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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Not exactly sure where to put this but here it is!

Slowly build a character, each person adding a personality/general/physical trait. Then at the end, somebody can take him home and keep him.

Ok, first off, he's male


message 2: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments He's 21:

Male
21


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

He has green eyes.

Male

21

Green eyes


message 4: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother


message 6: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable

he enjoys reading


message 8: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy


message 11: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange


message 12: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.


message 14: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((so far, he sounds like a pretty depressed dude))


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((lol yes. Blame Baxter.))


message 16: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((Blame Baxter and almost everybody after Baxter!))


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Clare Bear wrote: "((Blame Baxter and almost everybody after Baxter!))"

((Baxter started it!


message 19: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P ((But we could have made him "go on with his life, push even harder to succeed after his cripple-ment!", but we chose to go the more morbid route))


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((hehe like always))


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((read q couple comments up. His dad died))


message 22: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((he can't live with his father if his father is dead....))


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.


message 24: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Thats okay))


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Has a horse that bites him everytime he comes near


message 26: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

You forgot to add mine!!!

he has a horse that bites him whenever he comes near.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
If you want it added, copy and paste the rest on. It's hard to keep it straight if they're all seperated.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

got it im really bad at computers soooo......


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
((Thanks :) ))

Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters


message 32: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Male
21
Green eyes
is half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)


message 33: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 30, 2010 05:48PM) (new)

Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.


message 34: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration
wishes he wasn't so horribly disffigured, depressed because everyone he sees is scared of him


message 36: by Laika (new)

Laika ale
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration
wishes he wasn't so horribly disffigured, depressed because everyone he sees is scared of him
he secretely fell in love with his sock monkey, Rosy, and they eloped to the Himalayas a day before Max's wedding with a very nice girl named Jasmine


message 37: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration
wishes he wasn't so horribly disffigured, depressed because everyone he sees is scared of him
he secretely fell in love with his sock monkey, Rosy, and they eloped to the Himalayas a day before Max's wedding with a very nice girl named Jasmine
His favorite flavor of gum is cherry.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration
wishes he wasn't so horribly disffigured, depressed because everyone he sees is scared of him
he secretely fell in love with his sock monkey, Rosy, and they eloped to the Himalayas a day before Max's wedding with a very nice girl named Jasmine
His favorite flavor of gum is cherry.
He had specially tailored one leg pink pants

((wow we are a disturbing group of kids. Hehe i just love how Baxter started this off on such q happy note XD))


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments This guy is starting to get pathetic.


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Male
21
Green eyes
Half Irish
Lives with his mother
Has a birth defect that has left half of his body horribly scarred and deformed, and the nerves in said half do not respond to signals from the brain so it is all completely useless and unusable
He enjoys reading.
His name is Maxwell, for most of his childhood everyone called him Max, while all the time he secretly hated the name 'Max,' this making him more angrier and angrier with humanity each day.
He never got teased about his disability but he is depressed because his whole life he'd watch other people do things he can't.
His dream job is being a football player (or soccer to all of the non-Americans.) But, he can't play due to his disability.
Turtles and fish make him happy
He is farsighted and his favorite color is orange
He doesn't wear contacts.
His father was killed by a rare disease, and Max has never spoken of his dad ever since.
He admires his really hot class mate named sally from highschool, but she hates him, and that makes him not want to love anyone.
He has dark brown hair
He has a passion for bananas
He is allergic to apricots, bubble wrap and glue.
He secretly loves watching "The Price is Right". He's watched so many times that he's an expert on naming prices.
Has a horse who bites him whenever he comes near.
He has four younger sisters
His four younger sisters are all blonde and are named, Angel (3 years old), Maxiumus (12), Jess (10), and Ellie (5 years old)
He loves his sisters and would do anything for them.
The youngest sister (Angel) is afraid of him because of his disfiguration
wishes he wasn't so horribly disffigured, depressed because everyone he sees is scared of him
he secretely fell in love with his sock monkey, Rosy, and they eloped to the Himalayas a day before Max's wedding with a very nice girl named Jasmine
His favorite flavor of gum is cherry.
He had specially tailored one leg pink pants
He has a dog named Rufus
He lives in a mountain city called Avacado, where he loves to visit their famous Avacado Springs (a hot springs) which is their main tourist attraction, although it has nothing to do with avacados.
he and Jasmine raised hairless llammas


message 41: by Laika (new)

Laika eeeew hairless lammas :P


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments lol :)========>


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments whats the point of raising hairless llamas? besides, everybody knows the real money's in alpacas.


message 44: by Laika (new)

Laika totally


message 45: by Blair (new)

Blair Zadallia | 51 comments Real cool!


message 46: by Blair (new)

Blair Zadallia | 51 comments I'm going to start one!Ok


Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear


message 47: by Laika (new)

Laika Female
12 years old
deaf in right ear
is a mouse


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Ok so I'm guessing max is done. Anybody wanna take the pathetic guy home?


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
I just realized how weird of a topic I made.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
MariaCrazyChrysanthe wrote: "Ok so I'm guessing max is done. Anybody wanna take the pathetic guy home?"

Sorry. Maxwell


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