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message 151: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Maxy wrote: "It's a movie, actually. Directed by M. Night Shyamalan or however you spell his name."

OKAY!!! :D


message 152: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Hayden wrote: "Second."

HAYDEN YOU CHANGED YOUR PIC AGAIN. AGAIN, I SAY.


message 153: by [deleted user] (new)

I like my new pic, but i don't know if you can see it because it was really big...


message 154: by [deleted user] (new)

I HATE YOU PEOPLE! Just kidding, not really, but SERIOUSLY?


message 155: by [deleted user] (new)

It's kind of the same colors. Again, for Erica.


message 156: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I love you too!


message 157: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments *cowers* Did I start this?


message 158: by [deleted user] (new)

Alice Adelaide (Lavendarlol) wrote: "I love you too!"

Of course you do.


message 159: by [deleted user] (new)

No, I think Cassie did...


message 160: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Okay...*phew*

Then I unknowingly changed my picture while CASSIE went about creating havoc.


message 161: by [deleted user] (new)

You did turn it into a fad, though.


message 162: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Hayden wrote: "Alice Adelaide (Lavendarlol) wrote: "I love you too!"

Of course you do."


I was talking about Erica... :P


message 163: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, well, I love you too, because you didn't change the color.


message 164: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Annana Flambe du Mort (Erica) wrote: "You did turn it into a fad, though."

NUUUUUU


message 165: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments *raises hand* Is my pic okay?


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments hey, people i have a problem. My story is about this dude whos daughter got killed by an assissin, but ten years later he hes sent on a mission (because hes a marine) to kill the guy. Should he kill the guy without mercy, or forgive him?


message 167: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments KILL WITHOUT MERCEEZ.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments I expected that kind of answer from you, emily. XD


message 169: by [deleted user] (new)

It depends. Has the assassin changed into some quiet family guy and given up his past job, or is the guy still assassing people? If its the second one, you might want to consider killing him.


message 170: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I think he should kill him, but then feel terrible about it.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments hes the president of a country that wants to invade the U.S.


message 172: by [deleted user] (new)

Will he get caught if he kills him?


message 173: by Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (last edited Jun 20, 2010 10:03AM) (new)

Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments no, the government wants him to do it because hes a "Threat to national security". When i said "kill without mercy", i meant like, he tortures him before killing him


message 174: by [deleted user] (new)

no mercy!


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments I think that im gonna have him forgive him, then kill him quickly and painlessly.


message 176: by [deleted user] (new)

*lowers axe* aw okay.


message 177: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments NOEZ!!! I WANTZ NOEZ MERCEEZ.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Too bad. Ur going to have to live with forgiveness and a quick death.


message 179: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments NOEZ!!! XD


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments i just changed it again. He;s going to rot in a federal prison for the rest of his hard, miserable life.


message 181: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments It's still not as fun.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments i think it ties up the story better


message 183: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Yes, but still. I'm in a straight jacket, remember that. You don't just get thrown in here. >:-)~ <-Goatee


message 184: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I WANT A STRAIGHT JACKET! GIMME ONE GIMME ONE GIMME ONE!


message 185: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 22, 2010 09:32PM) (new)

Yes, put her in one, please.


message 186: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Oh be quiet.


message 187: by [deleted user] (new)

Never!


message 188: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments [image error]src="http://www.monkeydungeon.com/straight...

Dude, they sell them on e-bay. XD


message 189: by [deleted user] (new)

Nice.


message 190: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Wow. That is legit.


message 191: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Thanks.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments I am totally buying one of those.


message 193: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments And will you actually use it? That'll be the day...


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments yeah! I'm gonna wear it to school. :)


message 195: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Awesome. ;D


message 196: by Gabry (new)

Gabry (gabyhd) Straitjackets!


message 198: by Gabry (new)

Gabry (gabyhd) I wonder what people will say.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments probably something like "Wow, took ya long enough."


message 200: by Gabry (new)

Gabry (gabyhd) Maybe... Hm.


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