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ali  ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ (time_wont_fly) | 198 comments Mod
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Personality:(at least three good sentances.)
History: at least three good sentances.)
Wings: (Picture, Color, and wingspan)

message 2: by MOVED - CHECK BIO (last edited Apr 06, 2012 11:43AM) (new)

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Name• Linlee Stone
Age• 19
Gender• Female

Flock• # 1
Rank• Leader


She has brown hair so dark, people mistake it for black. She has piercing blue eyes and a light tan. She usually dresses in ripped or worn down jeans with a gray tank. She always has on her combat boots. She's 5'7 and her hair goes down to the middle of her back. She usually tries to keep in a ponytail. Her bangs are divided above her left eyebrow and most are swept to the right. It has a look that she makes by brushing or combing it with her hands upward, making it look wavy. Oh yeah, and you'll never see her wear jewelry. NEVER

Personality• Linlee is fun, dangerous, and cautious. She's creative and a creative fighter. Her hobbies are singing and writing. She loves fights and having fun. She can be sarcastic and has a sense of humor. You can call her funny....If you like bad jokes, but she usually cracks a good one once in a while. She won't pretend to be someone else, she will always be her and it will stay that way. Isn't afraid to disobey or punch someone in the gut. Loves making her enemies mad and annoyed. She hates the School, Whitecoats, Erasers, and anything that's a threat. She loves adventure and a good adrenalin rush. Yeah, so what she's part eagle? She can still kick your butt. She can be secretive and knows how pull a lie off. She knows how to convince people of almost anything, so well you could say she has compulsion.

History• Her parents weren't the best. She learned that sometimes it's better to be on your own, then have someone you love that doesn't love you back.

Wings• Finland Golden Eagle, 15'4 ft wingspan, gold, brown, with little white.
Other• She has compulsion Weapon• She uses anything available and can come up with ways to make anything a weapon. She usually has a knife on her somewhere, hidden out of sight. If she doesn't have that, well, she's good at combat either way. Kin• A sister named Rose

message 3: by MOVED - CHECK BIO (last edited Apr 06, 2012 11:46AM) (new)

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Name• Rose Stone
Age• 10
Gender• Female

Flock• # 1
Rank• Whatever Rank a 10year-old would get


She has light brown hair with blonde highlights. She's 4'5, but tall enough to kick you butt. Her ears are pierced with little blue hearts in them and she has thick lashes for a young one. She's pale but muscular, making a really cute 10yr old. Loves dresses and being a girl.

Personality• Rose is a sweet little flower. She has the cutest smile and is soooo sweet. Yeah, whatever. She's feisty and hates stupid Erasers. She makes smart comments, and when she doesn't something is wrong. She doesn't run with others from a fight. Instead she walks up to the person and kicks them between the legs. Yeah, awesome for a ten-year-old huh? Oh, and she has good hearing, so she knows some words said by potty mouths.

History• She will say words you don't want to hear if you ask. She ran away with Linlee. She learned, she fought, she was her. She hates Erasers like all.

Weapon• Her smile. One minute she's giving a huge smile, the next you're in a ditch and being punched to death

Wings• White, 9'2ft wingspan,
Other• She has super speed and her older sister is Linlee

message 4: by yael (last edited Apr 09, 2012 04:29PM) (new)

yael Name: Zaina Arvillain

Age: 17

Gender: female

Flock: #1

Rank: Battle Captain/Warrior/Scout


Personality:Zaina is bold and witty and rarely smiles. It takes alot to get her to smile and she hates romantic tactics. She loves being outdoors, animals, sweet things, spicy things too. She chooses actions over words and is laid back and charismatic. She loves to fight and is an excellent fighter.

History: Her greatest fear is her past. She won't go into major detail about it, but if she trusts you she will tell. The only possible family she has is her brother.

Wings: (the blue one)
It's 9'1'' wide

Other:~She has an older brother.
~Her weapon:
~She can mimic other people's powers and keep them, she can create illusions, hypnotize poeple and control their dreams. She can also control fire.

