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To Disobey a Command---Finished
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Aug 19, 2010 06:56PM
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He looked at her his gaze lighter "Well..." He said looking down.
Siki cocked her head, this Surie guy wouldnt just talk, he took a bit with everything. "Thats no answer." she said glaring at him again.
He looked up "Well im just here to help and gaurd" he said.
Zen laughed again. "If anyone's here to guard, it's us to you. You're talking to Siki. Not your average girl." He said. He was about to say You're talking to Siki- Mass Murderer but thought better.
Siki couldnt stand it any longer, she had this dreaded feeling that this had something to do with Cassandra. She threw a dagger pinning him to the bed by his sleeve. "What else do you know!" she demanded.
(($H!T Sorry, i deleted it))
Felway watched this Surie guy disappear through mid air and start walking out of the room.
Felway watched this Surie guy disappear through mid air and start walking out of the room.
He turned "Bid you all well" He said
"Gah!" Siki stumbled back, and the tingling in her palm came. "Tell my uncle to live his last few days unlikek the others, because he'll be dead when i get my hand on him!" she called Surrie.
Zen smiled obnoxiously cheerful. "Yes, she will not be the only one delivering the painfully excruciating wrath." His smile dissapeared as he thought of Cassanda. He cursed the uncle a few times under his breath. "Poor girl." He muttered and punched the wall.
Felway saw a smirk come one his face. "Don't play dumb! The only reason you got out of Siki pinning you was because you didn't want to answer the question about her uncle!!" Felway yelled and throw a knife at his leg.
Siki didnt even flinch as a knife went accross the room. She kept her glare on Surrie and looked him right in the eyes.
Zen rolled his eyes as he fixed the hole in the wall with magic. All of a sudden the boy was pinned onto the ceiling with nothing on him. Zen was flicking his wrist.
He yelped in pain out."What are you talking about?"
Siki looked at the door, she had this horrid feeling as an image of Cassandra crying out in pain. She stunbled toward the door and opened it slamming it behind her, as everyone looked at her, she brought up her hood, and pushed threw the crowd.
((S got post 666 :O ))
The knife missed the guys leg but instead he was hurled to the ceiling. Felway looked back and saw that Zen was controlling him with magic. Siki didn't want to do with any of this and left the room.
The knife missed the guys leg but instead he was hurled to the ceiling. Felway looked back and saw that Zen was controlling him with magic. Siki didn't want to do with any of this and left the room.
((yes!))Siki started going threw the crowd, she managed to find a unbusy allie and slumped against the wall, breathing heavily, she closed her eyes, trying to calm down, Cassandra scream echoed threw her head.
Surie teleported to the ground and ran out the door.
"Zen and Angle, go find Siki. I can handle this guy all by myself." Felway commanded and ran out the door after him.
Siki could hear footsteps approching her, now her palms burned, was this Cassandra or that Surrie guy?
Felway watched as Surie was thrown against the wall of the hall of the inn they were at. "Thank you Zen." Felway said to himself.
Surie hit the wall then ran to find Siki.
Zen followed Siki at lightning speed. He found her and stood by the wall a few yard away from her. "I'm tempted just to teleport there and save her." He whispered. "But I can't teleport both of us." He said. All of a sudden a glint appeared in his eye. "I'd die. But I can teleport you and Fel. You save her." He added.
Siki vision clouded for a moment, Cassandra appered in front of her, her palm stopped burning as she looked appon Cassandra smiling face, "I knew you wernt dead." she said cheerfully, as the imagine faded, and her normal vision came back.
Surie stoped when he saw Siki "What's happening" He called
Surie was headed in the direction Siki ran. Felway sped up and tackled him to the ground. "You won't hurt her."
Siki put her hand on her forhead. She had wicked headache, it must have been Cassandra she thought. Only Cassadra would try that type of Magic on her.
Zen shrugged. "I could teleport you and Fel to the exact location of her, and you could save her." He said, leaving out that he would die.
Siki looked at him. "Shes fine, i think, but if she trys magic on me again she wont be." she said groaning. "Cassandra can take care of herself if she has too." She didnt even realse Felway and Surrie were there.
Surie took out his knife and stuck it in Felway.
Sikis headache started to fade, she looked at Surie. "What-" she stammered, taking a step toward him. Her sword was out, and tho it wasnt her weapon of choice, she was going to cause inflicting damage.
Siki looked at Fel. She felt disorentated, why did all the magic stuff always happened to her? A confused look came across her face.
Felway felt a cringing pain come inside his left shoulder. He looked at his shoulder and blood ran down from the knife to the ground. Felway rolled off Surie and lied on the ground.
Siki knelt next to Felway, she allied pressure, unsure of what was next, she snapped out of her daze and managed to kick Surie in the head, while appling pressure, before he teleported.
Zen cursed loudly. He placed a hand on Fel's shoulder and watched the knife remove itself and the blood seep back into the cut. It looked like rewind.
Surie teleported in with a knife to Siki's neck.
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