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message 1: by Summer (last edited Feb 24, 2010 08:52PM) (new)

Summer | 349 comments Name: Kamen Barringer

Age: 18

Apearance: Short black hair that sticks out over his forehead, blue eyes (kind of a black irish look to him), cream colored skin, a light splater of freckes arcoss his nose and cheeks, pretty hot frankly, about 6'1" with lots of lean muscle, has little facial expression except when he gets you alone and then he lets it all out on you, has a lot of physical pressense.

Personality: He's a party animal, he's wreckless, bitter and mean for some reason, wouldn't kill anyone willingly but he wouldn't let you know that until his hands were on the trigger and he was trembling (kind of important for this story. He hates Briny because he thinks she knows something. He got drunk at a party and some bad things happpened out in the woods that he's willing to kidnap to keep concieled.

Things You know about this Charcter so far: He's out to get Briny and even kidnaps her. You know he did something bad involving Jay, probably at the party the other weekend.

Characters Past: He lives in Nomad (really small town in British Columbia). He sort of knows Briny. He always persued her when she came back to town, always hitting on her outside the gorcier store, making her uncomfortable on perpous. He never got why she didn't like him. He's pretty arogant. They went to school together up intill Briny moved to Seattle when she was eight.

Where you think he'll end up: In jail or prosecuted at least for various things. Maybe comitting suicide.

What I want help with: He really needs a reason for being so nasty. I was thinking rich kid who's parents broke up when he was ten but that seems a little cliche. Help! Oh yes, and redeeming qualities.


message 2: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
*sings* I love his evil-ness..and the fact that he lives in BC


message 3: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments I'm confused. BC?


message 4: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
*facepalm* British Columbia


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Nah, he lives before the birth of Christ. Just kidding, that was rude and sarcastic. I apologize.


Maybe he's so mean because he was abused as a child.


message 6: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
ahahahahaha, I'm sorry, even though..ya, it was still kinda funny.


message 7: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Oh haha. Somehow I red that as he loves BC. Dislexic tendencies. Sorry.

Abused child, it could go somewhere like that.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Excellent.


message 9: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Still kind of need some more bulk up stuff.


message 10: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments A last name would be great to.


message 11: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
oooh, I'll help with the last name!


message 12: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
is he Irish?


message 13: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments It could be anything. He just sort of looks that way. As long as its like, European it's probably good.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Maybe he really has a thing for Dr. Pepper.


message 15: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments I like that! Haha. I'll put those in the tent he hides Briny in instead of water bottles. Thanks!


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

You're welcome!


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Could he like KISS (the band) too? For some reason...idk...well...you don't have to use that.


message 18: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments I'm listening to the paramore song right now... I could see this blaring from his headphones and Briny catching a bit of this as she walks by him on the street hehe.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Wait, which Paramore song?


message 20: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Nevermind, stupid mistake. Looking at the wrong post haha. WOW summer, wow. Listening to KISS right now haha.


message 21: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
I'm trying to get a last name...uno momento...my list is in progress!


message 22: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments You have so many lists! Do these things just collect over the years?


message 23: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
...um..yes. yes they do..lol I just started the lists this year. *grins*


message 24: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Haha. Nice. That's probably something I should do.


message 25: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
olo, maybe


message 26: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Kemen Olo sounds nice. I like that, thanks! Where's it from?


message 27: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
ahahaha oki I have to laugh now.

olo is my variation of lol

I was basically jsut saying lol....

do you still want me to post the list?


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Summer wrote: "Nevermind, stupid mistake. Looking at the wrong post haha. WOW summer, wow. Listening to KISS right now haha. "

Oh, gotcha. KISS it shall be, then?


message 29: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments hahah! Seriously? I thought it was greek or something. I'm so dumb sometimes haha. A list would be great. Thanks!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Summer wrote: "Kemen Olo sounds nice. I like that, thanks! Where's it from?"

haha, I know what it is, but I like it too.


message 31: by Ky, The Name Ninja (last edited Feb 14, 2010 10:23PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
last names:

Armitage
Athill
Ballantine
Barringer
Bellamy
Blackwood
Bosswell
Caldwell
Crawford
Ewell
Fales
Flanders
Fleming
Garfeild
Garrison


well this is how far I've gotten so far..theses are just the ones (up to the start of G ) that sound good with his first name


message 32: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
Summer wrote: "hahah! Seriously? I thought it was greek or something. I'm so dumb sometimes haha. A list would be great. Thanks!"

Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Summer wrote: "Kemen Olo sounds nice. I like that, thanks! Where's it from?"

haha, I know what it is, but I like it too."

you guys rock.

don't worry Summer, my list continues..I just have to type up more.



message 33: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Kamen Barringer works... so does Blackwood. It sounds a little bit more mysterious.


message 34: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
olo, cool.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

I like Barringer and Olo. Wait, Olo makes me think of Ono, with makes me think Yoko, and that just makes me think about John Lennon.

Barringer.


message 36: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
*?*

olo


message 37: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Olo could still possibly work. What do you guys thing, Olo, Blackwood, or Barringer?


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Blackwood or Barringer. I'm sorry, now that I've made the whole Olo/Ono connection, I can't stand that.


message 39: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
ahahaha. Agh, they both work...hmm. how exactly do you pronounce his name? Kay-min/Kay-men or Kah-men?


message 40: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Kay-men.


message 41: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
Kay, so I am pronouncing it right. *sighs in releif*

Barringer sounds the coolest...to me.


message 42: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Kamen Barringer. Me likey, thanks!



message 43: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
no problemo


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Sounds pretty swell.


message 45: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments I still sort of need more stuff to suport is simple hurt and meanness.


message 46: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
yes..hmmm...


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

I say he was abused.


message 48: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
abused..*nods* soudns good to me


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Squee! 21 Guns!


message 50: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
good song


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