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Hey! What ya' think of Rose?

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Name: Malia
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Flock: 1
Rank: Scout
Apperance: pretty girl Pictures, Images and Photos
Personality: Malia is very daring and adventurous. She isant afraid to get hurt or stand up to someone twice her size. She loves to laugh and laughs almost all the time. She is also happy and smiling and is hardly seen sad. She does know how to be serious and quiet though but thats only in really serious situations. She is very loyal to her friends and has a big temper
History: Malia doesnt really remember her past. All she knows is that she was born in Texas and she had 2 older brothers. She believs that her mom died after she was born
Wings: Harpy Eagle, 58.3 Wingspan, Black and Wihte Strips on the inside and a dark grey on the outside
harpy eagle Pictures, Images and Photos
Other: Has Amazing Strength and is a Fast Flyer

ali  ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ (time_wont_fly) | 198 comments Mod
Name: Cally
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Flock: 1
Rank: Co-Leader
Personality: A word to describe Cally is fiesty. She is always on her toes and moving. She can keep the Flock smiling, even in bad times. She is always smiling. She loves to help the underdog. She is a loyal girl. She will never let you down, and has a good team spirit!
History: Cally grew up at The School, it was her only life. She was often experimented on more, because no matter what they did she would always keep smiling. She has a diagonal scar that runs down her back from where they experimented on her. The whitecoats made a game out of her, they always would see who was they first to make her break down and cry.
Wings: 14 ft., White with soft browns and blacks mixed in.

Other: Can control water.

ali  ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ (time_wont_fly) | 198 comments Mod
•●๋•Aero•●๋• [Mad Hatter] wrote: "Name: Zaina Arvillain

Age: 17

Gender: female

Flock: #1

Rank: Battle Captain/Warrior

Apperance: looking.

Personality:Zaina is bold and witty and rarely smiles. It takes alot to get her to s..."

Okay just a few things... All Charries are warrior in a way. They can all kick butt. So I know I should of mentioned this earlier, but the postions are:

Also I will add Scout on here if I know what it is!!

Jade the Valiant (honeysun258) Name: Jewel Nightlock
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Flock: none
Rank: none
Appearance: looking
Personality: Jewel is the girl who has no flock and is kind and compassionate to those who she meets. She's really intelligent, and whens she needs to be, can be very dramatic. She's a really shy person, but once she trusts someone and gets to know them, she can be a chatterbox. (Like someone I know...Ali)
History: When Jewel was born, her parents gave her to the Whitecoats, thinking it was the only way to save their daughter, because Jewel was having a hard time with her heart. It was pumping iregularly fast. Jewel then was taken tothe School to be tested on. She escaped when she was 11 when she escaped from that dreadful place. She escaped and lived on her own, occasionaly stealing from people to try and survive.
Wings: 7'5, dark brown and easily blends with dirt. Looking for pic.
Other: Has never known her family, lives with no one, and later finds Flock 1, and hopes to join them. Hasn't descovered her powers yet(don't know anything yet)

message 10: by yael (new)

yael we already have a leader

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yael nah it's s'okay just thoguht you should know :P

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yael welcome


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yael i finally finished my charrrie yay..

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yael ja~

ali  ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ (time_wont_fly) | 198 comments Mod
Name: Bekah
Age: 12
Gender: F
Flock: 1
Rank: Normal
Personality: Bekah is an independant girl, none the less she loves the Flock. You often find her with the flock, just hanging out. She is Carefree, and doesn't care what people think. She is a awesome Fighter and will kill, but only if she has to.
History: Bekah grew up at the school. She hated those Wack-job scientists, but she has to admit they did a good job with her wings. They would test her powers by putting her in a dark room and letting Erasers attack her. She has a fear of darkness, now.
Wings: 15ft. They are an off-white with a mix of Gray, black and a russet brown
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Other: None

