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message 651: by [deleted user] (new)

He remained emotionless.


message 652: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki waited for a reply, she sighed again. "What danger am i not in already?"


message 653: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked at her his gaze lighter "Well..." He said looking down.


message 654: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki cocked her head, this Surie guy wouldnt just talk, he took a bit with everything. "Thats no answer." she said glaring at him again.


message 655: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked up "Well im just here to help and gaurd" he said.


message 656: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed again. "If anyone's here to guard, it's us to you. You're talking to Siki. Not your average girl." He said. He was about to say You're talking to Siki- Mass Murderer but thought better.


message 657: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki couldnt stand it any longer, she had this dreaded feeling that this had something to do with Cassandra. She threw a dagger pinning him to the bed by his sleeve. "What else do you know!" she demanded.


message 658: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:09PM) (new)

(S) "I dont need pertectoin!" she said angrly.


message 659: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
(($H!T Sorry, i deleted it))

Felway watched this Surie guy disappear through mid air and start walking out of the room.


message 660: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed. "What ever. Probably gonna pop up any second anyway." He said.


message 661: by [deleted user] (new)

He turned "Bid you all well" He said


message 662: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway just looked at the guy. "How did you do that?"


message 663: by (S) (new)

(S) "Gah!" Siki stumbled back, and the tingling in her palm came. "Tell my uncle to live his last few days unlikek the others, because he'll be dead when i get my hand on him!" she called Surrie.


message 664: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie raised a brow "Uncle?"


message 665: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen smiled obnoxiously cheerful. "Yes, she will not be the only one delivering the painfully excruciating wrath." His smile dissapeared as he thought of Cassanda. He cursed the uncle a few times under his breath. "Poor girl." He muttered and punched the wall.


message 666: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki scowled, and glared at him. "He sent you didnt he?" she said threw clentched teeth.


message 667: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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Felway saw a smirk come one his face. "Don't play dumb! The only reason you got out of Siki pinning you was because you didn't want to answer the question about her uncle!!" Felway yelled and throw a knife at his leg.


message 668: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki didnt even flinch as a knife went accross the room. She kept her glare on Surrie and looked him right in the eyes.


message 669: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen rolled his eyes as he fixed the hole in the wall with magic. All of a sudden the boy was pinned onto the ceiling with nothing on him. Zen was flicking his wrist.


message 670: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:23PM) (new)

He yelped in pain out."What are you talking about?"


message 671: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at the door, she had this horrid feeling as an image of Cassandra crying out in pain. She stunbled toward the door and opened it slamming it behind her, as everyone looked at her, she brought up her hood, and pushed threw the crowd.


message 672: by John, (~^u^~)V (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:22PM) (new)

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((S got post 666 :O ))

The knife missed the guys leg but instead he was hurled to the ceiling. Felway looked back and saw that Zen was controlling him with magic. Siki didn't want to do with any of this and left the room.


message 673: by (S) (new)

(S) ((yes!))

Siki started going threw the crowd, she managed to find a unbusy allie and slumped against the wall, breathing heavily, she closed her eyes, trying to calm down, Cassandra scream echoed threw her head.


message 674: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:24PM) (new)

Surie teleported to the ground and ran out the door.


message 675: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"Zen and Angle, go find Siki. I can handle this guy all by myself." Felway commanded and ran out the door after him.


message 676: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki felt a cool breath and hit the back of her headagainst the wall.


message 677: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen flicked his wrist and Surie slammed against the wall. Zen ran after Siki.


message 678: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie stoped and waited.


message 679: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki could hear footsteps approching her, now her palms burned, was this Cassandra or that Surrie guy?


message 680: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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Felway watched as Surie was thrown against the wall of the hall of the inn they were at. "Thank you Zen." Felway said to himself.


message 681: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie hit the wall then ran to find Siki.


message 682: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed Siki at lightning speed. He found her and stood by the wall a few yard away from her. "I'm tempted just to teleport there and save her." He whispered. "But I can't teleport both of us." He said. All of a sudden a glint appeared in his eye. "I'd die. But I can teleport you and Fel. You save her." He added.


message 683: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki vision clouded for a moment, Cassandra appered in front of her, her palm stopped burning as she looked appon Cassandra smiling face, "I knew you wernt dead." she said cheerfully, as the imagine faded, and her normal vision came back.


message 684: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at Zen. "What are you talking about?" she stammered.


message 685: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie stoped when he saw Siki "What's happening" He called


message 686: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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Surie was headed in the direction Siki ran. Felway sped up and tackled him to the ground. "You won't hurt her."


message 687: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki put her hand on her forhead. She had wicked headache, it must have been Cassandra she thought. Only Cassadra would try that type of Magic on her.


message 688: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "I could teleport you and Fel to the exact location of her, and you could save her." He said, leaving out that he would die.


message 689: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:36PM) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him. "Shes fine, i think, but if she trys magic on me again she wont be." she said groaning. "Cassandra can take care of herself if she has too." She didnt even realse Felway and Surrie were there.


message 690: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie took out his knife and stuck it in Felway.


message 691: by (S) (new)

(S) Sikis headache started to fade, she looked at Surie. "What-" she stammered, taking a step toward him. Her sword was out, and tho it wasnt her weapon of choice, she was going to cause inflicting damage.


message 692: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen punched Surie in the nose and murmered something. Surie's body went limp but he was brreathing.


message 693: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at Fel. She felt disorentated, why did all the magic stuff always happened to her? A confused look came across her face.


message 694: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway felt a cringing pain come inside his left shoulder. He looked at his shoulder and blood ran down from the knife to the ground. Felway rolled off Surie and lied on the ground.


message 695: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie teleported.


message 696: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:43PM) (new)

(S) Siki knelt next to Felway, she allied pressure, unsure of what was next, she snapped out of her daze and managed to kick Surie in the head, while appling pressure, before he teleported.


message 697: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen cursed loudly. He placed a hand on Fel's shoulder and watched the knife remove itself and the blood seep back into the cut. It looked like rewind.


message 698: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie got up head pounding.


message 699: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 07:46PM) (new)

(S) Siki stepped back, knowing she shouldnt be surprised. She just watched Zen do his magic.


message 700: by [deleted user] (new)

Surie teleported in with a knife to Siki's neck.


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