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message 501: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "Lead the way." He said.


message 502: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki kicked her horse into a jog, then gallop, she head toward their home, the one place she really dreaded to go.


message 503: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel held on to Zen's waist.


message 504: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia scowled. If they weren't going after the rest of the scrolls, they were wasting her time. She followed them from a distance and debated on killing them now


message 505: by (S) (last edited Aug 17, 2010 10:36AM) (new)

(S) Siki leaned forward into the horse, the mare was strong, and graceful for the fact, Siki could appreciate that. ((gtg))


message 506: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen followed, tensing at Angels touch. He realized. "Home. Father." He murmerd.


message 507: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel looked up. "What did you say, Zen?" She couldn't hear from the loud noise of the horse galloping.


message 508: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shook his head.


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Kia followed them in a very bad mood


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Angel sighed. "You really don't talk much."


message 511: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged.


message 512: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel became very curious. She didn't know whether to talk more. She tensed a bit and gripped tighter on Zen's wasit, afraid that she might fall. "Sorry." she muttered.


message 513: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki rode faster, leaning down onto the horse, losing her mind in speed and the grace of the horse.


message 514: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sped up to, grinning at the beginning of a maybe race.


message 515: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway was in back holding onto Siki. They both grabbed on the reins but Siki did the commanding. Felway kept his hand down so that Siki wouldn't see the gold ring on his finger. He knew that she would talk him out of it. But he remembered that he vowed that he would always keep a promise, and if this girl has the two rings, and if this girl would swear on her life that they are engaged, then Felway wouldn't back down on his promise.

He showed no emotion during the horse race.


message 516: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen passed them, Attis enjoying the ride


message 517: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki grinned and kicked the horse again,catching up to Zen.


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Angel only sighed. He hoped Felway would remember.


message 519: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments zen glanced at them, speeding up. Attis was used to speed way faster then this.


message 520: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel gripped tighter on Zen's waist. "Please. Not so fast."


message 521: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen sighed, slowed down.


message 522: by [deleted user] (new)

"Thank you, Zen." Angel smiled.


message 523: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged.


message 524: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
Felway noticed Zen and Angle slow down. "Would you like to slow down too?" Felway asked Siki.


message 525: by [deleted user] (new)

Kia followed them silently. She no longer found enjoyment in following them.


message 526: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked back. She slowed the horse. "If we must." she said with a sigh.


message 527: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen galloped to Siki. "Angel doesn't like speed." He explained.


message 528: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at him. "I wonder why." she muttered under her breath, that girl was going to keep her from her sister, and Felway from his memory.


message 529: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen laughed on the inside.


message 530: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki glanced back at Zen and Angel, Zen was always one to go fast, and he must be hating this, she thought.


message 531: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen closed his eyes, trusting Attis. He galloped trustworthy.


message 532: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki matched Zen pace, and tried not to look angry.


message 533: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen opened his eyes and mouthed 'Sorry'.


message 534: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki nodded, she could breifly feel the same feeling she had when she road fast, and looked ahead, it was high noon already.


message 535: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen rode along side of her, ignoring Angel's grip.


message 536: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki raised an eyebrow at Zen, Angel must have never riden anything before, she felt like laughing, There was no way Felway could love this girl.


message 537: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen hummed quietly.


message 538: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked ahead and wondered what would happen once they got home.


message 539: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen got bored. He slipped to the side. He put his foot on the foothold.


message 540: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at the Mare, it was a fine horse, and she didnt seem to mind the run, she found a horse that she acually respected.


message 541: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen slipped the other foot on the same foothold and leaned against attis. He lay back, relaxed.


message 542: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki almosted envied Zen's saddle for a second, but she didnt, she really didnt care what Zen did as long as it didnt kill her or anyone else.


message 543: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen rolled his eyes at the franticing Angel.


message 544: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"So this, uh..." Felway tried to get out. "Siki, do you know where your sister is now?" He managed.


message 545: by (S) (last edited Aug 18, 2010 08:22AM) (new)

(S) Siki bite her lip from laughing, she glanced at Felway, "Well, 4 years ago she was training to be a mage and owned by my uncle," she said.


message 546: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen swung himself back on the saddle.


message 547: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"What did your uncle tell you would happen to her?" Fel asked another.


message 548: by (S) (new)

(S) "He wouldnt, but knowing him, once she is old enough he'll kill me and send her to replace me, she'll be stronger, he thinks because she will use magic." she sighed. "I dont quite understand he gets out of all this but if he want the both of you dead, then he must- i dont know."


message 549: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
"Trust me. Nothing will happen. Nothing, to any of you." Felway was serious but showed no emotions and looked down at the grass racing by. "I promise."


message 550: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked back at him. She nodded, 'lets hope he keeps this one.' she thought. "I'd be more worried about yourself" she said. "Cassandra too head strong to do anything she doesnt want to, and now with magic, she must be making that tyrents life a nightmare." she said.


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