Age: 7
Gender: F
Flock: 1
Rank: Normal
Personality: May is a sweet girl, though she often relies on the Flock to comfort her. She loves the Flock, and fears that without them, she would be nothing. She often makes the day brighter for the Flock, due to her sweet innocentness.
History: She was subject to the school. She was tortured, and still has nightmares about it. It is often Linlee or one of the Flock members cooing her to sleep at night.
Wings: 8 ft., Pure white

Other: None

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jade (juliaskim) Name: Samuel (Sam) Lee
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Flock: 1
Rank: Normal
Personality: Sam is very carefree and laid-back. He doesn't spend much time thinking, and acts impulsively. He hates saying sorry, or anything that has to do with crying. He isn't very sensitive about other people's feelings.
History: Sam wasn't born as a test-tube baby. He lived with his parents that he didn't really like, and was actually glad to be given away to the school at first. Then he found out that they did bad things, and he tried to break out. They tortured him badly for trying until he did get free.
Wings: Black, somewhat purple, 18 ft.
Other: Sam can lift things with his mind and turn invisible.

Name: Jessica Lee
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Flock: 1
Rank: Normal
Personality: Jessica is very polite and kind. She is very sweet and usually doesn't lose her temper. She is very good at biting her tongue and not bursting her temper. She can fight well, but she doesn't like to harm unless she has to.
History: Jessica loved her parents, unlike Sam. She was devestated when she was kidnapped into the school. She was horrified, watching her brother being tortured, but kept sweet-talking the scientists. She finally attempted to run away, but failed.
Wings: White, 15 feet
Other: She can sweet-talk and walk through stuff.

message 18: by MOVED - CHECK BIO (last edited Apr 07, 2012 08:07AM) (new)

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Name• Jake Lays
Age• 18
Gender• Male

Flock• # 1
Rank• Normal, Go To Strategy Person(That K?)


He has black hair and is well built. He stands 5'7. He normaly wears jeans and gray tees. He has white skin that is slightly bronze from being outside often.

Personality• He loves being outdoors. He plays basketball, soccer, and tennis. He's fun and has a good sense of humor. He knows how to get anyone to get up and dance. He loves a good party, and hates strict people. Strict people to him are Erasers. Dumb, boring, and he wants to get the heck away from them.

History• He grew up at the school with some others. He broke out and joined Linlee's(#1) flock. He met Zaina and now is always trying to get her dancing.

Weapon• His foot, fist, knees, elbows, and head. He basically wants to punch you to death
Wings• Black, 15'6ft wingspan
Other• He has a crush on Zaina. He can control air and reads minds once in a while. He's stronger than most of the flock. Oh, and he cooks. ;)

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yael [sees the other section] [claps] :D

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) LoL *bows* :D

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yael :P

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) LoL

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Gonna finish making him

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yael okay

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Almost done! Eeek!

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yael yay!! :D

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yael it's done yay!!

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Yup! :DDD

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) (Bye!!!)

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yael (peace~)

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yael yay your back :)

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Never mind, gtg again

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Ugh! I hate when I get on then hav ta get off

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) BACK!!! YES!!! :DDD I'M BACK!

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) :DDD YES!!! I'M BACK! OH YEAH! YAY!!!

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yael back my internet connection got cut off..

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Ahh, well, I'M ON!!! :D

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) :DDD

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yael XP whats going on

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yael Izzy99 ~* I Love Books *~ wrote: "Hey! What ya' think of Rose?"

an awesome 10 year old >:D

ali  ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ (time_wont_fly) | 198 comments Mod
Name: Jaz
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Flock: 2
Personality: Jaz is kind and nurturing, but don't get on her bad side. She is loyal and strong, fierce and fiesty. Jaz can kick butt, and has a hard time looking after the Flock. She is the one to k=atke control, to be the leader.
History: She grew up at the school. She was tortured every day with experiment after experiment. Though, in all of her pain she was the one telling the kids it would be allright, that everything was okay.
Wings: Blackbird, Jet Black, 14 ft.

