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message 1: by ★ Jess (new)

★ Jess I like it! Though it seems a bit stereo-typical? Maybe if the main character is really something to remember? Mind you, i havent read it yet, but i will...


message 2: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments I think its really awesome! I love Raine, love your prologue.

My story: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6... The Wind and the Water, one of my most popular ones…


message 4: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments It's good, but a little…disturbing…


message 5: by Felicity (new)

Felicity Hollow | 53 comments vote skulduggery in the poll:) and ill happy dance and ill put in a good word with santa this year for you i know him i swear(laughs secretly, evil plan is working)


message 6: by Autumn (last edited Mar 25, 2010 01:47PM) (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) before you ask: no its not me secretly asking for help because "why am i still here" doesnt refer to "why am i still in the world" its "why am i still part of this group of people"

why am i still here
written by yours truly

work, work, work.
the calls of my job come harsh and cruel.
but i work, work, work.
drown out the hurtful words i hear.

alas, i have finished now.
but what i have done is not good enough.
and before i can even blink.
my job has been stripped of me.
and given away by authority.

is it because im not good enough?
someone else, always better?
my hard work ignored.
but i dont give up.
i try to help.

but all that comes from this is.
ridicule, criticism, back stabbing.
as if i have intruded…
on something i myself created?

it makes me question.
why i am even a part of this world?
i am not needed.
and i certainly dont need this.

so why do i bother?
why am i still here…


message 7: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel "My Name Is Meagan- why am i still here "
Really nice i loved it gd job :) :)


message 8: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel Hi ppl this is a link to some of the stuff i have written:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

hope u read and enjoy it

;)
:)


message 9: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel I read chapter one of "Love and Self Love"
by hannah
it is, to be honest great
although i only read the first chapter it shows that u have a great talent!!

keep on writing! :)


message 10: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel thanks i read ur poem 'regret'
it was awesome!!
i loved it
keep on writing great strong poems!


message 11: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel no problem
and i'll keep reading
:)


message 12: by Elle (new)

Elle (2cute4u) | 89 comments lol :D


message 13: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel :)


message 14: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) regan and ameena: thanks. :D


message 15: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel no problem
;)


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

HAPPY EASTER


message 17: by Elle (last edited Apr 03, 2010 07:11PM) (new)

Elle (2cute4u) | 89 comments eat lots of chocolate bunnies!! lol - wait don't. it'll kill ur thighs ;)


message 18: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel haha
we dont celebrate Easter here in bahrain
but u guys have fun
;)


message 19: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) it is Easter! imma go on an egg hunt today... but its in a field so its not really a hunt :P


message 20: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel have fun
;)
hope u find some eggs
:P


message 21: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) haha. thanks.


message 22: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel no problem
:)


message 23: by Elle (new)

Elle (2cute4u) | 89 comments omg i don't celebrate easter either!!! :)
*bonding moment* ♥


message 24: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel finally someone like me
:)
:)
wat do they do in Easter either then looking for eggs and decorating them?
is there anything else?


message 25: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) we go to church, cause its the day that Jesus was ressurected from the dead.


message 26: by Ameena (new)

Ameena Adel oh


message 27: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) Well I think that we can both say
That I messed up pretty bad yesterday
I’m not sure what happened there
But I’ve been crying everywhere
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...

Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I’ll be picking up the pieces if I can see them through my tears
Please don’t walk away from me now
Before I get the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I get the chance to tell you that I love you

I had this awful dream last night
Woke up and I couldn’t stop crying
And I really hope my nightmare isn’t coming true
‘Cause without you I don’t know what I’ll do
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...

Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I’ll be picking up the pieces if I can see them through my tears
Please don’t walk away from me now
Before I get the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I get the chance to tell you that I love you

Soon I’ve gotta talk to you
Even though I don’t know what to say
And no matter what I try to do
I don’t know how to make this okay

Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I would try to pick up all the pieces
But I can’t see them through my tears
Please stop walking away from me now
Before I got the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I got the chance to tell you that I love you

Well I think that we can both say
That I messed up pretty bad yesterday


message 28: by Joel (new)

Joel (jp223) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
still has not been edited a work in progress


message 30: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) Joel wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

I read the description where it says "A bloody end," and I'm afraid of blood so... :(


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Im trying to figure out what to write i started writing something but hated where it was going!

anyone have any ideas of what the main theme could be about??


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Ummm... I Love Fantasy Type Stuff Like Vampires, Ghosts, Angels etc. But Also Mystery Type Stuff That Gets You Thinking... I Just Cant Figure Out A Storyline..


message 33: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments write a murder story that involves the supernatural


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

AWESOME!! I Totally Just Had An Idea!! Thankyou!! :D


message 35: by ☺♡M♡☺ (last edited Jun 21, 2010 01:53AM) (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments You're welcome :))) Glad to help


message 36: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5... and in return, can you read MY story? Just asking, you don't have to if you don't want to XD


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Of Course i will! :D


message 38: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments SANKA!


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Im Really Enjoying It :D


message 40: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments Thanks… can you comment/review?


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

sure :D


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Im almost finished my first chapter so when im done would you review it aswell?


message 44: by ☺♡M♡☺ (new)

☺♡M♡☺ (moonlanpersonyahoocom) | 56 comments Sure! Awesome possum! :)


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks :D


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

It's Quite Short Its More Of An Introduction Than A Chapter


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure :D


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)


message 49: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) Regan ♥ wrote: "Meagan. With an A. wrote: "Well I think that we can both say
That I messed up pretty bad yesterday
I’m not sure what happened there
But I’ve been crying everywhere
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...."


Thank you :)) I'm mainly into poetry 'cause I can never focus enough to finish a story =___=


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