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed.


message 785: by [deleted user] (new)

She went back to watching.


message 786: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen leaned against the wall.


message 787: by [deleted user] (new)

She held out a gloved hand as a falcon dropped out of nowhere. She fed it a piece of jerky as she read the note attatched to it's leg.


message 788: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen raised an eyebrow and said nothing.


message 789: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia frowned at the note. She held it in her palm where it smoked then burst into flame. When the falcon was finished eating, she sent it on its way


message 790: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen snorted. "Mad much?" He asked,


message 791: by [deleted user] (new)

"Not mad," she commented, brushing away the ashes. "Destroying evidence. It's better than eating it."


message 792: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Eating it can be pleasant." He said.


message 793: by [deleted user] (new)

She pulled a face. "It's horrid on the digestive system."


message 794: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Better then dirt." He said.


message 795: by [deleted user] (new)

She almost laughed. "I bet you eat dirt for breakfast."


message 796: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged, half smiling. "Dirt, worms and cocroaches. I lovee the crunch." He said, straight face.


message 797: by [deleted user] (new)

She shuddered. "Nasty."


message 798: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled. "Naw, I just eat bread." He said.


message 799: by [deleted user] (new)

She nodded. "I know. I've been following you, remember?"


message 800: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments He nodded. "It's sort of odd. I mean how much did you see?" He asked.


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