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Surie nodded.


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(S) Siki scowled. "Help." she repeated, to her it was bad enough Angel was here. "How?"


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"I was told"


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed. "Well do you have a horse?"


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(S) "Told by who?" she asked, getting a bit worried, but didnt let it show.


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"No,And i will not tell." He said calmly.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Then why do you assume you can ride with us? Or that we will give you the scrolls?" He asked.


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(S) Siki nodded. "my uncle." she thought, tho she had no proof. She almost reached for her scroll, in pertection.


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Felway shot Zen a dirty look. He mentioned the scrolls! This guy couldn't have known about them but then Zen just blurted it out. Felway felt like hitting Zen.


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He left his face emotionless "I dont need a ride" he didnt mention the scrolls.


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"Then how will you get around?" Felway stepped in.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen raised an eyebrow. "Magic, duh." HE said in a vallry girlish voice.


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Surie rolled his eyes.


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(S) Siki glared at both Zen and Surie. Her hand on her sword.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen wrigled his eyebrows. "Okayyy" He said.


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Surie glared back at her.


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(S) Siki didnt drop her glare.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed and put a hand over both of their eyes. He smiled. "Much better!" He said


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"What were you sent to help with, Surie?" Felway asked.


((Micheal you need to say more and do more so we can move on.))


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(S) Siki stepped out of Zen reachs, glaring at him. She looked back a Surie, still awaiting reply.


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((K))"I was just sent to help...Can we keep moving?" He asked looking away from Siki


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(S) Siki glanced at Felway. She would say no, but it Zen knew him...


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"Moving to what? How would you know we were going anywhere!?" Felway started to yell.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shook his head. "We won't let you 'help' us until we know who our 'helper' is. And this is an internship. You get no pay, in anyway." He said.


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(S) Siki raised eyebrow at Zen. intership, she thought, maybe it would be better if she didnt say anything right now.


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"Or who sent him." Felway murmured in.


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Surie nodded "I need no pay,and "Im" here to help" He said ignoring Felway's question.


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(S) Siki nodded at Felways comment.


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"We know your here to help," Felway started to yell, "But what are you here to help with!?!"


message 630: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2010 11:54AM) (new)

"I-i...dont know" He said slowly


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(S) Siki had her hand on her sword again, she didnt want to attrack attention from the festival but wanted to get to the bottom of this at the same time. "You better figure it out then." she said warningly.


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'I help you..You help me" he said the light dancing on and off of his face.


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(S) Siki frowned. "Helping isnt something we're exaclty good at," siki said thinkning back to getting Fel caught a few days ago.


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"Well,either way im staying" he said rushing a hand through his hair.


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Felway turned to Siki. "Maybe we can get more out of him if we are in a better place to talk. Let's find an inn." Felway turned to Surie. "And your coming with." Felway got out a knife and got behind the guy pressing the knife to his back. He wasn't getting away or pulling any crap.


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He went with them.


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(S) Siki looked at the signs for an inn, people were busling around them , dancing to the music and eating food, fighting there way through a crowd they managed to find an inn with a room open, they paid for the room and Siki unlocked the door, motioning everyone in.


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Felway threw Surie on the bed hard. "Now talk! Who sent you!?"


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(S) Siki looked courously at Felway then at Surie. She found her self with one of knife in her hand and silently put it away, and let her hand rest on her sword, she next to Felway.


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"I dont know!" He snapped


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Felway looked disgusted at his answer. "You! Are you the one that has been following us?" Felway also had his sword gripped.


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"Calm down, Felway. I think this boy is frightened." she patted his shoulder.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed. "He is NOT the follower. He doesn't have a powerful aura. Just a-" He tilted his head. "Mage one." He finished. "And don't be so rough." He said.


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Surie glared at them. "Frightened!" He scoffed,his hand on the grip of his sword knuckles turning white.


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Angel glared at the sword. "If you are here to help. "Help"."


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He nodded.


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"Take away his sword and everyone put yours away, don't even touch it." Felway saw everyone move their hands and saw Zen take the guys sword and throw it in a corner. "Now, if your here to help. Tell us how you plan to help."


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(S) Siki sighed, and nodded along with Felway.


message 649: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2010 06:56PM) (new)

"Well I was sent to gaurd her" he nodded toward Sikki


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(S) Siki cringed. "I'd be more likly to kill you then have you gaurd me." she said hardly.


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