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which is worse, though: a bad or weak ending? or a cliff-hanger? Or a non-series book that ends with unanswered questions?



I'm reading Kill Shot now. Hard to say which is my favorite-- maybe Consent To Kill?


In the middle of Sand Sharks

About to start Out on the Cutting Edge


now reading: Ready Player One by Ernest Cline"
But I thought she had the sperms frozen?

Four Cemetery of Forgotten Books:
The Shadow of the Wind
The Angel’s Game
The Prisoner of Heaven
The Rose of Fire
Enjoying them very much...

I don't like any of the three, but for me a cliffhanger is by far the most annoying. Close second for me, since I read for entertainment is an unexpectedly grim ending, something I definitely do not find entertaining.
Finished Might As Well Be Dead by Rex Stout, started The Snake, the Crocodile & the Dog by Elizabeth Peters.


Anita wrote: "Picked up the latest by Tana French, "Broken Harbor". Read about 30 pages but realized I was going to enjoy the series, so I returned it to the library and picked up her first one, In the Woods (no..."
Hi Anita, After you finish In the Woods you might want to check out our group read discussion of the book at http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5... These threads never close so you can continue the discussion.
In the Woods (found the link)
Hi Anita, After you finish In the Woods you might want to check out our group read discussion of the book at http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/5... These threads never close so you can continue the discussion.
In the Woods (found the link)



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Four Cemetery of Forgotten Books:
The Shadow of the Wind
The Angel’s Game
The Prisoner of Heaven
The Rose of Fire
Enjoying them very much..."
Great Writer, didn't realise he'd written anything other than The Shadow of the Wind.
???!!! wrote: "Derek wrote: "just finished: Star Island by Carl Hiasin.
now reading: Ready Player One by Ernest Cline"
But I thought she had the sperms frozen?"


Dottie wrote: "Just finished Gone GirlGone Girl I thought it dragged a bit in the beginning, but then Wham, I was hit with a great plot twister. I couldn't put it down after that. Then the ending. The author s..."
Hi Dottie, If you haven't already, be sure to check out the discussion of Gone Girl in our Group Read folder.
Hi Dottie, If you haven't already, be sure to check out the discussion of Gone Girl in our Group Read folder.

I agree wholeheartedly. I felt like the author just ran out of ideas so she just ended it as easily as she could, plus she changed the characters somewhat into ones I ended up not liking. After going thru that whole messed up book I really was liking certain characters, only to end up disgusted with them in one or two paragraphs. Very disappointing ending.

Thanks Donna - how did I miss it!!! Probably why I loaded this one on my kindle to begin with! I'm getting old and forgetful!

Now reading The Sand Castle Girls Never read this author.

Great book! I read it several years back then decided to pick up the audio book a couple of months ago. Len Caribou does an outstanding job of telling the story.
Curlyhair wrote: "Just finished Echo Park by Michael Connelly. One of the Harry Bosch series and a fab read."
Me too! I finished it yesterday. Just loved it. It was my first book from Michael Connelly...I'm looking forward to more.
Me too! I finished it yesterday. Just loved it. It was my first book from Michael Connelly...I'm looking forward to more.

Me too! I finished it yesterday. Just loved it. It was my first book from Michae..."
I love his books. Why don't you maybe think about starting at the beginning of the Harry Bosch series? Mind in my opinion they get better as they go on.

Really? Wow!! I've read the 1st few and they do seem to keep getting better. I'm still at the beginning of the series so to know that they continually get better is so great to hear!!

