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I am on the mend and able to partake of such things today though. :-) Hj, it's funny that you should mention listening to an audiobook, because last night I was cursing the fact that I still hadn't downloaded CUTYS as I had planned to do this past weekend. It would have been nice to listen to last night.
Josh, good luck with the taxes. We'll have the gelato waiting.
Johanna wrote: "Josh wrote: "I expect a giant bowl of virtual gelato upon my return!"
There will be a large bowl of all your favorite flavors waiting for your return. (...and 842 spoons.)"
:-D
There will be a large bowl of all your favorite flavors waiting for your return. (...and 842 spoons.)"
:-D

Is this question a Man Oh Man spoiler? :-D
Tina Kay wrote: "Josh, what's your secret for not writing a sex scene that sounds like insert A into slot B? How do you get across what's going on without making it sound like you're quoting a sex handbook? I was j..."
Actually I let KA Mitchell do most of the talking about writing sex scenes in Man Oh Man. ;-)
I don't know that I have any secret other than keeping each scene true to the characters -- and that means having a good grip on who those characters are before we ever get them in bed.
Actually I let KA Mitchell do most of the talking about writing sex scenes in Man Oh Man. ;-)
I don't know that I have any secret other than keeping each scene true to the characters -- and that means having a good grip on who those characters are before we ever get them in bed.
Tina Kay wrote: "Thank you for the well wishes, everyone! Well I survived my procedure (obviously), but I felt a lot crappier afterwards than I thought I would, so I never made it to my planned evening of guys with..."
Glad you're on the mend!
Glad you're on the mend!

Thank you for this. And also for your answer to my question. I've discovered that sex scenes are really not that easy to write - at least not good ones. And I have more respect than ever for one that is well-written.
Josh wrote: " -- and that means having a good grip on who those characters are before we ever get them in bed."
...and that works surprisingly well in real life too... LOL.
...and that works surprisingly well in real life too... LOL.
Johanna wrote: "Josh wrote: " -- and that means having a good grip on who those characters are before we ever get them in bed."
...and that works surprisingly well in real life too... LOL."
True!
...and that works surprisingly well in real life too... LOL."
True!

...and that works surprisingly well in real life too... LOL."
:-D Too true!

In this thread, I am going back to lurking-- I couldn't write if my life depended on it being here was an accident I swear.


They are also hermaphroditic, if I recall. So something for everybody. Essentially they fertilize each other.

Tender antenna kisses... Lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtgPAQ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtgPAQ..."
I must admit, it was quite sexy. Oddly erotic in a way.

In this thread, I am going back to lurking-- I couldn't write if my life depended on it being here was an accident I swear."
No, don't! Not after your insightful comment about how "having a good grip on who those characters are before we ever get them in bed" works surprisingly well in real life too!
If Lou would make one of those Word of the Day calendars, I'd buy it immediately!!! :-)
Here is the link for Merriam-Webster's free online calendar:
http://www.merriam-webster.com/word/a...
But that's not nearly as much fun as m/m themed word calendar would be... ;-)
Here is the link for Merriam-Webster's free online calendar:
http://www.merriam-webster.com/word/a...
But that's not nearly as much fun as m/m themed word calendar would be... ;-)

That happened to me last night at work, a scene popped into my head and it tumbled out of my fingers without my realizing it was there.

That happened to me last night at ..."
That happens to me. The hard part for me is coming up a story to go with the character and scene... :)

The funny thing is that I have had my story idea flipping in my head, I kept saying I was going to kill this character, then I was going to have him go missing and obviously he told me what happened to him.
I just have to share this first sentence.
He floated in air, his body swirling around like an angel; his wings were clipped and in place were two taut wire cords attached to his shoulder blades.
I mean... come on. Who just thinks that up?


