Descriptions (Key to Good Writing)

[Isaac]

Kkkrrriiissssss....

Be a dear and teach me how to actually write.

[Elliott]

His flaws are all on the inside. But yeah, I get what you mean. Hmmmm... thinking, thinking, thinking.

[Krys]

Emily, Zepikness Saviour of the Muffins wrote: "Kkkrrriiissssss....

Be a dear and teach me how to actually write."

Haha o.o What do you wanna learn?

[Krys]

Leslie Noel (Lavendarlol) wrote: "His flaws are all on the inside. But yeah, I get what you mean. Hmmmm... thinking, thinking, thinking."

Yeah, that makes sense. If it's contributal to the story/plot line then leave it like it is.

[Isaac]

How to be an author after my sad excuse. *headdesk* Ow, I already have a headache....

[Elliott]

I gave him more flaws!

[Krys]

Emily, Zepikness Saviour of the Muffins wrote: "How to be an author after my sad excuse. *headdesk* Ow, I already have a headache...."

I'm sure you aren't a sad excuse :D Seriously, if you want, I could give you some tips.

[Krys]

Leslie Noel (Lavendarlol) wrote: "I gave him more flaws!"

Awesomeness. What are they? :)

[Krys]

Leslie Noel (Lavendarlol) wrote: "I gave him more flaws!"

Awesomeness. What are they? :)

[Isaac]

Kriss wrote: "Emily, Zepikness Saviour of the Muffins wrote: "How to be an author after my sad excuse. *headdesk* Ow, I already have a headache...."

I'm sure you aren't a sad excuse :D Seriously, if you want..."

I am a sad excuse. And I would love to hear tips.

[Elliott]

They are up in the description earlier. Missing tooth and big ears.

[Krys]

You are not a sad excuse. And what areas of writing would you like tips on?

[Isaac]

*headdesk* I don't even know where to begin....

[Krys]

Leslie Noel (Lavendarlol) wrote: "They are up in the description earlier. Missing tooth and big ears."

Ah, okay. Cool. Well, I must say your discription of him is excellent ;)

[Elliott]

Now I just need to find a place to stick it into my story without it sounding totally random and out of place.

[Jo]

i reccomend metaphors for poems and similes for descriptions...
metaphors are much more romantic...

[Elliott]

Isaac wrote: "Leslie Noel (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Anyone know how to creatively describe a character? Because one can only write He had blue eyes and brown hair and a really pretty chin so many times before it get..."

I do that a lot too.