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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Hehe I just made three comments in a row. Now four.


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments haha ive seen that episode waaaay too many times!


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments oh that comment was a long time ago! oh whatever its really weird but right after i read ur comment jordan that episode came on! spoooooky!


message 54: by kero (new)

kero Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah


message 55: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough


message 56: by kero (new)

kero Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is rea


message 57: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred


message 58: by [deleted user] (new)

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.


message 59: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.


message 60: by kero (new)

kero has anyone noticed mice dont live for twelve years?


message 61: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Gotta love fiction :)


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

totally


message 64: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Tess O.o niiiiiiiinja!!!! wrote: "oh that comment was a long time ago! oh whatever its really weird but right after i read ur comment jordan that episode came on! spoooooky!"

thats creepy, like a premonition. *gasps* i must be physcic!


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
ANYBODY WANT TO TAKE CREEPY DEPRESSED PATHETIC 21 YEAR OLD MAXWELL HOME?

Baxter? Tess? Jordan? Repath? Juliet? Anybody?


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

no thanks im good


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
He doesn't really fit in the time era of myain current story sooo... But I think he would be good for Baxter's short stories. They could trade demented ideas


message 69: by [deleted user] (new)

kewlio


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Haha plus he'd scare me


message 71: by [deleted user] (new)

oooo wad u do to him???!!!! POOR MAXY!!!! Wahhhhh! *runs away crying*


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
*shivers* just read his description


message 73: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments NO WAIT! I want him!


message 74: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!


message 76: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman


message 77: by [deleted user] (new)

oooo i like that one!!!!


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!


message 79: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human


message 80: by Iriana (new)

Iriana (ibalbian) I think this exercise was awesome. Even though i didn't take part in it because you guys kind of finished lol. =p


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
No we didn't it can keep goin and going and going.

AND REDPATH ENNA GIRL WINS MAXWELL!!


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.


message 83: by Luna (new)

Luna (daughterofselene) | 87 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.


message 84: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((this one isn't depressing; just crazy))


message 87: by Laika (new)

Laika Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons


message 88: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments MariaCrazyChrysanthe wrote: "No we didn't it can keep goin and going and going.

AND REDPATH ENNA GIRL WINS MAXWELL!!"


YAY!

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.


message 89: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.


message 91: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.


message 92: by [deleted user] (new)

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria


message 93: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort


message 94: by [deleted user] (new)

Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((her name is already Rea))


message 96: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand
Shocked to find out she has two names


message 97: by Iriana (new)

Iriana (ibalbian) Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand
Shocked to find out she has two names
She fell in love with a donkey named YOU!


message 98: by Iriana (new)

Iriana (ibalbian) Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand
Shocked to find out she has two names
She fell in love with a donkey named YOU!
Likes to visit old people homes because she enjoys the smell of prunes and oatmeal.
She got in an accident and now one of her eyes are blue and the other one green


message 99: by Laika (new)

Laika Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand
Shocked to find out she has two names
She fell in love with a donkey named YOU!
Likes to visit old people homes because she enjoys the smell of prunes and oatmeal.
She got in an accident and now one of her eyes are blue and the other one green
Wishes to start a duct tape business.
Ans one of her powers is switching bodies with an old lady at the retirement home! But when shes an old lady she has black eyes, mouse ears and whiskers!


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse
Fur is brownish-reddish
lives in utah
Loves corn and hates sourdough
and her name is Rea
She has a little mouse brother named Fred
her parents died in a stiky trap.
She is good at stealing food, which helps support her and Fred.
Ate a peice of corn that was tainted by neuclear waste and got super powers! which were:
Invisibilty
Super-awesome ninja butt-kickin' skillz
has trained as a samari!!! but is more of a ninja!!!
She is secretly Spiderman
loves to eat frogs!!! ewww i know its gross!!!
She was attacked by an alpaca, and was then turned into human
Was then attacked by a llama and was turned back into a mouse.
Now she can control minds.
And eat burgers.
SHe knows Winnie the Pooh
She has a pet pickle who she likes to talk to on rainy afternoons
Her weakness is lemons. They severly weaken her powers.
But limes power her up.
One day ate a lemon instead of a lime by mistake.
She turned into an alpaca.
Her name is Murria
Is attacked by Voldemort
likes to lick sand
Shocked to find out she has two names
She fell in love with a donkey named YOU!
Likes to visit old people homes because she enjoys the smell of prunes and oatmeal.
She got in an accident and now one of her eyes are blue and the other one green
Wishes to start a duct tape business.
Ans one of her powers is switching bodies with an old lady at the retirement home! But when shes an old lady she has black eyes, mouse ears and whiskers!
So when she's an old lady she has to wear a hat and trim her whiskers to look like a regular person.
The retirement home is really full of evil old people with monsters in their mouths!!!


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