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[Keita]

consequently federick douglass getting mad when they dehumanize slaves.However he still want the African American natural right.For instant when Sofia teach them how to read the master don t like.Generally frederick Douglass deosnt like when the master separated the family team far away.truly Frederick Douglass lot of stuff about huimanitythe.furthermore Frederick Douglass decided to fight back with covey to take his humanity.Nevertheless Frederick Douglass his honest about his activiy.Therefore he went to the NY to stopped discriminated the slaves.

[Nyanbinghi]

Keita wrote: "consequently federick douglass getting mad when they dehumanize slaves.However he still want the African American natural right.For instant when Sofia teach them how to read the master don t like.G..."

hi miss you have good ideas but be careful with the use of the past time and the 3rd person in present. acceptable job

[Justine]

Good work, Keita! You did a really nice job using all of the transitional words. Just be careful to reread your sentences - some of them are not complete. For example:

"Truly Frederick Douglass lot of stuff about huimanitythe."

You want to be careful about writing things like this on the Regents, so just be sure to read everything a second time before handing it in!

- Ms. Justine