Help With Story Problems

[Isaac]

...Or not.

[Elliott]

It's true.

[[deleted user]]

No, I agree with Lavendar. The more you write, the better you'll get.

[Isaac]

If it's junk, how does it have an amazing plot?

[Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts]

ANd then you can skin it down to that then write more to add on to it, if that makes any sense :P

[[deleted user]]

Practice makes perfect :) Really, anyone who starts out writing will not be perfect the first time. Do you think Harry Potter was the first thing that JK Rowling ever wrote?

[Laura]

No.

[Isaac]

...Or was it? XD Nah, just kiddin'.

[Laura]

Yeah...I read a biography about her. Says she was writing since the age of 5.

[Ellen]

JK Rowling??

[Isaac]

I've been writing since I was three.

[Ellen]

On June 30th I've been constantly writing for a year :D

[Laura]

Emily, Zepikness Savior of the Muffins wrote: "I've been writing since I was three."

Heh. I've been writing since three too. But that's only single words...

Ellen ♥ wrote: "JK Rowling??"

Yeah.

[Isaac]

Laura wrote: "Emily, Zepikness Savior of the Muffins wrote: "I've been writing since I was three."

Heh. I've been writing since three too. But that's only single words...

Ellen ♥ wrote: "JK Rowling??"

Yeah."

Well, I read a little story I wrote when I was three about Casper the Friendly Ghost.... XD It was hilarious.

[Laura]

I can imagine...I was cleaning out my drawers some time ago and came across a story I had written in third grade. It was funny but the writing was horrible. I keep it just to remind myself I'm not that bad.

[Elliott]

I need a name for an amusement park in my story.

[Laura]

Um...is it where something good happens or bad happens?

[Elliott]

Eh. It's neutral. She's on a date.

[Laura]

:D that's sweet. Um....

I really don't know.

SIX FLAGS!!!! Yay for adrenaline junkies!

[Elliott]

Six flags could work because it's everywhere and my story isn't really in a specific place.

[Isaac]

Laura wrote: "I can imagine...I was cleaning out my drawers some time ago and came across a story I had written in third grade. It was funny but the writing was horrible. I keep it just to remind myself I'm not ..."

I LOVE looking at stuff I've written when I was like seven!!! It's horrible and hilarious!!!

[Laura]

:D I think we can all agree we had quite unique a senses of humor back then...

[Isaac]

I had to write a paper in the second grade on what I would do if I could do anything for a day or something like that, and one of the things included "making a portal in the TV and throwing my little sister inside to play with Elmo for three hours and then I would take her back out".

[Laura]

XD that's funny...I had a story about a treehouse that never really ended...

[Isaac]

I have this whole journal from the second grade. And I had like three first grade journals, but I have no clue where they went. D:

[Laura]

. . . SEARCH PARTIES AT ATTEN-SHUN!

[Isaac]

Come on, doggies!

[Laura]

Ruff ruff!

[Isaac]

Hey, Fido! ...Or are you Rufus?

[Elliott]

SHE'S UNDERDOG!

[Laura]

TAAADAAAA

[Isaac]

OH NOEZ!!! I'M SO SORRY!!!

[Mandy]

Alice Adelaide (Lavendarlol) wrote: "I do to. I may use it sometime, but Maxy, I don't care if you want it, since I was thinking of it for you. :) I have this thing about HATING cancer stories. I mean yes, some of them are really good..."

I know! I saw one that was about something else...and I totally blanked out the name of the disease..but it was a good book!

[Mandy]

Maxy wrote: "Okay, I just have a question. I've been having issues with background for Vigil.

Amelia needs to have a crappy life. Originally, I had a drunk, physically abusive father and a high-strung mother..."

I think it's better now. Much better! :D

[[deleted user]]

GAH! WHat do you do when you write from a boy´s point of view and it ends up sounding like a girl..And you can kind of write like al boy, but just not the personality you´re going for in your story???

[Laura]

Then you change the character to a girl. . . . I guess. Maybe you could give me the link to your story and I'll make suggestions...

[Isaac]

Boys are dull to write about... well, maybe it's just because I'm a girl... but then instead of writing a romance and just writing the feelings for girls, you write the "desires" for men. Am I right?

[Laura]

*shrugs* Go and read Percy Jackson books....

[[deleted user]]

YES! THANK YOU!

[Laura]

:)

[[deleted user]]

:D

[Isaac]

Oh, I've read the first two....

[[deleted user]]

Annana Flambe du Mort (Erica) wrote: "GAH! WHat do you do when you write from a boy´s point of view and it ends up sounding like a girl..And you can kind of write like al boy, but just not the personality you´re going for in your story???"

*shrieks* YOUR PICTURE IS OF A PINEAPPLE! We mustn't let Cassie see!

[[deleted user]]

I know. But everyone changed their pic and I had a breakdown. Maxy, please don't change your pic.

[[deleted user]]

But I don't like mine... *wob*

("wob" is a mixture of the words "weep/wail" and "sob")

[[deleted user]]

AHHH! DON'T CHANGE IT! OK, but if you change it, can you pick something black and white? Please? Before I have a breakdown?

[Elliott]

I'm gonna change my picture now! :D To something PINK! *gasp*

[[deleted user]]

*glares* YOU. WOULDN'T. DARE.

[Elliott]

You're right. I don't want a pink picture. :P

[[deleted user]]

Good.