Well, there was good and bad news with the taxes. The good news was...I earned one hell of a lot more money than I thought last year.
The bad news is, even paying estimated quarterly taxes, I need to come up with quite a bit of spare change before April 15th.
But it's done. The nightmare of taxes is done. Now it's just paying damages resulting from the train wreck. :-D
The bad news is, even paying estimated quarterly taxes, I need to come up with quite a bit of spare change before April 15th.
But it's done. The nightmare of taxes is done. Now it's just paying damages resulting from the train wreck. :-D
Hj wrote: "Given that last year was a sabbatical, that's good!"
Yeah, it really was. The first part of the year in particular when I took back all those rights to the bulk of my backlist.
I think I didn't notice because it was a brutal year financially for my nearest and dearest. So a lot of non-tax deductible money went out the door. This year everyone is doing better, so if I can hold even, it'll be a good year. Fingers crossed.
Of course that sort of depends on, um, WRITING SOMETHING.
;-D
Yeah, it really was. The first part of the year in particular when I took back all those rights to the bulk of my backlist.
I think I didn't notice because it was a brutal year financially for my nearest and dearest. So a lot of non-tax deductible money went out the door. This year everyone is doing better, so if I can hold even, it'll be a good year. Fingers crossed.
Of course that sort of depends on, um, WRITING SOMETHING.
;-D
Susinok wrote: "I sort of stay away from Pinterest and Tumblr. Goodreads distracts me enough from what I need to be doing."
Same here. If I see a picture I want, I snag it and save it to the computer for future inspirational use. I don't need one more account to keep track of.
Same here. If I see a picture I want, I snag it and save it to the computer for future inspirational use. I don't need one more account to keep track of.
Josh wrote: "Tina Kay wrote: "Josh, what's your secret for not writing a sex scene that sounds like insert A into slot B? How do you get across what's going on without making it sound like you're quoting a sex ..."
That makes perfect sense.
That makes perfect sense.
I subscribe to Shutterstock. I pay for every freaking picture I use. I don't always credit them properly, but I am most definitely paying for them.
Yeah, if I were doing covers I'd be doing things differently.
Lou, that's a good point about the artist/photographer. If I can, I sometimes retitle the picture with a title and name. Depending on where I find them, if there is a title and a name to go along with it. Often there isn't either one!
Lou, that's a good point about the artist/photographer. If I can, I sometimes retitle the picture with a title and name. Depending on where I find them, if there is a title and a name to go along with it. Often there isn't either one!


I participated, last minute, in a cover contest Josh ran sometime back. I found I was unable to bring one idea to conception because of the lack of available legal art. I used a couple of Shutterstock images, but there wasn't anything that worked well although I could have Photoshoped the heck out of them, but the issue would have been the same. Just not what I had in my mind. My non-writing question: Do you commission photography or artwork for your covers? If you use stock photo sites, are there particular sites you favor? Thanks for your time.

I can imagine in a lot of cases that showing your MS to your husband/wife/BF/GF/Pet rock could cause some issues if the other person doesn't handle their criticism delicately. And writing while on vacation - well, that certainly is dedication.

When I've finished my first edit of a story, I read it aloud to my sweetie. It takes a couple days since I only read while he's cooking lunch and dinner. He often has really bad suggestions which I ignore, sometimes has good ones and it's always useful to read the piece aloud - I catch all sorts of errors I'd otherwise miss.