Other: None

Name: Blaze
Age: 14
Flock: 2
Rank: Normal
Personality: Blaze is fiery (like her name). She packs a powerful punch and will never say no to a fight. She often finds herself challenging the leaders, but after it all ends she is a good addition to the flock.
History: Blaze, like the rest of the Flock, grew up at the school. She challegned the scientists. She was inspried by the ones who had escaped and tried it herself with Jaz. The two helped out other mutants and started a Flock.
Wings:Cardinal, Red with tints of Black brown and white, 13 ft.

Other: Got her name because of her wings.

message 46: by MOVED - CHECK BIO (last edited Apr 09, 2012 10:10AM) (new)

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Name• Moe Livia
Age• 16
Gender• Female

Flock• # 2
Rank• Co-Leader


She has light brown. She has soft green eyes and she has pale skin. She has nice curves and stands 5'2. She has short lashes and soft pink lips. She wears skorts and pretty tanks often. She is always in a pair of small boots that have a one to two inch heel. Her hair goes two inches past her shoulders, so it's short. She has a cheerleader appearance giving she plays soccer.

Personality• Moe is a fun loving girl. She never turns down a party, but she always follows the rules. If she ever brakes them, she punishes herself mentally. She takes it as her job to help the others do the right things, and make sure the flock looks good. She loves jewelry and dresses. She has never been to a real part or birthday ball, so she has never worn anything too fancy. She's a smarty pants. She's good at math and literature. If you pass her room while she's in it, you can hear her on her guitar, playing and singing along to Taylor Swift in harmony. She's a dancer. She does soccer and hates races.

History• She doesn't have any siblings. Her parents died in a fire and she was the only survivor. She met the flock and joined. She's loved to so far and has only had one Eraser attack. She got badly injured after it and hopes never to meet anything or something as bad as it.

Wings• Bald Eagle, 13'8. Add pic later
Other• She has has super speed. Weapon• She always has a knife or pepper spray bottle hidden on her. She usually has them hidden in her boot. Kin• None

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Can I make a flyer? Where he/she isn't in a flock?

MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) Name• Harmony Lihn
Age• 15
Gender• Female

Flock• # 2
Rank• Normal


She has blonde hair and blue eyes. She stands 5'5 and wears contacts. She has amazing curves and is a beauty. She has pale skin and nice cheek bones. Her legs and arms are slim, so she can sneak into small places.

Personality• She's an athlete. She takes care of her little sister at all costs. She does soccer, cheer leading, gymnastics, rock climbing, track, swimming, and more. She loves art and spying. She hates gossip and being bored. She likes fashion, but finds Moe annoying. She has a fear of being attacked, where she'll go still and stay that way for who knows how long.

History• She escaped from the school with her sister. She found Moe, Jaz, and Blaze and got welcomed to their flock. She hates adults.

Wings• Hawk, 15'6 wingspan, brown with specks of gold. (Add pic later)
Other• She can get through to anyone. She can control air and sense things before they happen. Weapon• Pepper spray. Kin• Her sister, Evaline

Name• Evaline Lihn
Age• 5
Gender• Female

Flock• # 2
Rank• Normal


Light brown and frizzy hair. She has blue eyes like her sister. She is 4'3 and doesn't look old. She looks cute and compared to girls her age she's pretty.

Personality• She's shy and trusts no one but her flock. She isn't much. She loves coloring with crayons and sleeps in often.

History• Same as Harmony's

Wings• Raven, 10'4 wingspan, black
Other• She doesn't know any of her powers yet. Weapon• None Kin• Her sister, Harmony

message 50: by yael (last edited Apr 09, 2012 07:25PM) (new)

yael Name: Micah Arvillain
Age: 17
Gender: M

Flock: numero dos!
Rank: normal//fighter

Personality: He takes his job seriously. When he arrived at flock two, he parted ways with his sister. He usually tells everthing to his sister and loves her best. Micah is the brotherly type, but when you irst meet him, he's unsocial and the oddity in the flock.

History: He's been through thick and thin with his sister and suffered greatly.

Wings: Wingspan.:17 ft Wings.:Falcon
Other: He loves animals and has a big heart. he hates egotistical people.
~He can summon the dead and time travel

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