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The lady was standing there, holding a bloodied bag in one hand. ((like, a canvas bag, sort of like a re-useable grocery bag, i think))


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Serena was gone, and Hama had tears in her eyes.


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'What?' Anvi said


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'WHAT?' Anvi thundered


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'THINGS!!!!!!' Screamed Hama, suddenly enraged.


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'Just... Things.' Hama replied sheepishly.


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Hama let herself be led away.


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Hama wlaked through and screamed.


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AAAAghh!


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((end))


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Marki opened her eyes and glared at the ceiling.


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"How could I have made such a fool out of myself?" she wondered.


message 63: by [deleted user] (last edited May 11, 2010 10:27AM) (new)

She couldn't make up her mind, should she have just done it? Or endured it? But he was such a jerk!


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Doing something, anything, would be better than lying there, wallowing in her own regret.


message 65: by [deleted user] (last edited May 11, 2010 01:12PM) (new)

Trey was the boy next door, who she had teased and tormented since preschool.


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"What's with the dork hat?" she called.


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"I-" he turned bright red, "My Mom gave it to me for my birthday- if I don't wear it she'll feel bad..." he could only mumble, and it made her angry somehow. His problems weren't half as bad as her's!


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But she couldn't go back home, not yet.


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The librarian rose her eyebrows at Marki as she entered.


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But then she wished she hadn't come, when she remembered who would probably be there.


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She punched Mirki in the arm. "I remember you!"


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'AAACHOO!' everyone in the room turned and looked at the tall girl.


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The blow hurled her against the back wall.


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If that was just a sneeze, than what would a yawn do to her? She backed away.


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But the librarian gave a ninja-scream strange for such an old lady, and jumped onto the counter.


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It was right then when she bumped right into him.


message 77: by [deleted user] (last edited May 15, 2010 02:50PM) (new)

that's ok, this may be a dead end.


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(New one works. We should stick to fantasy for this sentence story thing.)


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(lol sure.)

Lena woke up in the middle of the woods. Everything was dark.


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Everything was blurry, but she could remember an eirie, (spelling?) green light, and the feel of cold hard metal on her skin. She shuddered.


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(ACK! I can never remember.)

a snapping twig behind her made her shift nervously.


message 82: by [deleted user] (last edited May 17, 2010 10:28AM) (new)

She started and turned around to see a dark figure.


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He stacked the wood and started striking the flint and steel together. she still couldn't see the person's face.


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He was tall and thin, with hair that hung in his eyes and a sad, compressed mouth that probably never smiled.


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"Y-yeah." she said, all the while thinking, this is so weird.


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A shiver ran down Lena's spine. Protect them from what? She stuttered the question to him.


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Something hit her in the back of the head. She stumbled, dazed.


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Next thing she knew the boy was shaking her. "We must run!" he said.


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And the next thing she knew they were running through the woods with mysterious footsteps behind them.


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'Errmm...'


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'uhhhhh....'
((guess not.))


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"It's your fault!" he yelped.


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"You eat apples," he accused.


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"No, they're just good at smelling apples."


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smack! She hit the tree and fell flat on her back.


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But he was gone. She lay in the grass, and heard the strange padded footsteps behind her, and.....


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Apples. The word echoed formidibly in her mind. An apple-y wiff floated toward her.


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She was too limp to move


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'Up!' he said, forcing her.


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'uh...' She did not understand.


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