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message 451: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki scowled. She felt like sayin, then why did you leave, but didnt. "An arrows not going to help you much against a gaurd, if they have any skill." she said coldy, and shot again.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen silent slipped out of the tent. He slipped ona black cloak that cover his body and the hood slipped past his eyes. He crept behind the tree.


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Angel sighed. "Then I shall learn myself." She grabbed another bow and arrow from the tent and prepared it like Siki did. She pulled back and hit the tree instantly, a perfect shoot. "Like that?" she asked.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen rolled his eyes. He began climbing Angel's tree silently.


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(S) Siki looked at her. "Sure, like that." she said, she went to retrieve her arrows. The girl might have some skill, siki thought, but she doesnt have the right idea on what a fight is...


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Angel smiled and sat on the grass. She stood up and moved toward the lake. She edged her body near it and put her fingers in it. She smiled and started twirling it in the water.


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(S) Siki picked up her arrows, she glanced at the dagger in the tree next to her. She looked up at her tree, thats branches blew in the breeze.


message 458: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen continued climbing.


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Angel looked at her relflection and frowned. "I was not the girl I use to be..."


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(S) Siki glanced at the girl, she retived the rest of her arrows and sighed, shooting wasnt much practice, she jumped up the the lowest branch and sat there, wondering when they would move.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen waved. "What up?" He asked, barely noticable. His cape hid him.


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Kia chuckled softly to herself when Siki threw a dagger at her tree. She watched them squabble with amusement. When Zen headed for her tree she silently swung to another tree and found a different hiding place


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(S) Siki looked up, she raised an eyebrow. "To be literal, your up." she said sarcastically. She climbed higher. "I dont like that girl." she whispered. "Shes seems...i dont know...." she didnt know what was so off to her.


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Angel raised an eyebrow. She felt someone following them, but she couldn't put her finger on it. She decided it was probably nothing.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. "Manipuliative." He answered,


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(S) Siki nodded. "Yes." she said swinging herself higher. "Do you think that he really...."


message 467: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shook his head. "No. He wouldn't tie himself down. with a family you can't go one missions. Fel would never do that." He replied.


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Angel walked back to the tent, letting her hair into a braid. She changed clothes. A white blouse with black shorts and ragged boots. She hid them in the guards outfit. She walked toward Zen and Siki. She hid behind a bush because she heard them talking. I don't like her. She seems...I don't know. Angel looked at ground. Why don't they believe me? She thought.


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(S) "Thats what i thought." she said. She looked at the sky. "We should move, or people will start to come." she jumped to a lower branch and landed silently, then swung into a flip and landed, swinging her bow around her shoulder.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen hung upside down by his legs the let go, doing a flip and landing on his feet. His clicked his tonguge and folded up the tent. He slung his bag around his shoulder. "Attis can't hold four people." He said.


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Angel came out of the bush, angry. "Felway didn't want to travel at the time he wanted to marry me. It was until Drake requested him to get the scrolls...and when I was captured...why does it seem like Felway doesn't remember anything about the past?"


message 472: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen made a face. "One, who's Drake? Two we don't know." He said with a southern accent.


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(S) Siki looked at her. "All Fel ever wanted to do was travel." she said. "We could steel a mare, i saw a white one in the town." she said to Zen.


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Angel stiffened. "He's The man who requested the scrolls. That's why he's here."


message 475: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded.


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(S) Siki pulled the scroll out of her pocket. "Were getting them." she said hardly.


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Kia had to contain herself when she saw the scroll. Be patient, she told herself. Your time will come


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Angel snorted. "Why do you dislike me so much, Siki?" She looked at the sky and back and Siki. She gasped and frowned. "Dont tell me you're in love with..."


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "I don't care about scrolls. I'm here for the ride. I heard about Felway's execution and I wanted to make sure it was him." He said.


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(S) Siki looked at angel. "Your mad." she said. She put the scroll back in her cloak. "your spying, i dont like that." she said. "I can be back in 7 min. with the mare." she said.


message 481: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen nodded. He looked at Angel. "You're insane and dramatic. Fel would never fall for you." He said harshly and summoned Attis from his ring. There was a flash of red light and the black horse stood infront of them


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(S) Siki looked at the horse, she didnt really mind that Zen used magic at this time, but she did mind Angel. "I'll get the mare." she said, starting off in that direction, it would proubly only take her 5 min.


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Angel frowned. "I do not care what you think or say to me, Zen. I know what happened. You do not know how Felway and I love each other."


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(S) Siki stopped a man with a white mare, taking him into a back ally, she drew her sword. "The riens, please." she said threw her bandana. The man frightened, got off the horse and ran away, Siki sighed and grabbed the horse, putting it into a gallop, working her way back to camp.


message 485: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen snorted and picked her up by the collar. He was taller then her. "Let me tell you one thing, try anything and your head will be in the river by sunset." He threatened, his dark side coming out. "Felway is my brother, and you barely know anything about him." He said, no accent. he let her go and acted like nothing happened.


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Kia smiled. Things were definately getting interesting


message 487: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki made her way back and jumped off the horse, on the run whistling for it to follow, she did this fast and swift, for she didnt want any followers.


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Angel touched her neck and sighed. "How dare you. You have no self respect for ladies." Angel shoot up and moved inside the tent. She decided not to say anything any longer. No one would believe her, anyway.


message 489: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki held the horse by the riens. "Where'd she go?" she asked Zen. Angel was gone, and she was a bit relived.


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Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments ((There is no tent, Zen folded up))
Zen shrugged. "She got mad, since I told her that Felway would never get married to a dramatic person." He said casually hoping onto Attis.


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(S) Siki nodded. She wondered what the riding parements would be.


message 492: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments zen sat in the silence.


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Angel calmed herself and came back. "I shall tag along on this quest for the scrolls."


message 494: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki jumped onto the mare, it only had riens, no saddle, but a blanket, she liked riding bare back anyway. She kicked the horse into a trot, to get the feel of it.


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Kia put away her contraptions and prepared to follow them


message 496: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen shrugged. "Felway is riding with Siki, so you're riding with me." He said. Felway climbed onto Siki's horse.


message 497: by (S) (last edited Aug 17, 2010 10:28AM) (new)

(S) Siki leaned to the right, to turn around a tree, and then to the left. She slowed to a hault, next to Zen, so Felway could climb on.


message 498: by [deleted user] (new)

Angel nodded. She climbed on the back on the horse.


message 499: by Kat (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 688 comments Zen started with a gallop and watched as Felway got on. "Where next?" He asked.


message 500: by (S) (new)

(S) Siki looked at Angel and Zen, she looked back at Felway. "We head west, home." she said, preparing herself for anthing.


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