So, I sometimes ask my guy to help me fix a plot problem, but it's risky - in 50% of all instances, he rips the plot apart and we have a bit of a good-natured shouting match. :) Sometimes, he's genius though.
A lot of people say that if you're serious about writing you should write every day. I agree. I don't do it as often as I would like, but I wish I could write every day.
As for vacation, I don't go anywhere, ANYWHERE, without taking a notebook with me at least. One never knows when one might get stuck in an elevator for a couple of hours! Or when you're waiting for your plane to arrive. Or, the best time, when you're on the beach, or in a comfy chair in the hotel room. Even when I'm on vacation with family, I usually bring a laptop for writing. Of course, even with my family I like spending time alone, so it works out that way. btw, not only do I always carry a notebook, if not a laptop, I always carry a book with me too. Just in case I get bored stuck in that elevator or on the train.
And I've never been stuck in an elevator, and I'm not claustrophobic, but I always wonder what I would do when stuck there, if it should ever happen.
As for vacation, I don't go anywhere, ANYWHERE, without taking a notebook with me at least. One never knows when one might get stuck in an elevator for a couple of hours! Or when you're waiting for your plane to arrive. Or, the best time, when you're on the beach, or in a comfy chair in the hotel room. Even when I'm on vacation with family, I usually bring a laptop for writing. Of course, even with my family I like spending time alone, so it works out that way. btw, not only do I always carry a notebook, if not a laptop, I always carry a book with me too. Just in case I get bored stuck in that elevator or on the train.
And I've never been stuck in an elevator, and I'm not claustrophobic, but I always wonder what I would do when stuck there, if it should ever happen.
I don't have an SO, so there's no one to share my work with that I'm close to like that. If I did have one, though, whether or not I share my work with this person would depend on them a lot. Do they like the genre? That would be the first question I think I'd ask. That, and can they be a good content editor? I'm usually reluctant to share my work with family and even some friends.
That being said, one of my friends who's trying to get published in the YA area has read one of my books and given me great feedback. I've also read her work and given her feedback. I was recently explaining my pacing issues with my second book and she said she would take a look at it. I laughed. She doesn't read M/M and I thought it was pretty great she read my first novel which was part police proceedural/romance with two guys. I looked at her and I said "you're going to read my threesome BDSM novel?" She then laughed and said "You take me to some strange places."
So, I've got a friend who will read it, and give good feedback, seeing as she's a writer who's serious about her own work.
I would never share my work with my parents. I learned that lesson years ago when I was a kid. I had my mom wondering if there was something I needed to tell her. Yep, never again. So, would I have an SO read it? I don't know. It depends on the person and how open they can be to the darkness I like to write sometimes.
That being said, one of my friends who's trying to get published in the YA area has read one of my books and given me great feedback. I've also read her work and given her feedback. I was recently explaining my pacing issues with my second book and she said she would take a look at it. I laughed. She doesn't read M/M and I thought it was pretty great she read my first novel which was part police proceedural/romance with two guys. I looked at her and I said "you're going to read my threesome BDSM novel?" She then laughed and said "You take me to some strange places."
So, I've got a friend who will read it, and give good feedback, seeing as she's a writer who's serious about her own work.
I would never share my work with my parents. I learned that lesson years ago when I was a kid. I had my mom wondering if there was something I needed to tell her. Yep, never again. So, would I have an SO read it? I don't know. It depends on the person and how open they can be to the darkness I like to write sometimes.
What Lou said is true about authors talking about what works specifically for them. You really do have to pick and choose what works for you.

I share my work with friends/critique partners I've met online. I'm part of a local critique group too, and I've shared a few chapters of my GLBT YA there, but not an adult M/M erotic romance...
Carlita wrote: "However, stock photo sites simply don't have the images I use for inspiration.
I participated, last minute, in a cover contest Josh ran sometime back. I found I was unable to bring one idea to co..."
I commission my cover art. I use Lou and LC Chase a lot. I've used Kanaxa and a couple of others. Lou usually has me buy whatever photos she's going to use from Shutterstock, which is easy because I've already got a subscription there.
I participated, last minute, in a cover contest Josh ran sometime back. I found I was unable to bring one idea to co..."
I commission my cover art. I use Lou and LC Chase a lot. I've used Kanaxa and a couple of others. Lou usually has me buy whatever photos she's going to use from Shutterstock, which is easy because I've already got a subscription there.
Lou wrote: "Carlita wrote: "Do you commission photography or artwork for your covers? If you use stock photo sites, are there particular sites you favor? Thanks for your time. "
Probably mainstream publishers..."
When LC was doing the covers for the Dangerous Ground series, she was working with a cover model and a photographer. But it's tricky because so much depends on getting the exact right model.
There's that one guy -- the model used on some of the AE books -- who gets used everywhere. I guess he's everyone's idea of the perfect book hero man. ;-)
Probably mainstream publishers..."
When LC was doing the covers for the Dangerous Ground series, she was working with a cover model and a photographer. But it's tricky because so much depends on getting the exact right model.
There's that one guy -- the model used on some of the AE books -- who gets used everywhere. I guess he's everyone's idea of the perfect book hero man. ;-)
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ETA: I have to have a bit of a medical procedure today. I can't wait until it's all done and I'm home looking at guys..."
Good luck :)