It tells the story Danny Maguire who has worked in parallel with the IRA in the nineties, but never been one of their ranks. He’s a killer and has been since the death of his brother Sean. Danny’s resolved to revenge his brother’s death and the opportunity arises when information emerges about the identity of the key players from the time. It’s a journey that will take him to America, where we’ve already witnessed a number of attempts on the life of Danny’s new target.
The idea of the story is a strong one and it’s easy to see why Sinclair was offered a publishing deal on its basis.
The main positive of the book for me is the skeleton of the story; as a storyboard or in synopsis, there’s a lot to like about the way Sinclair plays things out. The way it keeps switching location and characters to reveal aspects of the plot is pretty well handled. It has some of the energy and the drive that one would want from such a book and the core issues are left well-disguised right up until the points at which they are revealed.
The book also describes violence in a realistic way and avoids creating any romantic notions of pain and death.
It also has some pleasing humour running through it that provides a good deal of entertaining material.
I get the feeling that there’s also been a lot of research involved with this project and that creates a believable foundation to the piece, though at times the insertion of such information might be a little crude.
Where I think the work falls down a little and reveals the author’s lack of experience in novel writing is with the pacing, the dialogue and the way the key information is pointed out a little too boldly (at least for my taste).
Essentially the book could be shorter and, with a good edit, leaner and meaner (while still maintaining the warmer elements of the relationships and the very human perspective on ‘The Troubles).
Some of the description is heavy-handed. There are too many strings of adjectives which slow things down imperceptibly in a similar way that the friction caused by tiny air molecules will eventually bring a moving object to a halt.
Here’s a small illustration:
‘The bed looked deep and comfortable with large sky-blue satin pillows resting against its tall, pink-velvet button-fronted headrest.’
There’s nothing wrong in this, but the bed plays little or no part in the scene and it could be much plainer and slicker.
My thought on the dialogue is that the characters need to be more distinctive. Everyone has a very witty repartee that shows off that talent for humour and this might be worthy of attention. There’s also rather a lot
of exposition through the conversation and it’s a little clunky in that way:
‘God that seems like it was about two weeks ago,’ replied Marie. ‘It’s hard to believe that was only two days ago.’
With a little attention Sinclair’s dialogue could be a real strength – there’s a thin line here that shouldn’t take much to get across it.
Here’s another example of something that could be ironed out in an edit. It identifies a lot of things that are stated as obvious when they’re not – a little show-not-tell might not go amiss:
‘It was obvious from her expression that checking people in and out of the Lakeshore Hotel didn’t require too many qualifications.’
I wonder what the expression actually was – I’ve been practising in the mirror, but don’t think I’ve mastered it yet.
All-in-all, it’s a mixed bag. Lots to please a reader and enough room for improvement to suggest that Sinclair has what it takes to make it as a thriller writer if he’s prepared to work on a thing or two. I know that there’s a second novel on its way at some point and do feel that is likely to step up on this. Writing is a craft and those skills can only be learned through the doing and by being well-mentored and with these things in place I think that Sinclair can move on up the ladder at a fair rate.

I love Mo Hayder. Have read all her books. Gone is excellent.


I thought it was just okay. I don't really know what the hype is about. Yeah the endin..."
I really disagree on that. I loved the book and thought it was very emotional and hard-hitting even beyond the ending. The impact was really watching the family crumble as the parents struggle with their feelings about their son's guilt or innocence. Very powerful stuff.










I really enjoyed The Way of Shadows.




Recently listened to Brought to Book by Anthea Fraser. Interesting premise, a biographer who becomes the "detective" while researching her latest subject. Lots of twists and turns and just maybe a bit of a stretch at the end but enjoyable. Very well read too.
Next up, was my first ever BBC radio dramatization. Agatha Raisin The Curious Curate and The Buried Treasure by M.C. Beaton. Penelope Keith portrayed Agatha and did a wonderful job, of course, I'm a big fan of Keith from her days on To the Manor Born.
Next up, was my first ever BBC radio dramatization. Agatha Raisin The Curious Curate and The Buried Treasure by M.C. Beaton. Penelope Keith portrayed Agatha and did a wonderful job, of course, I'm a big fan of Keith from her days on To the Manor Born.


Is Anthea Fraser's book comparable to, say, The Thirteenth Tale?
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