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message 551: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"A promise." Felway whispered and took his hand off the rein and looked at the golden ring. He shook it off. "What will we do when we get there?"


message 552: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki didnt know how to answer this. "The only thing we need to acomplish is getting Cassandra, then we can leave." she said unsure of iti herself. "Maybe Cassandra can help with your memory."


message 553: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"I hope so." Felway knew she was lying about them going in and just getting Cassandra. There was no doubt in Felway's mind that they would run into her uncle sometime around.


message 554: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked ahead. She couldnt wait to see her sister face again, a day didnt go by when she didnt think of her. She wished there was someway she could just tell her she was coming, and she wouldnt have to do a thing that tyrent wanted her to anymore.


message 555: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"How faraway is your home?" Felway continued to ask questions.


message 556: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen squinted at Felway. "Fel. It's no hers. It's ours. We all live in the same place. Well not house but they're like bing-bada-boom." He said.


message 557: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"What?" Felway asked.


message 558: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "we live like right next to eachother." He said.


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Angel sighed. "Im sorry about your sister, Siki." Angel's ring gleamed in the sunlight, making her squint. She smiled at it.


message 560: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glared at Angel. "No your not." she said evenly, looking forward. "Well be home tomarrow." she said.

The sun was now low in the sky and they came to a small town, you could hear music and laughing. A banner hung over the entrance. "Summer Festival." it said in painted letter, in the town square people were dancing and kids were running about. They stopped just before the entrance.


message 561: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel was slightly hurt. "Look, I just know how it is to lose a sister too, though mine is no longer living."


message 562: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki didnt look at Angel. "I havent lost my sister, yet." She said begining to get angry, if this girl ever thought shes made a sacrifies for someone she knows nothing, she thought.


message 563: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel grew quiet. I never intentionally said anything rude...did I?


message 564: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia followed silently


message 565: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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((This will be longer then all the others so i can get another character in.))

"We shouldn't be standing in the open like this." Felway said. "Let's go in town ad find a place where we can talk."

Felway looked at Zen. "Can your ring fit two horses in it?" Felway asked. Zen nodded and the two horses went in to his ring.

They all started to move forward. And stayed by the edges of the town until they came to an alley that was in between two stores. "This is where we speak." Felway said and motioned the rest to follow. Felway turned around and a kid landed right next to him and knocked him over. "What the-!"


message 566: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia turned her cloak inside out and tied a cloth around her head. She folded down her boots and sat lazily on a street corner. She watched them in the alley out of the corner of her eye


message 567: by (S) (last edited Aug 18, 2010 04:40PM) (new)

(S) Siki had her sword trained touching the boys neck in a instant. She wished that this town wasnt so busy, she thought they should spend there time on something more worth while. She glared at the boy. "Who are you." she demanded.


message 568: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel glared at the boy. "Whats your business here?" She pressed.


message 569: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia held her knives underneath her cloak, just in case she needed to interveen


message 570: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked at them "Hello"


message 571: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel raised an eyebrow. "Well this isn't the sort of greeting you expect at a time like this."


message 572: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded. "Well"


message 573: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"Well!?!" Felway yelled. "You just landed on me and that's all you have to say?" Felway got up but the guy stayed on the ground. "First off let's start with how can you explain what just happened?"


message 574: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia relaxed a little, but still had her blades ready


message 575: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel stared at the boy. She watched as Felway raised his voice. She laughed a little inside. She's never seen Felway act buff in front of her.


message 576: by [deleted user] (new)

"To...Help."


message 577: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"Sir." Felway started. "That is not he answer to my question... How did this all happen?" Felway rephrased.


message 578: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia raised an eyebrow


message 579: by [deleted user] (new)

"I..teleported" He said unsure of telling them.


message 580: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel snorted. To help?!


message 581: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 08:33AM) (new)

(S) Siki pushed her sword closer to him. "Magic." she said bitterly. "Who sent you? Who are you?" she demanded. She heard a violin in the backround, she wonder why she noticed it, but ingored the thought. This boy was proubly sent by her uncle, or that person following them. She narrowed her eyes at the boy.


message 582: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

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"Siki, put your sword down. He doesn't give any thread to us now." Felway commanded.


message 583: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed. "Boys are like magic. You can't stop them." He said and patted the boy's shoulder. He stood behind him with both hands on his shoulders. "Now, where did you learn magic?" He asked


message 584: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia started to panhandle while she watched them


message 585: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki scowled and put her sword away.


message 586: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed silently to himself as he walked to the front of the boy.


message 587: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at the boy. "I'll stilk kill you if you try anything." she said glaring at him.


message 588: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "He's got magic." He said.


message 589: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at her palms, she was happy she didnt feel it, it made her feel more normal. "Your point being?" she asked, mindlessly.


message 590: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments "My point being, that he can probably just lock you away in a magical boundry if you try to make one move." He replied, none sarcastic or smug at all.


message 591: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki shot him a look. "I hate magic." she muttered under her breath. She looked around, no one seemed to notice them yet.


message 592: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 19, 2010 11:05AM) (new)

He just went silent.


message 593: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him. "Who are you?" she asked again.


message 594: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "Yes, yes of course you do. Don't fight the POwa!" He said and turned to the boy again. "I'm assuming you're younger then me but older the Fel." He said. "Hmm well..." He trailed off.


message 595: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glared at Zen. "I pick my own battles." she said sternly, looking back at the boy for an answer.


message 596: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm Surie"


message 597: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "Of course you are." He said.


message 598: by (S) (last edited Aug 19, 2010 11:10AM) (new)

(S) "Suries," Siki said, "Why did you come here" Siki looked at Zen, a bit shocked. "Do you know him?" She asked Zen.


message 599: by [deleted user] (new)

He rolled his eyes "Im here to help"


message 600: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded at turned to Siki. "He's here to help." He said, nodding.


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